Gundam 00: Reversal of Tragedy

The author's paragraphing and dialogue can be studied and strengthened, which will increase reading fluency. The paragraphs are too long, and there are no paragraphs all night. The same goes for the dialogue, which gives people a feeling that it is too crowded and difficult to read.

It feels like the protagonist doesn't care about keeping his identity secret at all, and has too much trust in the characters in the plot. Why does the protagonist think that Louis will not tell anyone, Juan Jiang will not report the secrets of the gods, and it is okay to leave directly after stopping the Trinity. If Louis and the others have to know that Gundam saved Nina, they can just show up and fight Nina away, or Gundam shows up and flies away after the incident.

I submitted it. I read some chapters and the writing was pretty good. Come on, give it a try!

Gundam 00 A classic

It's hard to persuade a damn ghost with good words. What do people like Juan Jiang say? It may be the habit of not admitting defeat in the profession, or the blessing of the will of the world. She will not listen to anything you don't tell her to do, unless you tie her up and lock her up for a few months to let her calm down physically. Can a few words persuade these reporters? Update Update Update

A paragraph is too long and is not suitable for online reading. It is best to break it down into smaller pieces.

Author, can you go back to updating once a day as before?

Give it 5 points, 4.9 For anime

OoIn fact, there is no room for intervention. After all, there is a happy ending. Most of the people who die are necessary sacrifices to affect the direction of the characters. If you want to win, you must change the plot drastically.

In the theater version, the Space Battleship of the United Army uses a super large pseudo-solar furnace (and it can be three red). Author, don't you want the protagonist to build a mobile suit like Shi Xielan that can turn the tide with the combined power of MS and MA? The combination of Xinanzhou and Neo Zeon is also good. No matter how strong the MS is in its own energy, carrying the entity consumes the number of weapons. The number of beam muzzles is limited. When encountering the global military warships and mobile suits, how can the four Gundams of that day be defeated? At the end of the first part, there were only thirty pseudo-solar furnaces and the entire army was almost destroyed. There are five green solar furnaces, and the 00 Gundam uses two. Can the remaining three be combined together to make It's a machine that's even better than the 00. In theory, there's no problem. The 00 Gundam and a small plane can coordinate two solar furnaces. It's not a problem to reconcile three green furnaces. It's not impossible for the remaining pilots to use the red furnace. The Healing Angels in the theater version are so awesome. Add a few more red furnaces and Oli will give them.

Alas, there are very few Gundam novels, and this layout is really annoying. Mainly because when the characters speak dialogue, if the dialogue is not divided into sections, it will look very laborious and terrible.

Could the author please post some pictures of the machine used by the protagonist?

Voting 4 times a day didn't save this book.

This is basically a copy and paste of the original work. The dialogue is exactly the same. The protagonist is basically a dispensable person. He adds too little and changes too little.

To be honest, this protagonist is really enough. . . . . . Do you think I would say that? 🤫 The characters began to fall apart in the middle of the current progress, but at least the author will try to make up for it. Until now, your protagonist has left us with no idea how to describe it~ I can't complain about your long paragraph together. Why don't you want to divide it into paragraphs? For example, the protagonist got off the plane directly after chasing away the three villains. You said there was foreshadowing, but now it seems that it is better to just do a paragraph: "On a certain day of a certain month of a certain year, the protagonist expelled so-and-so and protected so-and-so, and then made the decision to establish diplomatic relations with so-and-so. On this day, the wheels of history changed again." This is a method similar to voice-over. It needs to be clean and neat, not embarrassing, and is a good way to skip the plot. 😅 And for me, you waste too much pen and ink on those "superfluous people", like Sha Ci's sister, whose IQ is low and has no status or ability, just keep it... The more foreshadowing, the higher the requirements for writing skills. Obviously you are not capable enough and overturned~~ To know what readers like to read, readers often don't know, but they know clearly what readers hate to read! When writing an article, you must be steady. The first is the outline, then the setting, and finally the detailed outline. With these three things, you will have no difficulties in the early stage, but in fact, the most difficult thing is precisely these three. Then it's about personal writing skills and preferences. Young writers can't just rely on their feelings. What you need at this time is motivation! And just persist!

Good guy, I thought I was dying of books.

When will Secret Angel be recycled?

The author doesn't know if you are a newbie, but I feel like you are following the plot completely. There is nothing innovative except saving people. It won't last long, and your body won't be able to take advantage of it. It's more like a fire brigade, busy saving this and that. For example, Professor Elfman, if you save him once, others will stop messing with him! ? The logic is different

Comrade author, please update the chapter as soon as possible

Comrade the author will update new chapters as soon as possible

Will the author update every day next month?

Comrade the author is stepping up to update new chapters

Comrade the author is stepping up to update new chapters

Comrade the author is stepping up to update new chapters

Comrade author, please update the chapter as soon as possible

Has the book been sent? Are you still updating?

The author, please give me a hug─=≡Σ((( つ•̀ 3 •́)つ

When will the author resume daily updates?

Will the author update it soon?

How often does the author update a chapter now?