The Emperor Calls, the Supreme Divine Dynasty

At first glance, I thought it was pretty good. But it's a bit long-winded. The so-called emperor should be decisive in killing, unsmiling in court, mighty and domineering, and mysterious, intelligent and unparalleled in power in court. But this... 15 Chapters, tens of thousands of words, a plot that starts with going to court is not over yet... The emotions of the characters and the plot are so flawed! At least until now, I can't figure out what the character of the protagonist you want to create is like. I don't dare to speak too loudly about the plot, because I have only read the first tens of thousands of words, but the pace is definitely too slow. Based on my many years of experience in reading books, with all due respect, the book will not be popular.

The author's writing is pretty good in other aspects, and the fighting aspect is even less impressive. It's just that the character description is a bit lacking. And you just focus on writing about summoning characters, but it only feels great when you summon them at the beginning, but not so much later. Just like the Taoist friend above said, after summoning for so long, only one person can break through on his own, which is really embarrassing. There is also the achievement that your subordinates will receive. You only showed it in the battle, but after the battle, you did not show it from the mouths of the people, so that the people could increase their sense of identification with the country. You can add this to slow down the pace. There is also the issue of talents. In addition to the people you summoned, have you ever thought that there are people in the country who are not weaker than the people you summoned? This is also a point that can be written in. Also, wars are too frequent and you start the next war before you have digested the territory. This is really disappointing. If you deal with these follow-up issues well, the room for improvement will be huge. By the way, there is also the issue of territory. You'd better explain it clearly. I'm a little confused by what I've seen so far. If I remember correctly, three or four of Hao Tianyuan's realms are occupied by Hao Tianyuan, and there's only one at the back. The same is true for Qinghui. They've all become one realm. It's really confusing to watch.

It's quite comfortable to watch. I hope it won't overwhelm the protagonist. I want to read exciting stories and blow everything up. I'm giving you two monthly passes 🌹🌹

The pace is too fast. I just read Chapter 50. The author has established a main enemy, and then there are a bunch of sub-enemies below the main enemy, as well as a mini-boss at the beginning, and then a bunch of mobs outside. It can be said that from the first chapter to the fiftieth chapter I read, it is like Ultraman fighting monsters, boring and boring, the ending is already determined, and the process is completely removed. , I think there should be a process to write a novel that develops a power, but the author's process is called summoning, and he keeps summoning. Even if he can't hold back anything, he can still write about the small events that happened in his dynasty to make a transition. The most poisonous thing is that he is always invincible even though he is not invincible 🤔🤔

So verbose! Enemies that can be dealt with quickly must be ignored. Invincible writing is not invincible writing, and cool writing is not cool writing. I thought the summoned characters could be a bit more impressive, but that's it, there is no pig's feet. At least there is a temporary summoning card or a trump card. The pig's feet can only be upgraded when they are upgraded. Goldfinger has been suppressed, and the summoned characters cannot be higher than the pig's feet. Can you read Shuhuang?

This book is a eunuch, and the verification is complete.

Trying to make myself look at it, sorry, sorry, let's go, let's go

I haven't read it yet. Can anyone tell me if this book is about cultivating personal heroism or about summoning characters? If you are practicing personal martial arts, I won't fall into the trap. If you are a summoner or an emperor, you will end up on your own, so don't poison me. I'm a little scared.