Summon from Another World: Wu Zhenxia

In the fantasy world, let's not talk about how powerful the barbarians are. You can't defeat the orthodox dynasty without resources. You have to plunder other people's resources to develop. That's nonsense, and you will be wiped out in minutes. This is a fantasy world, not an ancient fictional world. Resources are the most important. If you don't have resources, where will the warriors come from?

Author, check it after you finish writing, there are too many bad sentences, What do you mean, although the strength has not changed, but the strength has skyrocketed, and there are many more behind,

Some suggestions, it is better to summon characters in the same realm to dominate. Crossing a big realm feels a bit fake and unnecessary.

One thing to say is that since the founding of the country, it has become meaningless. A 600,000-strong army can kill thousands of people at once, and then directly kill the opposing general in seconds. The role of the army in an instant is basically useless. What is the point of summoning the army in this way? Can't it be enough to directly summon the top combat power...

In fact, in the dynasty genre, you can write more about daily life, such as incorporating the daily life of some outstanding people, urban planning and construction, comparing the daily life of ordinary people before and after, etc... This way you will not be tired of aesthetics and can improve the word count 😁

The eunuch's symptoms began to appear

After reading fifty-three chapters, just two words, dizziness.                                                             Really, I have to say that I have to throw away when comparing goods. I remembered that I had read "The Heroes of the East" and the subsequent books in the same series, and later I kept complaining about it. But I never thought that "The Heroes of the Ages" is already the ceiling of this track. Let's not talk about the level of Dong Tian Bu Leng, but at least he carefully designed the summoning panel, as well as various descriptions of the birth of famous generals, as well as the temperament of famous generals. Even the birth of soldiers was given to the camera, which is very impressive at first glance. And what about this one? All I can say is, it's mediocre. Putting aside the level of writing, the setting inside is already quite mediocre. The conditions for summoning are negligible and the process is non-existent.                                                                                                                                    Typos, as well as titles, characterization and other writing aspects will not be discussed. There is really no need to discuss it

Relying on killing people to summon an army, you have so many people to kill for you, and your soldiers are basically all well-educated. So what do you use to raise such an army? Doesn't the current dynasty want to all have an army that is acquired and innate? I can't afford it. The more elite the army, the more food and grass resources it needs. What do you use to feed it? And what about the highest combat power? Is it because someone else's qualifications are poor? It's not like we have no resources

The writing is mindless and cool. If a country keeps going to war for 3-4 years after its establishment, the people can bear it. Killing so many people every time a country is destroyed will make governance like raising pigs. Without any resistance, among the people you killed were the Nine Tribes. Completely mindless, the more you look at it, the less interesting it becomes.

The more I write, the more boring I become. Every day I just conquer cities and territories, call back and forth, and write nothing. I'm really convinced. Can I seriously write about the development of the country? This is not how the journal is written.

So little, not enough to read, two pictures are not enough, please update quickly 😏

The lowest level map is huge but has very few soldiers, which is a bit ridiculous. From what I've seen, it's probably the same as the first book, with several supreme beings summoned and then finished in unison. There are some war scenes that can be described in the front, but in the back, the generals kill the strong ones on the opposite side, and then they win directly, and the other side surrenders. It's really boring to watch. Every time, they are waiting to summon stronger people, and then directly push back. Arrange some evenly matched opponents. Let's have more normal war scenes.

This is a novel that after reading 80 or 90 chapters, I still don't know what kind of power the protagonist is if I don't read the previous chapters.

O sea, you are all water. .

People who like to read this type of books come to read about summoning characters. It's so funny to do this now.

Forget about it becoming less and less. I occasionally return pigeons for a day or two and return water. There is no real content at all.

Raise the level slowly, don't go too fast, write a good book and shape it well. Come on

There are too many constant killing routines in the summoning articles for hegemony. I have nothing to write about for internal publication, and there are also games with other countries. After writing this, what else can I write besides constantly changing the map and world? Except for writing down all other routes. I have no idea. I am just thinking about what the new level will be called and what the enemy will be called. The road has been written down. There are still too many chapters at the beginning, the kind of people who come in to read dozens of chapters of interesting articles. Tiantian Cui, you write more to make it more enjoyable and ask to speed up the plot. You wrote it, so no matter what the plot behind it is, things get messy. As for those people, they are gone. Anyway, they are happy with it. I don't care about the plot behind you! ! Nowadays, there is a group of readers who regard the summoning article as a novice cool article. They just come in and read dozens of chapters and leave when they are satisfied. The plot never changed from beginning to end. As long as he feels good, he will leave. Of course, the author's starting point was too low at the beginning and the process was a bit slow. He also did not have time to settle down and write down the game when he was on one side. It's like killing and killing and returning to the old book.

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ ​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ Together. I would like to mention a few points that I feel will affect my pursuit of reading, for reference only. First, there are too many typos and many incorrect sentences, which greatly affects the reading experience. It may be that the author is short of time and doesn't have much time to check.         ，，，，，， Third, when there are not many updates, try to be as concise as possible and push the progress as quickly as possible. In my opinion, both books have a problem, there are too many repetitive words. For example, for the total number of summoning points, just write the number, and you can give us half a chapter to calculate; as for strength, don't write the real strength repeatedly every time, and then convert it to the real combat power; the same goes for military strength and soul suppression, describing it once every time a battle starts, which is a waste of pen and ink. If updated daily, these would be fine. However, when there are not many updates, I will keep it as concise as possible. Failure to push forward the progress will greatly affect my ability to read. After all, one plot takes ten and a half days to write, and not many book lovers have the patience to continue reading. In a word, it is either quantity that wins or quality that wins. If you don't have both, it will still be difficult to get ahead. You write and I read, and I will always support you. I wish the author will write better and better.

I feel like I've read it, but I feel like I haven't seen anything. There are only words in one chapter.

Can you please add some details?

Understood! ! !

By the way, which one is his old number?