Hogwarts: Wizards Supreme

I didn't see it being put on the shelves so I asked him to withdraw it, which seemed rather irritating. The inner drama of the protagonist has no reason.

(I read the article a year ago, and I suddenly thought of writing a book review) The early stage is indeed very dull. I read it because I was too bored during the book shortage, but the middle and late stages are really good. It is about reform. The protagonist finally succeeded in making Muggles and wizards coexist peacefully (? Probably, in fact, I think this is not the best way to deal with it, and by the end In the finale, Muggles don't know the existence of wizards. I hope to write a side story. Of course, I may have remembered it wrong.) The system in the early stage is a bit strange, but in the end it is explained that this is not a real system (any more would be a spoiler). The setting is quite good, and the author's writing is not awkward. It is good in all aspects, surpassing most fanfics (that I have read). The early stage of the plot closely follows the original work, but later on it begins to have its own main line: reading for the rise of the wizard! (No) As for the heroine, the single heroine is Daphne. Personally, I hate having a harem, and I don't like having two heroines, so I'll give it a big thumbs up. In the last ten chapters, the heroine died but came back to life. The reason was reasonable and not cliché. I personally liked this plot very much. It was the same as what Rowling wanted to express: love is the most powerful magic.

I don't like it very much. Although the original version of Harry Potter is a children's book, the audience of the Qidian novel is not primary school students or junior high school students This book is full of the protagonist's inner drama about bonds, friendship, love and freedom. The protagonist is like a child who was bullied in kindergarten. He tortures his inner emotional problems over and over again, trying to find his "self", and is taught about friendship and love by people around him To be honest, I am a little tired of this kind of middle-grade literature about youth pain What I hate the most is that the protagonist has such inner drama, but also arranges their plot for everyone from a high position I mean the part where the protagonist releases the basilisk for the purpose of witnessing. I gave up when I saw this, I really don't like it Since the adult soul has been arranged If there is a soul, there is no need to write about growth. I would rather see the protagonist do whatever it takes for the great benefit, instead of being hypocritical and repeatedly questioning whether he is on the right path I can accept that the protagonist protects his partners or relatives on the grounds of merging souls or being moved by family, but I really cannot accept that the author uses a large amount of pen and ink to describe the growth of the protagonist Also, I really hate the protagonist's style, forcibly interfering with the plot of the original work on the grounds of protection. In fact, no one died in the original work, but I was afraid of the butterfly effect, and operated everything clumsily and stupidly step by step, all relying on the protagonist's halo to complete it I would rather see the protagonist strategize, hide in the dark, get the witness point, live his life well, and save the lives of the people he wants to protect at critical moments. (Don't say that the protagonist can't do it. He is the protagonist. The author can definitely make him do it.) Rather than directly stealing an important role's role, without considering the possibility of his own exposure and the subsequent butterfly effect.

I probably had a Brian surgery, hey, I don't know if there is any internal odor, so I'll just make do with it

It feels very awkward. The protagonist is from a pure-blood family. He is a gentle pure-blood believer who believes in wizard supremacy, but he always hangs out with Harry's team. Logically speaking, it is impossible for them to get together, because they have different beliefs and do not work together. Shouldn't the normal and reasonable behavior be to keep a distance? I won't offend you but I won't interact with you either. This should be the normal attitude of a moderate pure-blooded person, right? It's like a person who puts academic qualifications first always hangs out in a team of bad students, and a person who doesn't play games and loves reading always hangs out with a group of online game enthusiasts, especially because of some inexplicable system. Having to do this seems very awkward and aggrieved. I think this is also the reason why some readers (including myself) feel that the protagonist is a bit licky! As readers, we must look at Harry's world from the perspective of the protagonist, which means that we readers will look at everything in Harry's world from the perspective of a moderate pure-blood believer. However, the plot setting is still written from the perspective of the original work, which is also where it feels a bit awkward.

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By the way, is anyone chasing you? Feeling cool lately(´д`)

The male protagonist is a virgin bitch. Most adults have no patience for a naughty kid like Draco. Their only thought is that if he messes with me, I will beat him to death. The protagonist actually has a hot face and a cold butt

1. After Hogwarts, George was never able to use the Divine Protection Charm again. "After he left, I could no longer use the Patronus Charm, because all my happiness was related to him." JK Rowling said that she felt that George would never recover from Fred's death. Every mirror was to him the Mirror of Erised. 2. When Mrs. Weasley met Boggart, Boggart turned into the appearance of the death of her family. But even in her most terrifying imagination, she never imagined that the twins would separate. "No!" Groaned Mrs. Weasley, "No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No! No, no! No" ——snap! The dead twins. Snap! Dead Percy. Snap! Dead Harry 3. The only time Fred and George saw each other getting older was when they threw their names into the Goblet of Fire. "You said it was useful! "You said it" 4. Everyone looked at Harry's scars when they first saw him. Only Snape looked at his eyes through the crowd when he saw him for the first time. In the last scene, he was also looking at his eyes. Unfortunately, those green eyes that were exactly the same as Lily's were full of hatred every time he looked at him. 5. There is a chapter in the book called "Snape's Most Painful Memory" At that time, Harry thought that his pain came from Harry's father. Bullying him. At the end, we learned that his greatest pain was saying that unforgivable word to Lily, and he drifted away from it until he told the Dark Lord the prophecy, which indirectly led to her death. "Headmaster, they are camping in the forest, that mudblood... "Don't use that word!" I think he never said this word again in his life 6. Professor Snape particularly hates Neville because Neville could have been the chosen child, so Lily would not have to die. Snape asked Harry a question: What will you get when narcissus root powder is added to wormwood infusion? The narcissus here is actually a lily (Ly) that looks like a narcissus. Its flower language is: My love will follow you to the grave. 7. In two duels with Voldemort, Harry used "Expelliarmus" and won both times. In the final battle, he used this spell to fight against Voldemort's Avada Kedavra, and finally defeated Voldemort. This spell... Was taught to him by Snape. 8. When Dobby first appeared, Harry received a warning and lost the bones in his arm. It felt like it was always a disservice. At the end of the second part, Harry said to Dobby: "Stop trying to save me, okay?" But he still went to save Harry. At the critical moment of life and death, he went to the extremely frightened old master's house, rescued Harry and his party, and finally slept in the Baker Cottage. 9. Sirius thought until his death that his brother Regulus was a coward and was killed because he was afraid of the Death Eaters' methods of escaping. He didn't know that Regulus Black discovered the Dark Lord's secret when he was less than 20 years old, bravely betrayed the Dark Lord and found the Horcrux. He left a note and declared war on the Dark Lord with his life: "To the Dark Lord: I will be dead long before you read this, but I want you to know that it was me who discovered your secret. I stole your Horcrux and planned to destroy it as soon as possible. I am willing to die in the hope that when you meet the opponent who hits you, you will be nothing but blood. A mortal with a fleshy body. RAB "comes from a pure-blood family, but treats all life equally. He did not let the elf die, but drank poison and became an Inferi at the bottom of the lake, but let Kreacher leave safely. He is the eternally pure and noble Black, and one of the bravest Slytherins. 10. In the seventh part, when the Order of the Phoenix picked up the Dursleys, Aunt Petunia said to Harry before leaving: "You lost your mother that night, and I also lost my only sister." She adopted Harry even though she knew there was danger, perhaps reluctantly, but faced with the threat of the most powerful dark wizard in history, she helped her sister continue the magic in her blood and gave her son a home to keep him safe. She was also the one who raised Harry when he was more than one year old, changed his diapers, and taught him to talk and walk. Dumbledore went to her house to pick up Harry and said: "Your agapanthus is blooming very luxuriantly. Agapanthus is an African lily, and lily is Liy. She may still miss her sister deep down in her heart. 11. When Cedric's father saw Harry for the first time, he said to his son: "You defeated Harry Potter, you can tell it to your grandson when you are old!" Unfortunately, he has no chance. Cedric is a true gentleman who respects his opponents and will pay back any favors he owes. In the third part, after Harry fell off the broom, Cedric wanted to suspend the game, even if he won the fair and aboveboard part. In the fourth part, Harry was laughed at by the whole school "Potter He advised his classmates not to do this when he said "stinking shit"; in order to repay Harry for telling him about the fire dragon, he took the initiative to tell Harry the secret of the golden egg and finally won the Triwizard Cup with Harry. Some people always say that Hufflepuff = mediocrity. In fact, the essence of Hufflepuff is integrity, kindness, and loyalty. "Cedric fully embodies the character of Hufflepuff. "The unique qualities of Chippatch Academy," Dumbledore continued, "He is a kind and loyal friend, a hard-working student, and he advocates fair competition. 12. When he was very young, Remus Lupine was bitten in retaliation for his father's rude words to a werewolf, and he has since become a marginalized person in society. The 7 years at Hogwarts were the happiest time in his life. Unexpectedly, his happiness was almost limited to these 7 years. That night in Godric's Hollow, he suddenly lost three good friends. One was really dead, one faked his death (he didn't know it), and one killed the other two. For 12 years, no one accompanied him through the painful transformation on every full moon night. Years later, his best friend's son was sitting in the car and, not recognizing him, was discussing his other best friend. He didn't need to ask his name to know that across from him was Harry, with his messy hair, identical appearance and similar figure except for his eyes. He looked exactly like his best friend once did. I finally found love, got married and had a child, but left when the child was still in his infancy. His life should not have been so miserable. 13. The most unacceptable thing in the whole book is Sirius's departure. He is the only Gryffindor in the Black family. He split from his family at the age of 16 and lived in the James Potter family. He anonymously gave Harry the Firebolt, and he also gave Harry his first toy broom. Lily wrote in the letter, "This is Harry's favorite toy." Because he trusted the wrong person, he lost his best friend overnight. He was considered a traitor by everyone and was jailed for twelve years. The thought of protecting Harry supported him in escaping, but at the critical moment when the injustice was vindicated, he failed and had to continue his escape. For Harry, he lived in a cave and lived by eating rats. Finally, he fell on the other side of the curtain, leaving no body behind. When he first met Harry, he carefully asked Harry if he would like to live with him. When he got the affirmative answer, he was so happy that he went crazy. It's a pity that they couldn't have a family in the end 14. Harry has a tough character and rarely cries. He didn't cry when he faced Voldemort, was bitten by a basilisk, or was misunderstood and isolated by his classmates. The first time he cried was after Sirius left 15. Neville Longbottom, another boy born at the end of July. Voldemort did not choose him, but chose Harry. However, although his parents were alive, they would never know him again. At first he didn't look like a Gryffindor, with poor grades and forgetfulness. Even the passwords need to be written on paper. The standard of Gryffindor is courage. When he was in the first grade, he bravely blocked the trio, and Dumbledore added 10 points (did Mr. Deng remember the time when he faced Grindelwald?) In the fifth grade, he joined Dumbledore's Army and went to the Department of Mysteries with Harry. In the seventh grade, he choked Voldemort in front of him, drew the Gryffindor sword from the hat, killed Nagini, and destroyed Voldemort's last Horcrux. Only a true Gryffindor can draw the Gryffindor Sword. 16. Hermione Granger, born as a Muggle. She always stood firmly by Harry's side from beginning to end, and she still stood firmly by his side when he was misunderstood by everyone and had a cold war with Ron. She fought for her beliefs, she proposed the House Elf Liberation Front, and fought for species equality. In the last part, she modified her parents' memories, sent them to Australia, and went to the battlefield without hesitation. "Wendell and Monica Wilkins had no idea they had a daughter." Seventeen. Ron Weasley, a pure-blood wizard whose whole family betrayed his own blood. As the youngest son, he already had five outstanding brothers. Using his brothers' old things, he came to Hogwarts. Before he had time to make a difference, he made a good friend of the most famous boy in the wizarding world. Anyone can sympathize with a friend's misfortune, but it takes a very good nature to tolerate a friend who is happy. Dumbledore once said: "People are always easy to forgive others for their mistakes, but it is difficult to forgive others for their rights." His best friend is the famous Harry Potter, but he digested his jealousy silently, and even if he occasionally attacks, he will quickly return to his side. At the age of 11, he beat Professor McGonagall's chess game and was prepared to die. At the age of 12, he was very afraid of spiders, but he still went to the Forbidden Forest together, and later went deep into the Chamber of Secrets with Harry. At the age of 13, he faced a murderer who blew up a street and killed 12 people with a spell, and shouted angrily: "If you want to kill Harry, then you have to kill us too!" At the age of 15, he became a Death Eater in front of the Department of Mysteries. At the age of 17, he knocked out the Death Eaters, rescued Harry from the lake, and destroyed the Horcruxes. As a pure blood, he could fully enjoy the vested interests brought by his status, and he could live in peace without risking his life to fight, but he chose the most difficult path. 18. Ron's patron saint is a Jack Russell dog, Hermione's is an otter, and Jack Russell dogs specialize in chasing otters. Hedwig, in mythology, means the god who protects children. Its death means that no one will protect Harry anymore. 19. Harry Potter, the boy-who-lived. Before he was born, he was chased to become the "Chosen One" because of a prophecy. Because he was marked by another person prophesied, his fate was determined in his infancy. Not long after he was born, his parents were murdered. He never knew what his parents looked like until he was 11 years old. Until the age of 11, he lived with frequent beatings and cold violence, without a single friend. He passed through many levels at the age of 11, faced Quirrell and Voldemort at the age of 16, watched Dumbledore fall from the tower at the age of 17, and found out that he was destined to die. He watched the people around him stand in front of him and die for him one by one. His friend Cedric, his family Sirius, Lupine, Fred who was as close as a brother, and Dumbledore. Finally, he discovered that he was destined to die. However, the great thing about Harry is that he actively chooses to face it. He does not choose to hide in the Weasleys or Grimmauld Place, but actively chooses to fight. This is the whole difference between being dragged into the arena and facing a life-or-death fight and walking in with his head held high. What determines who we become is not our abilities but our choices.

This book has several fatal flaws. First, the author is very pretentious and likes to be sad, forcing some of his own immature thoughts into the story, resulting in a very confusing plot. Second, there is a plug-in that must follow the plot to gain points. Whether it is a process or a self-directed and self-acted plot, in the logical plot itself , forcibly inserting a protagonist, it suddenly becomes illogical and inexplicable. Many times, you can't understand the purpose of the protagonist's actions Third, the protagonist puts most of his points on Occlumency, but he writes all his inner world on his face. Everyone knows that he has a problem... Then what is the purpose of practicing Occlumency? Other than that, the writing style is actually pretty good. I hope it will change later...

The writing is quite good, but the protagonist is quite speechless. Simple things become complicated, he is indecisive, and the protagonist's thoughts change. First of all, the protagonist is an adult who traveled through time. It is normal for him to be confused at the beginning. He originally determined his goal [freedom] in the magic mirror, which is fine, but later on it was a little superfluous. What kind of friends and love? As soon as Dumbledore called, he immediately asked the protagonist to express that he wanted to have some [love], shall I go? You clearly and repeatedly said that you are an intruder, and after you determined that you set [freedom] as your goal, you were easily swayed like this? Is this an adult?

Emma

The protagonist is an ordinary person without intelligence, but he pretends to be a wise man who sees through everything. In addition, the author suffers from literary youth attacks from time to time. It makes the whole book look extremely awkward. It is recommended to just jump and take a look.

Brian Foley's appearance setting (arrangement): 1. Black hair, black eyes, thin body, pale skin 2. The bangs are a bit long, slightly covering the eyes I heard that fan art will be more refined? (Crazy silence)

The writing is too pretentious, and there are many small problems. For example, at the beginning, it is said that I am a fan of the original novel, but later it is my favorite novel. The bangs covering my eyes are forced to be "elegant and aristocratic". The character is too arrogant and has no ability. It looks very difficult to fight.

This is what I think of when I think of Ron

The protagonist can obviously live any life he wants based on his family background. If he needs knowledge and family education, if he needs power and connections, if he needs nothing, the system will not be of much use. Why do you have to be smart and jump to your death repeatedly? Even if you don't do anything, just have some galleons during the war.

Finished Six months and two days I have been following this book for about four months and discovered it from the daily introduction. This book deeply attracted me from the character setting to every detail, and I couldn't help but keep reading. I voted for it, gave rewards, and watched Brian grow up Thanks to the author "Jing Wu" for giving this book life, and I also look forward to the arrival of the next little cutie. Every time I finish reading a book, I feel empty inside, as if something has been lost. Now I roughly know that it should be that the protagonist in the book leaves the author's pen and the sight of us screen-peepers, and truly comes alive in his world. This is the first HP novel I have finished with a decent ending. (Those fucking eunuchs, please come back and update me!) Okay, back to the topic I read this book all night long, and also re-read it when I was short of books. It made me re-examine certain things. I feel like my own taste will be spoiled by you in the future 😥 The ending is very consistent with Rowling's writing style, a "fairy tale poem of love" Daphne is a good girl. When I saw her dying for the protagonist, I had an unclear premonition, but I didn't expect the foreshadowing to be revealed at the end. It's a pity that I didn't see the shadow of Death at the end. After all, it was so annoying that I wanted to crawl along the network cable and hit him. (Although I was killed instantly in the past) I thought I could write about the protagonist fighting to the God of Death But that's okay, after all, it is a fairy tale, and it is not good to fight and kill too much~ I hope the author's career will be prosperous~ and he will bring more short stories to everyone. I hope the next book will have better data and be known and liked by more people. Anyway, I am determined to follow you, just like Daphne never leaves the protagonist. I don't know why, the author didn't finish writing this speech? Quite strange, waiting for you. This is the first time I write a book review, it may not be very good, please forgive me~ Also mentioned: One person's blood book request for extra "Things About Fighting to the God of Death" "About the Story that Lao Deng and Lao Ge Have to Tell" "About the Later Story of the Protagonist and the Female Protagonist" Of course, it's okay not to write it, I just think it would be more interesting to choose one of the three classics. Also, it's finished, and I'll give you a helmsman to cheer you up. After all, it's the first HP novel to be officially completed, so I have to play the whole list, haha

Why do you all hate Hermione as the heroine?

It's really no brainer to start adding points. This system will be useless after graduation.

I also found a picture on the Internet, (I followed my previous friend's example and was lazy), and I could only find this one with blond hair and blue eyes. I hope the author doesn't dislike it.

I can't understand that you can either be a good person or a bad person. You can't become a bad person and then say: I want to participate because of the system restrictions and have no choice. Now I want to be a good person. What does this mean?

The protagonist is Slytherin, but he helps Gryffindor all day long and his stance is not firm.

This book is very good-looking and out of proportion to the results (on the one hand, the protagonist in the early stage is too literary and youthful, and I don't know why I can't find the book title in the starting point of this book). It is a refreshing protagonist among the routine fans. I stick with it because I am interested in the character of the protagonist. The plot is not watery and the pace is good, and the supporting characters are vivid (I personally don't like to use the brainless villain of the Lion Garden and the Snake Garden as a villain). This is a work that really suits my radio wave.

We have established a book club group where everyone can come in to communicate and chat 😃 Group number: 852581175

Reward building, 50 coins for one floor, one knot for 10 floors. The author gives a big boost and supports you

Really well written! Many of the designs and plots are worth recalling, but I won't go into too much detail, as any more would spoil the story, hhh. If you don't agree with the author's attitude towards various emotions, I'm afraid this book will be regarded as extremely poisonous. After all, many people feel that if they like something, they must get it, even if they don't belong to you, especially in the world of novels.

I finished reading it in about 5 days. I can only say that when I finish reading it and read the beginning, I feel like I am in another world. I feel that sometimes ordinary life is quite good.

I don't know what the protagonist does, he lives like a puppet controlled by the system.

After reading a little bit, I feel that it is a seriously underestimated kind of food (PS: compared to other Harry fandoms)