In Dragon Raja, I Married Erii

Why does your protagonist have such a strong loser vibe? Having read so many Dragon Raja fanfics, I think the biggest taboo in this genre is having a protagonist who acts like a loser. Since the original work already portrays a loser, if the fanfic continues down that path, unless your writing is phenomenal, you're basically just writing out of pure passion.

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Another loser protagonist! Lu Mingfei was already useless enough; trying to be like him won't save the dragon race! Besides, every comeback comes at a price, with bloodshed and sacrifice. A happy ending? I really don't believe it!

I hadn't even read the book when I posted this, but I have to say, your title is just too cheeky.

The first chapter says the protagonist has an amazing memory, able to recall exactly what he was doing at the exact moment, but a dozen or so chapters later he says he can't remember anything about the dragon race anymore. It's nauseating!

It's a bit frustrating and unpleasant to watch; there's always a NTR (Netorare) vibe. Don't get involved in ambiguous relationships with women you're not really interested in; it's annoying.

It felt like the focus wasn't on the main character; he was portrayed as far too useless. Also, there were too few interesting points; that's about it for now. Furthermore, his "word of power" seemed rather pointless.

To be honest, if you're not going to take Nono in, then don't depict the protagonist's feelings for her. That ball scene felt like NTR (Netorare, a Japanese term for infidelity).

Dragon blood purity and dragon blood concentration are two different things. Chu Zihang's inability to exorcise the seven deadly sins stemmed from his own inferior bloodline. The Seven Deadly Sins test does not include violent bloodshed.

It seems like the protagonist's Word of Power is pretty useless!