Earthly Immortal!

Also, let's talk about the protagonist's plug-ins. I feel like there are too many plug-ins, such as the base building platform, the Dharma Hall, and other halls. I feel like there are too many functions. The biggest shortcoming of the previous novel is that there are too many settings. There are too many settings and it becomes a bit confusing. How should I put it, I think the author likes to spread the settings. The problem is that most readers don't like long settings. Everyone who reads novels basically brushes over the settings and skips them directly. Everyone basically reads novels for the plot.

Such an awesome earth fairy has built several awesome buildings, but in the end he has no means of concealment and protection. And the three eagles can only be fed by the protagonist, and they cannot hunt by themselves.

Don't be so anxious when writing a book. Calm down and prepare an outline, and then think carefully about how to write a more eye-catching beginning. Release a new book every now and then. Just like the previous Zhongtian Ziwei Emperor, sooner or later his Taoist heart will collapse.

Advantages: 1. No leveling, the foundation is established before it is released, which is better than those that only build the foundation after two or three hundred chapters. 2. In the harem novel, the protagonist is not a prisoner, so he should practice dual cultivation when he should. Disadvantages: 1. There are too many settings to remember. 2. The specific details are not described enough and it is a bit of a running account.

Just like the author named "Zhongtian Ziwei Emperor", he made his debut in the desert, and you made your debut in a step-by-step book. The time is almost the same, and the subsequent development trajectory is almost the same. The first book gained momentum, the second languished, the third eunuch, the fourth eunuch, and the nth eunuch. In the end, even the die-hard fans of the first book no longer believed in you, and in the end they had no choice but to give up even the pen name. Arrogant, stubborn, and impatient, these labels refer to the two of you. For details, please see the death trajectory of Emperor Ziwei. From the best authors, they are all on the roadside.

The author made this setting that one volume of authentic level skills can only be used by one person. This setting feels unscientific. Cultivation of immortality originally relies on resources and talent. If you add settings like this, you will undoubtedly increase the limit of talent to the maximum. Becoming a disciple of these things will become the end of cultivating immortals. You will not be able to create your own authentic level or higher skills, and you will not be able to break through the golden elixir.

What kind of messy things should not be done during the Qi refining and foundation building stages? During the Qi refining and foundation building stages, you should do one thing. Prepare your trump cards to sprint towards the Purple Mansion stage. After reaching the Purple Mansion stage, Taoist companions, sons, and demon pets will all do it during this period. First of all, the Foundation building stage is not difficult for the protagonist and the environmental forces in this area, and it is nothing. Zi It is only at the beginning that the difficulty begins in the Fu period. Each stage of the Zi Fu period can be regarded as a big stage gap in this domain, so the Zi Fu period is the bottleneck, but once you step into the Zi Fu period, you are considered a high-level monk, and your life span is also greatly increased. After the protagonist enters the Zi Fu period, he starts to find a Taoist companion. It is much easier and more convenient. You can choose the earth spirit root or spirit body that suits your taste. Female cultivators, such Taoist companions have greater cultivation potential, it is easier for the protagonist to assist, it is easier to keep up with the protagonist's cultivation pace, and the probability of giving birth to children with good spiritual roots is also greater. They can also find better demon pets. In simple situations, they are of a higher level and can be used to create simple demon pets with greater potential. Don't say that the protagonist has a golden finger. I don't pay attention to spiritual root qualifications and resources. If I have the ability, I can call him Goldfinger and prepare everything for him. With such a good Goldfinger, why should he have the same environmental requirements and planning steps as ordinary monks? The starting point of the layout should be higher. The basic foundation is deeper and stronger. Isn't it wrong to make mistakes later?

How to put it, it feels like the golden elixir came out too early, and the protagonist's foundation is not strong enough. Also, the protagonist's descendants need to look for foundation-building resources from outside, and there is no way to produce them themselves. This conflicts with farming, and the foundation is still too shallow.

Continue to observe👀The protagonist Chen Nianzhi is so well written, don't be disappointed with this book!

Don't be a eunuch this time, the previous one was very well written.

Can you write the item prices well? The starting price is a mess. How do you write it later? If not, go to IA.

It feels like there is too much fighting content, and farming and growth is just a background board, all relying on plug-ins.

Well done, second time eunuch, luckily I didn't watch it

Why didn't you write the last book? The previous one was much better than this one, which is inexplicable.

This book can be used as a reference in the later stage. Starting from the inheritance of the Great Immortal Zhenyuan, the results of that book are not very good, but there are still some places for reference, such as taking away the Dongtian Blessed Land through the Earth Book. If this book is going to write about the spiritual world and above, it is best to take away the Dongtian Blessed Land.

Jin Dan is just asking questions and seeking the truth. The level is too low, and it is almost the same as Zhudao Evergreen Da Luo. The low level is just like this. Every time the protagonist breaks through, everyone around him will die. Just like the original, he is the only star of the evil.

The results are indeed much worse than the previous books.

I'll make an initial reservation first and wait and see. The results are so bad that I'm afraid of being a pigeon.

The protagonist's four sons were not introduced to which wives they were born to. Why didn't the second protagonist and Ji Ziling have a son, so that each wife would have a line of offspring, and Ji Ziling's spiritual roots were good, so the children they gave birth to would have stronger spiritual roots.

This book is okay, with 10 million words as a base

What's going on? I won't update or tell you.

This author's current reputation is really the result of normal development. When I first started reading Zhudao, I felt that his writing style was just average and he had many typos, but he was diligent and had a steady attitude. Later, when he suddenly let himself go, I felt disgusted that he didn't want to let it go. While turning over and over in the water, I made it up mechanically, and at the same time, without any knowledge, I regarded the world I wrote as my own erotic space, and I shamelessly said that I had feelings for the characters in the novel. In fact, I didn't know how to write a letter. It makes people's impressions so bad After looking at the next few books, they all seem to be uncertain and at a loss. This is not surprising. Some authors don't know what is attractive about their articles. They accidentally make some progress and then drift away thinking how powerful they are. If their thoughts are not pure, they are lackluster. Let's not talk about the possibility of readers giving up on you and choosing you again. What's the use of changing the vest without correcting the shortcomings? This kind of author who gradually becomes the protagonist and writes that the world revolves around him may have forgotten that the original intention of writing an article is to simply attract people to read and make money. As soon as the literary youth suffers from the disease, he immediately chooses to indulge in obscenity to satisfy himself. At this point, it is no longer the quality of the plot design and the pursuit of respect for the readers. To be more precise, this is purely a lack of professional ethics!

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Author, your way of writing should be to write an article about many children and many blessings. If you don't know how to write it, I suggest you read this reference book. Live in the immortal martial arts, marry a wife and live forever

But don't write about the fairyland chapter, it's boring to drag it out. It's just one world, just make it more exciting.

Author, you are most suitable for writing fantasy. Zhudao Changqing seems to prefer fantasy writing.

. . Why haven't you updated yet? It's been down for two days.

Become a eunuch😰

It's been so long since I started cutting books. Did I change my vest or platform?

A very normal eunuch, this is a typical golden finger. If you open it up, it can only be written as a cool article, but the outline is really like a mortal flow.