Become a Sick Nun

I just finished the latest chapter, it was very well written, but can you stop asking the heroine to be a good-for-profit boy? After getting the artifact through this experience, I will probably have to give away those hard-earned genius treasures when I return to the sect. To be honest, the protagonist doesn't even see his contracted beast Pixiu. , Every time he accompanies the protagonist on adventures, gives him something, and the protagonist returns this and that. He treats his brothers and sisters with 4 spiritual roots and 5 spiritual roots, and treats them better and more generously than he treats his own contracted beasts. He cannot tell the distance between the near and far, and he has become the extractor of heavenly materials and earthly treasures for the sect and others.

I hope the author will work hard and make the novel fat and raise Yun Kai fat!

The previous writing was quite good, but at the end it fast-forwarded like crazy. After obviously still practicing the results, I went into seclusion, and then I solved the big problem after exiting the seclusion. The ending was really sudden. . . What a pity

It's a very good book. The heroine is well portrayed and has a clear mind, and the supporting characters are also very good. But in my opinion, it's unfinished. The pace of the next few scenes is very fast, and the story of the fairy world is not written. It ends before the mastermind behind the scenes is removed. It's a pity for such a good book.

Please update, it's so beautiful😭It's really good It's not good enough.

The heroine is so charming (✪▽✪) I love this kind of heroine. Good luck, author.

In the early stage, the protagonist was created in a lawful and bottom-line manner, the supporting characters also had their own characteristics, and the plot was interesting. It was very enjoyable to watch how to turn the tide and save lives. After coming out of Lingyun Secret Realm in the middle period until the end, the author basically no longer focused on portraying the supporting characters. Rather than strength and charisma, it is obvious that the protagonist relies more on luck to obtain resources and favors from NPCs in the camp. The contradictions and conflicts in the plot are very bland. At this time, the plot direction is actually invincible. The writing is It's very lonely - disputes are not a whetstone for sharpening oneself, they are just a passing performance by the clown. Treasures will fall from the sky, upgrades will come naturally, progress is not urgent, and friends are not needed. People like Yueshen and Jingming are nothing more than the difference between small tools and big tools. I can't find the bright and refreshing points of human nature, and I become very tired watching the whole journey. Fortunately, the author finished it in time, alas. Of course, the author is indeed very ingenious in analyzing logic, which surpasses many contestants who wrote articles about cultivating immortals in the same period.

I like to watch movies with a bit of emotion, traditional cultivators with at most one or two spiritual pets, and don't like the animal world.

Well, this heroine is portrayed extremely well, and I have to admire the author. The heroine of this article is not one of those very popular typical characters. For example, I am arrogant and domineering, and I am the best type in the world. I am not the Virgin type who tolerates everyone and everything, nor is I the Mary Sue type who is loved by all men in the world. The heroine has a very high IQ, a thoughtful mind, and excellent luck, but the magical thing is that you will feel that the heroine is very ordinary, so ordinary that she is just like an outstanding person around you and me. She doesn't have the attribute of having her own BGM when she appears in the spotlight, but she is down-to-earth and reliable, and she can naturally solve any problem as long as she is there. He is a person who has good control over everything he does, and he is truly portrayed very well.

I don't understand why it's always emphasized whether there is CP or not. The storyline is exciting and it's fine with or without CP.

Good book. There are not many fantasy novels that I can read so much these days. How can I read the fantasy of male videos? Every one of them looks like the reincarnation of a bad guy. Just those villains who are looking for trouble. To be honest, the quality of the children of big families is so poor?

Congratulations to the author for launching a new book. The content is good. I have saved it and invested in it. I will occupy a floor. From now on, I will be the veteran of new books! (Pictures: Things about contribution points)

Over two hundred chapters have been written, and there is not a single serious fighting scene. Then the protagonist reaches the golden elixir perfection. The reason why fairy tales are so good-looking is that the endless descriptions of fighting scenes and detailed descriptions should not be the top priority? What on earth is this about? The whole story is full of analysis and narrative. The protagonist wins out of nowhere. How did he win? How did you win? What move? No! ! !

It's so beautiful. The world view is huge. The heroine is self-improving and smart. It's one of the good books I've read these days. Recently, there seem to be a lot of fairy tales without cp. It's so cool. A simple female protagonist is enough to satisfy me 😌

I cried. This is the second good book on cultivating immortals that I have read in as many days. I burst into tears.

Got the latest chapter. I obviously feel that I have been raising it for a long time, but it still disappeared in an instant.

I cried, this was a mess, and then I realized it when I looked at the back, and I cried, oooooooooooooo

I hope there will be some explosive updates from time to time😍😍😍

I didn't read the rest of the story, but my impression of reading the first hundred or so chapters was that the logic was okay and the writing was okay, but I didn't feel happy. It was very strange. It gave me a feeling that the protagonist should have rebelled as a counselor in the Machiavellian Theater next door and was forced to become an immortal.

It may not be very vivid, please forgive me~☺️ Fight to the end with the so-called "son of destiny", and fight against the mastermind behind the attempt to replace the way of heaven - Yun Kai, the immortal cultivator. Frail and sick, less than sixteen years old - mortal Yun Kai.

Yunkai fan I tried taking pictures with tablets and mobile phones, and ended up showing both colors. I drew small walnuts and swallowing the sky. Because Yunkai has a thunder attribute spiritual root, purple and lightning elements are useful

Preface: Bodhi comes to Yaochi, Yaochi is filled with immortal gates, and this immortal gate leads to the secular world.          ，，          ，          "，"，，                "Fushan?" A lazy voice came from the sky, and the woman suddenly felt a huge hand pressing on her shoulder, forcing her to kneel down.                                                                                                                                                                                         <br          "，？"，                   The charming fragrance emanated from her body, and in just a moment all the cultivators in the fairy mountain knew that she was awake.                                                                                                                                      .          ，""                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       She disappeared without a trace.          ， All the disciples of Tianye Sect looked up at their ancestor.          ，，，          ，，                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      .          "？"，          "！"，          ， He had already lost half of the battle, but he was not willing to accept it. This sky-covering formation has been activated, and his magic power is about to be completed.          ，，，，，          ，，""          ，，，                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    . She slowly opened her eyes, and it was as if a huge gap had opened in the sky and the earth, and the cold daylight shone on the "sky-covering formation" that turned into dust.          ，；，                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              The cultivators in Kunlun Fairy Mountain did not notice that she had left, let alone that she had returned.          "，，"，                                                                                                                                                                                                            .

Many key parts were mentioned in one stroke, and the passage repair part was skipped directly, as was the small walnut part, and many things were not fully explained. I clicked to finish the article. I should have read the comments first. Sorry.

Big cheers for the author! What a great article... Keep it up! Why not update it? I hope it will be updated soon! All at once

The author's book has made visible progress compared to the previous one. Whether it is the writing style, the heroine's character and behavior, or the plot structure, many authors tend to fall into fixed patterns and thinking after writing for a long time. Every book is the same. I gave up on the last book because it had too many settings, and the heroine's personality is not likeable and a bit weak. There are no problems with this book for the time being. I hope the author will continue to work hard and vote for support.

I really don't know how to draw, I feel so sick and weak (┯_┯) I'll make do with it

I was confused when I saw the finale. The story is not finished yet... What happens after the fairy world? 😥😥

The writing was quite good in the early stages, but it became more and more perfunctory in the later stages. Many things were just brushed off. When I saw the finale, I was shocked. I thought I had missed it. It was so messed up.

Although it is a finished novel, I still want to talk about it. Originally, the heroine is self-reliant and smart, which are all very good qualities. But after she cured her body of leakage and started to go down the mountain to take on missions and experience, she still maintained her own mind and ability, but others became fools. In addition, the message that person brought to her after rebirth made it a direct matter of preparedness and unpreparedness. She lost her original story-telling feature of using her brains to deal with powerful enemies and only when both sides were evenly matched, and turned it into a simple and enjoyable story. The story also lost its flavor and became increasingly unwatchable.

It's been more than ten days since I started reading, and I'm late.