This Is a Role Playing Game

[This book is finished, no unfinished eunuchs, no poisonous points among the public] The author of this book, Da Hei Libra, is my favorite niche author! ! His "Sacrifice of the Alien God" is also very interesting, but the rhythm is a bit weak at the end_(:зゝ∠)_ but the various settings are very interesting. For example, the protagonist has a magic book that makes Krypton San stronger (￣y▽￣)~* "You become stronger and you become crazy." (Now that I think about it, the author is really a setting wizard👍) Back to the topic, talk about this book, just talk about it. The rhythm of this book is much better than that of "Sacrifice of the Alien God". I didn't disconnect at all when I saw the end. Even at the end, I was still not satisfied, and I wanted the author to write eight hundred chapters of it (￣y▽￣)~* Although this book is about a role-playing game, it is actually more similar to a simulation business game. The freedom of the protagonist is slightly restricted. However, one of the great pleasures of a business simulation game is to have uncontrolled accidents! Uncontrollable is what I like (￣y▽￣)~* Those who have played Emperor Cheng 2 and other similar games should understand this kind of fun. As for this book, to be precise, the protagonists of all the books written by the author, according to other old readers, seem to have a little weird thinking... Anyway, I accept it well. I think this kind of character is very interesting. I have long been tired of the protagonists with other characters. Finally, I would like to share my opinion on the wonderful demining below: 1. There are too many psychological descriptions (?) I think it's just right, I was happy watching it, and I kept nodding my head, the protagonist is quite approachable in daily life 2. The life span of the vampires is short You should wake up and just copy the traditional setting. You say there is nothing new, and if it is innovative, you say why don't you follow the traditional routine? Why are you so difficult to serve? 3. Plot jump I didn't think... Isn't the game just about doing whatever you want... This book is like no heroine, like a single heroine, and like a harem. In short, it is a very wonderful Schrödinger state. But it's not poisonous at all. Some readers below also said that it's not poisonous at all. As for the writing issue, I personally think that my taste is tricky enough, and I think it's okay. The author's writing style is not that majestic, but more like a delicate nebula. The writing style seems to be something you read on station B. I like this kind of daily and bright style.

The introduction is very attractive, but the plot is incoherent and confusing. For example, why would you help an unknown person? If it is to protect the village, it would be fine, but many people died, and more importantly, it is to protect the girl. The most important thing is to protect the girl. There is no benefit. Moreover, the plot is very ridiculous, almost all in the water, I have no idea what you want to express, and there is no emotional foreshadowing. The two children saved in the front are basically the background wall, and this fighting method is also very discouraging. Basically, the subject matter is a good one, but the content is not good. Are you writing about time travel? What you wrote is obviously about online games.

The setting of the novel is my favorite type, but the plot arrangement of the protagonist is unsatisfactory. As the protagonist of a novel, he always gives readers the feeling that he is forced to do things. The plot is too rigid. I have seen many comments about this chapter and they all say that it is completely poisonous.

The setting is okay, but the protagonist knows that the so-called acting is actually real history, but it still feels like an "irresponsible" stand-alone game. Moreover, after living in the real world for several years, I still feel immature and unstable. I hope it will improve in the future.

Lilith (Naixi)

I believe that a large number of people will feel awkward when they see the angry and laughing part in the second chapter. The author obviously didn't understand the circumstances under which people would have extremely intense emotions. Extreme emotions require certain prerequisites. You find out that someone has brutally murdered a loved one, and you experience extreme emotions. You will have extreme emotions when the Japanese abuse your compatriots. But if you see a wild dog bite to death a foreigner who has nothing to do with you, will you laugh in anger? Impossible, at best he would be a little angry. Because you have no sense of identity with this foreigner. Your anger will be more about the dog offending a person. Now the protagonist is a person from another world who has traveled through time and has not integrated the memory of a person from another world. Your only communication with this world is some special knowledge (probably a general worldview and extraordinary knowledge, I have confirmed this repeatedly). Then you see goblins trying to roast humans and laugh in anger, which is untenable. There is a world between you. You have never experienced the intrusion of your kind by monsters day and night, nor do you know the person who is about to be roasted. Your only starting point for saving people is "this is a human being", someone of your own kind. Laughing angrily in such a trivial position is obviously untenable. What's more, you are just an ordinary 17-year-old young man. Are you really not afraid of monsters? I was so angry that I exploded, and I went up to fuck them. This is unrealistic. The author should have established an image of justice, but the problem is that you failed to establish it. If you had said at the beginning that this was a promising young man with a sense of justice, it wouldn't be so abrupt. In other words, it won't be a problem to write this when the protagonist's character is really established. Because readers will replace it themselves. It is under this circumstance that this angry laugh becomes a poisonous point, a poisonous point placed at the beginning. This is easy to dissuade. Just like you eat fish. At first you get a fish bone stuck in your throat, and later you feel uncomfortable no matter how delicious the fish is.

After watching the Witcher and Vampire parts, I didn't want to read it. It's not bad, but it's not a highlight either. It's just like a simple running account, tasteless and a pity to throw away. The point is, the protagonist has no characteristics or impact in either the role or the plot. There is no goal and no plot. It feels like writing an essay with 800 words.

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"The story of my harem when I went back in time to change history and have descendants of my bloodline"

This introduction, this title. Totally hit my point of interest

The biggest poison in the early stage is the identity of the protagonist before time travel. What kind of alliance, interstellar... A nerd's identity is stronger than this one A mediocre identity will make the sense of substitution stronger.

Have you heard of the Robot War Egg? , Your name is too copycat, this is a role-playing game. I'm really not making trouble, why don't you add a few more words

It's interesting to read the introduction, but I guess it's not for me.

. . . . The first part was okay, but after 30 chapters. . . .

This book gave me the feeling that I created a wife for myself, and it also gave me the feeling of having a harem. The witch in the front is okay, but the vampire girl in the back, I personally feel it is a bit far-fetched, but I am very good at becoming a vampire ancestor 😏. I personally have the desire to read it, but I don't want to read it after reading it. That's it

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It's a very good book, but the lifespan setting of the vampire is not very vampire at all.

A strange work with no end in sight.

Your updates are now every two days

. . . . (*^-^)ρ(*╯^╰) Updated

Monthly updates are fine, don't update every year. . . The author of that book was updated when he had cancer and went to the hospital. Come on, author.

Another book is finished, but there is still no group. There are already more than ten books, and there is not a single group. Please be a human being.

The number of this chapter and the few comments

Come on, let's end Cavan as soon as possible. It's been setting the stage for so long, and I really want to know how it will end.

Ah, at least you have to finish him off

I kept it and forgot about it, but suddenly I remembered it and looked it up.

It's so pretty, wow wow, I don't want a eunuch.

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