Everlasting

I really don't understand. Nowadays, wives in novels often start with two wives. Isn't it bad to have one wife?

It's too clever, and the writing style is mediocre, with typos and fluent words... The story is told well, but the food is tasteless.

Seeing that there are too many descriptions of Tianxu Mountain recently, I am a little confused whether it is trying to develop the family or the sect, or whether it is trying to develop both. In addition, maybe the author did not have a good grasp of the group portraits, so he did not describe too much about the family members. As a result, family members have no subjective initiative and rely on family blood transfusions. This shouldn't be the case. With the family's care, you should be able to achieve better results. When a family is in trouble, there are so many outstanding people. As the family grows, but there are no talents, then the family is meaningless. I hope the main line will not deviate. Almost most immortality novels have this kind of main line deviation in the middle and late stages. As a result, there is no interest in pursuing reading. Personal opinions, just say whatever you want. Welcome to discuss,

Mortal flow, family cultivating immortals, my favorite. The protagonist is a child of a small immortal cultivating family who traveled through time in modern times. The original owner's parents died, and the protagonist practices with the golden finger innate purple qi technique. This technique can accumulate innate purple energy, have the ability to improve qualifications, break bottlenecks, and improve the quality of spiritual plants. It can be used by others. The setting and plot are very amazing, and the group portraits are very well written.

Goldfinger B is written very high, but it is really weak and very restrictive when used.

Yi Wood, Geng Metal, and Bing Fire are all the heavenly stems and earthly branches. The treasures all have the same name, the first-order Geng-Gold Essence, the second-order Geng-Gold Essence, and the third-order Geng-Gold Essence. Don't use the same name. The second level of Gengjin Essence is fixed as second level. Don't use third and fourth levels. Similar gold treasures of third and fourth levels should be given different names. For example, the first-level hematite, the second-level Gengjin Essence, the third-level black magnetic treasure ore, and the fourth-level golden marrow mother.

The protagonist's three views are so upright that he can survive in the world of immortality in this book. If you enter the world of immortality in a book like Mortal, you will feel overwhelmed. After reading dozens of chapters, I can only say that they are different and do not agree with each other. However, the author's plot conception and narration are still very good. Friends who like this type of protagonist works can read it.

After reading a few chapters, I feel that there is too much room for optimization. The first is the issue of the Foundation Establishment Pill that everyone is talking about. There is a Foundation Establishment period in the clan, so why are you so reluctant to give all the resources collected in the clan to him for an old elder who only has a 40% chance of using the pill? Since there is a Foundation Establishment period, If you stay in town for a long time, you can slowly collect resources and other opportunities to achieve greater success as a clan member. (For example, although the protagonist's talent is currently partially hidden, it is revealed in the article far beyond that of the elder.) The resource allocation considered by the family in the book is too confusing to understand. The second is the debt problem. The previous borrowing of 8,000 spirit stones caused the public resource pool to be overwhelmed and everyone had to pay it in. This is also very strange. How much can you borrow? Your setting is a family, not an individual! How could he make such an unbearable decision for an elder who only has 40% chance of establishing a foundation... In addition, this also raises a question, that is, the clan leader, who is the only one with foundation-building capabilities, actually sold many magic weapons and natal magic weapons because of this? ? ? Forget about why the patriarch at the foundation-building level couldn't come up with a foundation-building pill spirit stone to repay his debt? Isn't it enough to sell a few pieces of equipment of the same level? What's more important is that the family's only base-building combat power isselling weapons? Return the natal magic weapon? ? The other side said that there are monster threats outside, and the other side brought out that it is not easy for the little cultivator family to survive...You? ? ? Furthermore, your family's Dinghai Shenzhong actually wants to sell its natal magic weapon. Although Zhongzhi will set an example, let's not talk about most, but just a few, people's minds immediately changed😭, the family has a bright future... In addition, if other nearby families and monsters don't kill you immediately, you can hide your face and sell your natal magic weapon in other places, but as time goes by, people will always know about it, isn't itdangerous! Thirdly, this is purely my subjective opinion. The Hongmeng Purple Qi at the beginning... It's hard to say that except for Buddha, who is originally Taoist, and one or two books, other authors of ancient novels don't know anything, they just copy and use names that look powerful, so some people like me are not interested in learning about this kind of "prehistoric myths". To be honest, if you use a name that has its own world view and a name like the brainless dragon Aotian's skills and spiritual energy, it is better to casually look up the Xianxia related ones. For example, when I looked for it, I might as well call it Pure Yang Purple Qi, and the skills were called Taixu Lianxing, etc. The name would not be inconsistent... I think the author's writing is also very pleasing to the eye, but there are big problems with the economic system and family settings at the beginning. It is strongly recommended to give priority to establishing a reasonable role, sect, and regional economy, and then promote plot conflicts through stakes. (For example, a greedy and poor foundation-building patriarch can be worth 3-5 foundation-building pills) By setting the character's financial rationality to promote the plot, Come on, the beginning of this book is a bit embarrassing, but it is rare to see a family/sect with great room for improvement and correct ideas for cultivating immortals. I don't have much money, so I will give you 100, come on! ! ! Looking forward to the next one, I am a little bit 😠

This novel is well written, and the audio version on Himalayas sounds even better! Like👍

Indeed, many Ascending Immortal Realm chapters are written so-so. Here, I still hope that the author can write the Evergreen Immortal World chapter well, just as slowly as possible, and as long as the content is exciting.

Actually, I prefer the two-character name of the protagonist. I feel more awesome if the protagonist has a two-character name🐮

&Summary and Outlook (Extended Post)& 1. Summary The protagonist has broken through the soul last night, and his vital signs are now good, and his family members are in a peaceful state of mind. In order to avoid angering the demon, the onlookers were in a stable mood and did not engage in excessive celebrations.        ，，，， This is a war that is destined to be tragic and tragic. The free and spontaneous militia-style immortal civilization fights against the organized and disciplined large-scale group army led by the powerful demon god. It is destined to be tragic and tragic.         ，，；，，，；，，，，        ，， Demon gods are like the major Western religions, which are tightly organized from top to bottom. At present, the two Western religions in my country combined have more than 100 million people, excluding the more stubborn Islamic population. The author may want to express a kind of righteous feeling of sacrificing his life to fight for the national calamity. I very much agree with this feeling. The author's three correct views are rare and clear among many current novels. But I have to say that judging from the comments of book friends, many people do not accept the plot design of Catastrophe of the Demon Abyss, and I myself did feel aggrieved after watching it. The pleasure of reading is not as good as the golden elixir before Yuanying. After analysis, if it were the late Qing Dynasty or the Republic of China, this situation should be able to resonate. But now is an era when the country is peaceful and the people are safe, and most people are living their own lives. In particular, many people are influenced by Western refined egoism. When they are not doing well, they blame others and are very violent. Therefore, the righteousness of the family and the country cannot resonate with a considerable number of online readers.        ，，        ，， But they don't like that the boss is two realms higher than before. Yuanying fights against the demon and his army. This really makes people feel powerless and aggrieved. Yuanying's three small realms and Yuanshen's three major improvements after junior high school are difficult to achieve much progress. In short, Yuanying and Yuanshen, the two major realms, book lovers will feel powerless and aggrieved. Therefore, you still can't release a boss that is too much higher than the protagonist's realm. You have to release it slowly according to the protagonist's realm. Also, this is a bit like the national war in the game. The scene is huge and the scale is large. However, the sense of substitution is reduced. The protagonist with a low level is too small in this large-scale battle, making it difficult for readers to find a sense of personal heroism.          ， **                                                                                                                                                                                                          ‐‐''' ' There's'''''''''s''''''s's there seems to be less of a mystery about exploration, and even if you upgrade quickly, defeat the devil, the forces within the world are almost all clear.，：          1，，，，，，，， Therefore, "Dao Zheng Feng" and "Witch Luck Illustrated" combine the two works of mortals and immortals, and are two relatively successful works.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   As As As , as As As You, You It is estimated that there are not many secret realms left to explore in this world. Over tens of thousands of years, they have been developed and explored over and over again. But in the vast sea of ​​stars, there are countless planet interfaces, and there are countless ruins of ancient immortals there. You can go for a treasure hunt copy from time to time! 3. As mentioned before, I hope there will be no more national war plots like the Demon Abyss Catastrophe. Although the immortal civilization is free and loose, it has a strong sense of substitution. In reality, people who are dedicated to cultivating immortals actually do not like fighting and killing in the world, so they pursue to escape from the secular world. What they care about most is actually eternity and the infinite length of life.                                                                      I hope that there will be more strategies to win. Of course, there can be extensive competitions of magical powers, but the diversification of combat methods will undoubtedly make people not bored... In my mind, the most memorable fights in this book are the one in the Foundation Establishment stage where I conspired with the old clan leader to lure the enemy over and solved it in one battle, and the one in the Golden Core stage where I used the teleportation array to sneak attack inside the demon clan. There may be others, but I can't remember them.       ，，，，，，，， The difference between the human race and the demon race is that the human race is better able to use strategies to win. This is what Pu Songling lamented in "Wolf".         5，，，，，？ I'm speechless! These are all fantasy writing methods, which have been quoted in Xianxia.         ，，！ In real practice, the transformation into immortality can be understood from the literal meaning. It is lightness and virtualization, and only then can one rise away from the attraction of the earth.       Liezi's "Relying on the void to control the wind", Laozi's "I have a big trouble, because I have a body, without this body, there will be no big trouble," Zhuangzi's "taking nothingness into the infinite", as well as the Buddhist's "the body is like space", "the heart is too empty", "the Dharma Realm is only one mind", "the Buddha and all living beings all take the Dharma Realm as their body", even in novels The so-called Yangshen and so on in the book also amplify and blur the body, and cultivate this material body into an energy state body, which is dispersed and invisible, and gathered into a substance to achieve the free transformation of tangible matter and invisible energy state, instead of training the body to be as hard as a white dwarf or a neutron star, which is extremely hard. Water freezes and can be broken with a punch. However, even if the gas turns into clouds and a plane hits it, it cannot destroy the white clouds. So, what is the use of such hard body training? Galaxies will explode, black holes will disappear, and limited individuals will eventually perish. Such body training is based on ordinary people's thinking, thinking that if the muscles and bones are strong, they can last forever. But they don't know that the finite Milky Way is not even a speck of dust in the infinite universe. How can it stand against the boundless vastness of the void?        ，，，，， If someone says there is emptiness outside of emptiness, then it is still emptiness. The great road must be infinite, so it is reasonable for Buddhism to say that it is big and has no outside.          ，，，，，，，         ，，，， Being in harmony with the Dao means that after enlightenment, you will naturally understand that all people and things are in the Dao, are not separated from the Dao, and are the essence of the Dao. In this case, you and I are of the same body but have different functions, just like multiple light bulbs on a circuit, and like multiple fruits on a tree, so why bother fighting and fighting? If the left hand hits the right hand and the right hand hits the thigh, aren't you still in pain? So in the end, enemies and relatives are equal, and there will be no more fighting and killing. Rather than being invincible in the end like fantasy, no one can beat you. ~~~Of course, the final enlightenment can be left to the finale. Otherwise, if there is no battle in the novel about cultivating immortals, no one will read it. The benevolent are invincible, not because no one can defeat themselves, but in the hearts of benevolent people, no one is an enemy and they tolerate everything. Only when this heart is vast and boundless can they be in harmony with the Tao.         ，，，，，，，，，，， As for Taoist ancestors, in fact, the ancestors in history are the honorific titles given by future generations to outstanding predecessors, not their rank. If we talk about levels, the Buddhas and Bodhisattvas of Buddhism, the Golden Immortals of Taoism, and the Hunyuan Daluo Golden Immortals are the realm levels. That's it, I hope you won't find me too verbose. In the next few months, I will be busy for a while, so I will not come here or do book reviews less often. After that, I may read a second book and then do book reviews again.

This update is becoming more and more unstable, there are only a few days every month

Why isn't it updated? I wait every day. At least set a time.

The protagonist should not have the original Qi of the Five Elements, so resources are consumed. The biggest bug is: karma and merit cannot offset each other; there are ten karmas, and they use the power of the ten merits to dissolve each other. The process of dissolution is to bring down a heavenly tribulation (karma, fire and thunder tribulation). Merit and karma cannot exist at the same time. Either merit is greater than karma, or karma is greater than merit (that is, there is either only merit or only karma). Those with karma are practicing demonic or evil cultivation, while those with merit are practicing the right way. It is impossible for karma and merit to exist at the same time. There is only one situation where there is a lot of karma and merit at the same time (just like Tai Chi). Once the karma or merit are more than each other, they will dissolve. This setting will be reasonable.

No. 92

At the end of the calamity, the four disciples have probably attained Daluo Daluo. The strength and blessings of the Daluo Daluo have to surpass Daluo Jinxian Dzogchen. If nine succeed, they will have the strength of the Hunyuan Emperor.

I've read about a hundred chapters and I really like this book. The characterization and plot are very good. I just feel that the fighting is a bit boring. I feel that it is just about fighting magic weapons, infuriating energy and realm. In many battle scenes, Nianzhi suddenly finds the opportunity to fight and uses magic weapons to fly away the opponent's magic weapons. There are many moves in the middle. Maybe Nianzhi wants to change his style. I hope Nianzhi can come up with some new ideas.

As the saying goes, a wise king and a minister will be loyal. If you are benevolent, I will be righteous. The Pavilion Master risked his life to defend the protagonist from the enemy, and the protagonist should also try his best to find a way to save the Pavilion Master. Last night I thought of a solution: Zhang Wuji was hit by the Xuanming Divine Palm, and the cold poison was difficult for even Zhang Sanfeng to remove, but he recovered by practicing the Nine Yang Sutra. In life, there are many people who are terminally ill and the hospital cannot do anything, but they get better by practicing Zhanzhuang Qigong. Therefore, the protagonist cannot detoxify the pavilion master, but he can teach him a divine thunder technique and practice it by himself. At least he will have a chance to recover from the tribulation. If not, under the protection of the protagonist after the tribulation, he will continue to practice the thunder technique and finally remove the curse. In the past, the protagonist's Chunyang Thunder Technique was not perfect, so he could not save the pavilion master. Now that Yuan Shen has mastered the Thunder Technique and has perfected it, with the protagonist's talent, he should be able to create a divine thunder technique suitable for breaking the curse.               ， ，：，，          ，，，，， However, charging is limited. It can only be charged once within a year or many years, and the energy stored in the meridians can be slowly absorbed.           ，，，，，，， If the protagonist wants to advance quickly in three hundred years, I think it is a good way to use Thunder Tribulation to charge up and improve his cultivation level.                                                                                                                                       <br Therefore, the protagonist can block the most powerful thunder tribulation for his family and the Jindan monks of the Three What Alliance. When they are promoted to Yuan Ying's thunder tribulation, the protagonist enters before the last lightning strike, and the thunder tribulation is immediately upgraded to the Yuan Shen thunder tribulation. So the protagonist uses a thunder tribulation of the ordinary Yuan Shen to charge, which not only helps his men block the most powerful thunder, but also charges himself to quickly improve his cultivation level. The author can refer to it. It doesn't matter whether he adopts it or not. I'm not that persistent. The author must adopt his own ideas. However, here's a thumbs up: the author is quite open-minded and has adopted book friends' suggestions several times in his work.

My interest has been aroused by you. I don't want a eunuch, boss.

It's getting more and more exciting, but it seems like it's almost over.

I have a question. In the county where the Pig's Foot clansmen set up their own business, are all the people marrying close relatives?

After reading so many novels about time travel and cultivating immortals, time travelers have always been just a gimmick. No one has used the power of science to cultivate immortals, especially at the low-level stage. They would rather risk their lives and work hard, and have never thought of borrowing the power of science. Can't guns and cannons be made into high-quality products using weapon refining techniques? Anti-armor rocket launchers can hit tanks, but can low-level flying swords? It can be produced during World War II. How high can the technical content be? The famous Barrett is not difficult to make using weapon refining techniques. What kind of low-level protective magic weapon can be defended against? If you can't get hundreds of kilograms of explosives, put them in storage bags, prepare battlefields, use them for land mines, and blow up a lot of them during the foundation building period! You said that in the advanced stage of cultivating immortals, you can fly to the sky and escape from the earth and be awesome, but if you don't use better scientific power in the lower stage, what's the point of nine-year compulsory education? What's the point of time travel? Wouldn't it be nice for the natives to open a golden finger?

I have mentioned to the author twice before that we should go to bed early and go to bed early, but I know that habits are difficult to change. This time, I would like to mention one last thing: the key to solving the problem is not to take a break for two or three days, which can only temporarily improve the condition for a few days. The key to solving the problem is to go to bed early and get up early and develop good work and rest habits.                                                                                                                                There is still half a month to a month left to nourish the liver. Go to bed around 9:30 every day, get up around 5:30, exercise a little and start writing. At this time, you will be full of energy, clear ideas, and inspiration. If you don't go to bed early to nourish your liver blood during this period, you will be even more uncomfortable in summer. 2. Wear a shawl on your writing shoulders to prevent the shoulders, back and neck from catching cold, which is the biggest cause of back pain. After writing for about an hour, get up and move around, slap your hands up and down for a while, and move your shoulder joints and neck. 3. Buy an ink screen for writing, which can protect your eyes and greatly reduce liver blood consumption. 4. Buy six-proof glasses (search on Taobao), which can protect your eyes and reduce liver blood consumption. If you use an ink screen, you don't need it. If not, then you need to add a Hulk anti-blue light screen to your computer (search on Taobao), the effect is very good. In addition, the 360 ​​small desktop eye-catching mode is turned on. Of course, for text writing, it is best to use an ink screen. 5-In the morning, add ginger, brown sugar water, red dates, peanuts, etc. In small amounts. If you get angry, stop for a few days. Drink more millet porridge with yam and raw malt water. 6. Baduanjin or Tai Chi twice a day, not intense soothing exercise. Take a nap for about half an hour at noon, no more than that. Otherwise, it will be difficult to wake up from deep sleep and make you more drowsy. 7. Try to look at luminous screens as little as possible, including mobile phones, computers, and TVs. It consumes liver blood very much. Even if the eyes can bear it, the liver blood cannot bear it.

Are there any family novels with a farming style? I've read a lot of them and almost none of them have anything to do with farming. I think family style is a good theme for farming. The setting of Lingtian's spiritual veins is very interesting. As a result, every one of them is either a battle of wits or a feud between aristocratic families! Please recommend, I want farming flow (＾◇＾)

The price of the Foundation Establishment Pill is too high. Even a family with the seventh level of Foundation Establishment is not enough. In the end, it failed. How can this kind of immortal cultivation world develop and not decline?

Holding a flower and holding a sword

It is most unreasonable for a family to cultivate immortality, especially a poor family, which delays the growth of geniuses and does not send them to the sect. In the world of immortality, the sect is the largest family, where talents gather, where resources gather, and where top experts come from. Others are the best in everything. Your family cultivation model was either created by casual cultivators by chance, or it was established by those in the sect who had no hope of reaching a higher level. To put it bluntly, the Xiu Xian family is in an awkward position, relying entirely on the protagonist to hold on. People with great opportunities and great wisdom all create sects and gather talents from all over the world, rather than being limited to one bloodline or one surname.

With all due respect, all the characters in this book have no brains. They never collect information before fighting, and just jump into it recklessly. Every time a magical weapon is revealed, the enemy exclaims: Ah, it's such and such a magical weapon, and then is caught off guard. It's like this every time. This book is basically about practicing, fighting monsters, dividing the spoils, and then continuing to practice, and keep repeating this.

Comparable to the Great Emperor, Invincible to the Great Emperor, Sub-Sage, Infinite Sub-Sage, rivaling the Emperor of Heaven. . . . There should be something similar, but I can't remember. You have divided the realms very well, but when you came up with these descriptions in the middle, it looked messy and felt very awkward. Isn't it normal for the same realm to have strong and weak ones? Just write it normally. Overall, it is a good book. Personally, I feel that the beginning of the book is more exciting than the later parts. However, most of the books are similar. It is inevitable that Guan Gong will fight Qin Qiong in the future.