The Great Holy Knight of the Marvel Universe

The justice of the Holy Light has failed. The eternal hunt has begun. Power itself is not frightening; what is frightening is its master. The Holy Light betrayed me Counterfeits forged with blood and shadows The cycle of life has ended I am the Frozen Heart of Calamity You cannot escape the shadow of death.

I read the first few chapters, and the writing was really messy. The bodyguard didn't believe it could be glossed over; there was no need to keep repeating it. This isn't a script; why would an extra have so much to say?

Thanos randomly wiping out half of all life was incredibly stupid. If he wanted to exterminate life, why didn't he just turn all life forms into females? That way, the universe would "self-cleanse" in decades or even centuries. [Funny]

Could you please cut the fluff? And stop using single and double quotation marks all the time; it makes it easy for people to think you're talking about your inner thoughts.

The Marvel universe and the DC universe have conflicting worldviews. Is it really appropriate to force them together like this? Moreover, the power disparity between the two worlds is too great. What is Thanos supposed to do? Darkseid could wipe out this trash with a single glance. Does he even deserve to be the ruler of the universe?

I just read the first chapter, bro. Your descriptive skills and writing style need improvement. Many things aren't explained clearly, and details are often missing. Also, you like to use metaphors. If your descriptive ability is lacking, don't use metaphors; it makes the reading experience difficult.

If I haven't transmigrated in ten minutes, I'll kill the author!!!

In many American comic book fanfictions, the protagonists claim that Asgardian soldiers are still engaged in melee combat, yet they themselves are also fighting in close quarters. Look at the warriors in fantasy novels; they can unleash aura slashes with melee weapons. Are Asgardian warriors really that weak? Actually, look at the standard weaponry of a deserter in the TV series *Agents of S. H.

A DC & Marvel compilation? Are you sure you can write that? May the holy light fool you.

This is rubbish. Aside from the resurrection ability, everything else is garbage.