Warhammer: Raven of Delirium

I also write about Warhammer, but my girlfriend likes to read yours. 😠

The plot is okay and worth reading. It's just that the writing has been so poor recently, it's hard to read. I really can't find Ai to polish it up.

The author has never claimed to be a professional hammer guy (I bought the gw novel and painted the chess pieces), but even so, I feel that I am a cloud hammer. I think there are problems with the storyline and can be discussed rationally. I will modify it if possible. But if you are insulting and nitpicking, don't blame me for using the big hand of subspace to ban 🙂.

I think what I have written so far is pretty good, but the plot needs to be sped up a little bit. The 1 million words you want to write like this may not be enough to finish the story from The Great Expedition to HH. Come on, author.

In the past two days, I watched Lao A on Douyin. Oh my god, it's crazy. It's exactly the same as Warhammer. Warhammer actually has a somewhat beautified feel. It's amazing. The empire is so bad, and there are inquisitors. There are no inquisitors in reality. This is awesome.

The popularity of Yaya is really visibly lower than that of other loyalists.

There is a section later where my feelings about the protagonist's character change. It's obviously not the early character feeling. It feels more like the Astartes Chronicles book next door, Dodds. This kind of weird idea will cause trouble. In the early stage, it was not reflected in the protagonist at all.

I just hope that the author will not think that Chaos is too invincible in the future. After all, according to the latest settings, the official intention is to strengthen the empire and weaken Chaos. If it is slapped in the face later, it will be uncomfortable. Moreover, the current situation is that even hatchlings below the level of Iron Man and Demon are immune.

Although the current plot has not yet become the Astartes.

The strength of the four gods dropped sharply

It feels a bit boring. The protagonist still can't change anything. Moreover, in the updated chapters, the protagonist rarely appears, and they are just following the plot.

The Primarch of the 19th Legion Raven Guard, the first four pictures were created by the boss of Station B Meteor R.

I basically skip the Great Rebellion in all Hammer articles, because as long as I want to write about it, the Great Rebellion must be a success. I have already tasted enough (difficult to see). I will wait for a while and then come back to read it. The maggots in front~ Let's explore it later~ At the end, a hanging picture is attached

It's a shame that the Crow King returns so late that there's only so much he can do. Also, will the Super Crow Guard be able to get rid of it, the kind that is truly pure and pollution-free? What is the protagonist's future position? Is he the Crow King's personal guard? Are there any changes with the Terrans from Horus's gang? I'm quite looking forward to the protagonist's interaction with Sharokin in the future. ps: It's both a psychic prophecy and a fear tactic. Where did the protagonist come from as a bat cub? Why not send him to the Eighth Legion as soon as possible 😏

The protagonist's future development direction can be like Mephisto, the Little Crow King. Mephisto can use spiritual energy to condense his wings on the battlefield and directly transform into an angel. The protagonist can completely inherit the original body's ability like Mephisto and become a shadow after the Crow King fully accepts the origin of the subspace and goes to the subspace.

Five True Lords

How will the plot go in the future? With Astartes as the protagonist instead of the Primarch, it is the most difficult to write the later stage! Not leaving the legion? Then there is always one original body on top, and the original body leaves? As an Astartes, it is destined to be difficult to obtain high political power and status! Or do you want the protagonist to leave the Legion? Create a special team? Specializing in serving the emperor or Lao Ma? That doesn't work either! Any other ideas? Can discuss

The description of the Void Shield in the later period was breakdown, which looked very bad and should have been changed to overload. Why should it be changed to breakdown when overload was clearly used before?

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Hh Crow Guard livery

I forgot the front and forgot the back. Anyway, brother, come and clear the dust too! Dorne: As the primarch of the 19th Legion, you must set an example (happy dusting) Corax (wearing a little yellow hat): (looking at the wings) Do I want to dust too?

The Crow King's Big Intention

Raven Guard Power Armor

Give the protagonist some nice names and whether he has any good brothers.

Do you have any recommendations for Warhammer-type articles? Thank you.

Is Qidian anti-theft so good now?

The author is great, the plot reaches its climax but there are only two chapters every day, which is very hard😖

How is the army organized? How many people are there in a company?

That's it. Spend seventy or eighty yuan reading a book