The True Ancestor Became a Vampire Hunter

It's a good book, but it's very toxic in the early stages. Dear author, the protagonist you wrote in the early stage almost persuaded me to quit the book. If you are impatient, you will never give up the book after reading 30 pages. It gives people an inexplicable feeling. Obviously the protagonist knows that blood will automatically return to the body, and releasing holy magic will harm himself, but he does not want to believe that he is a vampire. This setting is really nt, and I feel that the protagonist's IQ in the early stage is really low. They almost forced me to quit 😅

One moment Jiang was joking and the other moment Kain, author, aren't you tired of typing? Can't we just unify it into one name? Wouldn't it be over if we just change the identity issue to Kain? One moment Jiang Xiaotan, the other Kain, it's very awkward!

This is just a simple picture, it was originally used by Pigeon himself to set it up.

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A small recommendation, come on the author!

To be honest, the idea of ​​this novel is very good, but the writing style and the handling of the relationship between the characters are still a bit immature. It seems to have no major flaws, but in fact, after the early stage, you will find that it seems to become boring all of a sudden, because there is no catchy and interesting point like the beginning to attract people to read. There is another problem that many write this kind of invincible novels. Maybe the protagonist's performance is more reasonable in the actual situation or in the eyes of the author, but the reader is from God's perspective, and it is impossible to completely substitute the protagonist's perspective, unless you write the narrative from the protagonist's perspective, but it is more difficult to be brilliant. So, a fatal problem arises. In fact, many people think so, that is, the protagonist and the people around him are too ignorant of the protagonist's extraordinary features. This gives people the feeling that all members are selectively blind, which will greatly reduce the sense of substitution and give people the illusion of being forcibly hidden.                                                                              The protagonist has never been able to realize that he is special without a very special reason, and even the people around him have never realized the problem or told the truth even without the protagonist deliberately hiding it. Finally, I would like to give a little advice to the author who may have read it. Several books written by a great author named Yuxia are basically of this type. However, in his novels, the protagonist deliberately hides himself or deliberately does not let people around him know, but even so, he is exposed relatively quickly. In the later books, he is even exposed even faster. After all, Basically, the same sentence is said. Whether the novel is reasonable should not be viewed from the perspective of the protagonist in the article, but from the perspective of the reader. After all, the reader can only partially assume the views of the characters in the article. However, once it seems unreasonable to the reader, it becomes a question of suspicious neighbors and stealing axes. No matter how you explain it, it will be unconvincing.                                  After all, this is a new author's first attempt, I hope the author can grow quickly, and I also hope the author can finish this novel well and accumulate popularity, I hope the author can also become a god in the future! Full order support!

Why did Kai turn a blind eye to his own physical condition? There is a feeling of forcibly echoing the title of the article. As an ordinary person who travels through time, shouldn't we be afraid if there are abnormalities in our body? Shouldn't we find out?

Well written, but a bit vampire-y 😏

I think Renaldo is more suitable to be the protagonist than Kain

Although there are many people who should know this, I would like to point out that the word vampire only appeared in the 18th century. The Cain in the Bible is the ancestor of evil people, not the ancestor of vampires, although many novels, games and so on now set Cain like this. But considering that Christianity himself is a suture monster, it doesn't matter.

Although this is the second true ancestor, is there any problem? No problem.

I bought a chapter specifically to complain about you, why don't I have this book in my house (ノ￣д￣)ノ

Why was the countess turned into a pig by her own men? She couldn't undo it by herself. She's such a loser.

You have to work harder

Margaret Anita Vance

Good luck with your next book. I would like to give my personal opinion. Don't have plots with ntr elements like giving away a girl (whether active or passive). Don't write about women being raped, especially people related to the protagonist. Don't be confused about the protagonist and the supporting characters. Who is the c-biter and who is the foil?

Brother, can you still persist? If it doesn't work, let's switch to a Western fantasy theme such as DND or WOW. The traffic will be larger. This original creation is not very popular for the first time. I am tired of generating electricity for love. How about... Give up and start a new book? I believe most readers can understand that the data is so poor that there are probably not many people who have subscribed or rewarded it.

An unspeakable story happened between the young master of the cult and the chief maid in the secret room, and one could only vaguely hear what injections and gestures were made. . Is this the distortion of human nature or the loss of morality? Stay tuned for the next chapter: Pregnancy, or is it clouds and rain?

Just want to tell you that I am not lazy

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In the past two years, I have seen some random guesses and I will apologize for any errors in the plot. Generally speaking, the earth has developed to a very high level of civilization in the interstellar era. The planet where the protagonist is located is an experimental site for human evolution by the earth civilization. The gods are administrators, magic is technology, and all extraordinary races are actually modified creatures. The protagonist's father is a subordinate of the earth, and his identity is the god of the Cross, and he is also Adam. The mother, Lilith, is an indigenous person who took over the artifact (an instrument left behind by earth civilization) for some reasons. The second ancestor, Kain, is an indigenous person, but a personality was implanted to check and balance Lilith. This personality, named Jiang Xiaotan, was created by the "Creator God" of earth civilization who presides over many things on this planet using his memories from before he was 25 years old. Kain caused trouble to contaminate the artifact because of the Demon Dragon King of the dragon clan (an indigenous lizard was discovered and captured and transformed, gaining wisdom and transforming the entire dragon clan). Kain and his mother Lilith solved the problem. In the end, Lilith's consciousness left the body, and Kain's original complete personality was annihilated. The protagonist at the beginning of the novel, that is, the "Jiang Xiaotan" who thought he was a time traveler, was the backup used to replace himself after the complete annihilation of Kain.

This chapter opens a huge new map.

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