Naruto: Card Draws Begin in the Shinobi World

Please stop writing about the Sage of Six Paths. He's dead. If I were that powerful, I could just revive and fight myself. Why would Kaguya Otsutsuki need those two useless guys, Naruto and Sasuke? There are so many variables. A mere wisp of consciousness remaining in Yin-Yang Chakra doesn't need to be portrayed as incredibly powerful. A dead person is a dead person.

Edison Chen, Daniel Wu, me, and you holding your phone [look]

I already said it was searchable, but you still argue with me, wasting my time looking for it 😅 and then deleting the comment. I'm speechless. (; 一_一)

Use your brain, though. Teachers at the ninja academy keep records of students, including their strengths and weaknesses in ninjutsu and taijutsu. It's really strange that the assigned Chunin don't look at their files. Ninjas are primarily focused on intelligence gathering, even if their combat abilities drastically change later on. But the core of the story remains the world of ninjas.

If the Third Hokage had gone to the battlefield during the Battle of Kannabi Bridge, none of the subsequent events would have happened. In other villages, the Kage went to the battlefield, but the Hokage didn't. 🤫 The children were sent to their deaths, while the adults stayed at home. Where leaves dance in the air, fire continues to burn; seedlings ignite, fueling the flame.

Gravity can overcome light, but that depends on the level of gravity. Naruto could break free from the weak gravity of Planetary Devastation with his body, so how could it possibly overcome the Glint-Glint Fruit? Do you think it's a black hole? Talking about ability without considering its limits is just being a jerk, you know?

I've read over fifty chapters, but I instantly lost interest when I got to the Loulan chapter. Minato and his wife are still dead, and Naruto is still an orphan who doesn't know his parents. Earlier, it was said that the protagonist wanted to leave Konoha because he saw so much darkness there, but he ended up living a cowardly life! If the protagonist continues with this spineless personality, this book won't be a hit.

Could it be this?

One thing comes to mind: the transmigrators who travel through Naruto are all quite strange. After gaining great power, although they often oppose the First Hokage's political propositions, they don't seem to implement any political reforms. They don't do the old Japanese approach of combining the court and the military, or establish a samurai government.

The biggest flaw of this book is its lack of a central theme; it's just going through the motions, without any clear goal. Even having a ridiculous objective would have been better.