The Great Holy Knight of the Marvel Universe

The justice of the Holy Light failed The eternal hunt begins The power itself is not terrible, what is terrible is its master The Holy Light betrayed me Fake forged with blood and shadow The cycle of life is over I am the frozen heart of the Scourge You cannot escape the shadow of death

I read the first few chapters and the expressions were very messy. The bodyguard didn't believe it could be summed up in one sentence. There was no need to go back and forth. This is not a script. How could the supporting actor come up with so many words?

It's too stupid for Thanos to randomly wipe out half of all life. If you want to wipe out life, why not turn all living things into females? In this way, it can take anywhere from a few decades to a few hundred years for the universe to "self-purify" [Funny]

Can you use less nonsense? And don't use single quotes or double quotes when you speak. It's easy for people to think that it's mental activity.

The Marvel world and the DC world have conflicting world views. Is it okay to put them together in such a blunt way? Moreover, the difference in military power between the two worlds is too big. What do you want Thanos to do? Darkseid can kill a scumbag with just one glance, is he worthy of being the overlord of the universe?

Just read the first chapter, bro. Your descriptive skills and writing style need to improve. Many things are not explained clearly, and detailed descriptions are often missing. And he also likes to use metaphors. Don't use metaphors if you don't have the ability to describe them, as they may make you uncomfortable. For example, in the first chapter, when Kingpin appeared, he kept talking about that fat man and that fat man. Who knows who you are talking about. Moreover, there is no explanation when the scene changes, and the reader often feels that he does not understand what is happening, although he can still guess the plot in the end. But it's uncomfortable to read like this, and the characterization is not good enough. Author, you still need to make progress, please work hard.

If I don't travel through time in ten minutes, I'll beat the author to death! ! !

In many American comics, the protagonists say that Asgardian soldiers are still fighting in close combat, but they themselves are also engaging in close combat with their enemies. Look at the warriors in those fantasy novels who have the ability to use melee weapons to launch grudge slashes. Are Asgardian warriors so weak? In fact, if you look at the American TV series SHIELD, a deserter's standard weapon can turn an ordinary person into a super soldier like Captain America. That was equipment from two to three thousand years ago, what about now? To be honest, I still like DC. The scene between Superboy and Zod was an extraordinary battle. In order to consider the combat power of mortal team members, Marvel lowered the overall power level in the film and television version. In other words, based on the performance in movies and TV shows, Thanos can't even defeat Zod, let alone fight Darkseid.

DC Marvel collection? Are you sure you can write it? May the Holy Light fool you

What rubbish. Except for the resurrection, everything else is rubbish.