An Age of Wonders and Discovery

First, a thumbs up! Coming from the Giant of Light!

Another issue is that I saw on NGA that the author uses a withdrawn writing style, completely ignoring promotion and audience building in QQ groups and through existing books. They're just launching a brand new author account, and with your somewhat amateurish writing style, the target audience is mostly existing readers, so the results are bound to be poor. Yesterday I thought it was a newly launched book, but upon closer inspection, it's already over 100,000 words... Ugh.

It's a very interesting novel, but it's unlikely to become popular online because it lacks a main plot and is more of a world-exploration type. It's hard to persevere with passion alone without income, but mediocre results can be even more demoralizing. If you're only writing because you love it, even a solo effort will struggle. Good luck!

I started following the series from "The Giant of Light." The author's writing style has a romantic feel, which is quite outstanding; such a style is unique in online novels.

The author has skill and ideas, but still lacks a bit of deliberation (coming from the previous book). Here are my thoughts on the first ten chapters; I'm not going to read the rest for now. Regarding the interaction between the protagonist and Mrs. Otori I really don't understand why the protagonist directly rejected Mrs. Ogiri.

Each place represents a separate piece of history, from the Toeless People in the Netherworld to the Black Bird Dynasty, then to Sunset City, and finally to the Gear People born from the Netherworld Insects. The Gear People were likely created by the final inhabitants of Sunset City, in order to answer the question of why this world exists.

I feel like I'm reading Robinson Crusoe. Damn, what an ugly title! If it were even a little nicer, I wouldn't have discovered this book so late. The plot is intricately woven and exceptionally well-written. I suggest the author work on a better title and maybe even submit it to a publisher for a physical book.

I've subscribed to all of Guang Ju's works; they're masterpieces in my eyes, and I hope this one won't disappoint either.

I was drawn here from the Baidu Tieba homepage, and seeing the author's name, I thought he was a big shot in writing AI training. After reading a few chapters, it seems that's not the case. I'll leave a comment after I finish reading. I hope it's a pleasant experience.

So, it's fortunate I'm the author of Giants of Light? Looks like it'll be a good book. Let me take a look.