I Have a Clone in the Immortal Realm

The reason this book was criticized at the beginning is that it failed to understand the reader's thoughts from the author's perspective. I agree with the author's statement; the beginning of this article is indeed logically sound. A ruler of a country hopes to summon a useful divine beast as the foundation for protecting the nation at a great cost, but instead summons a useless remnant soul…

This is ridiculous! The protagonist supposedly brought back a cultivation technique from another world and practiced it with someone in a chat group he'd never seen before, even bringing along his group members. He didn't reveal any of his secrets—wealth, companionship, techniques, or land—to strangers, showing absolutely no suspicion and just smugly pleased with himself.

The author has been writing books for quite some time, but due to limitations in personal talent, the resulting works may be less than satisfactory. However, the author can control the logic and flaws within the book to some extent. Several readers have already criticized it for being toxic because they didn't read it carefully... The author has already written about this several times in the story; is writing it again just padding the word count?

It was a great idea, but it was ruined. I won't go into the rest, I didn't read much of it anyway. Just the first chapter: if you're writing it as if you're the female lead, why portray the princess so negatively? Even if conflict is to be created, there are many ways, right?

Before Chapter 16, the nation was willing to spend 100 million spirit stones to summon auspicious beasts, a five-inch calligraphy scroll cost 10,000 spirit stones, and a six-inch calligraphy scroll could help the princess overcome her tribulation and save the country. How come a six-inch scroll couldn't even be bought for 100 million?

After reading the first dozen or so chapters, I couldn't take it anymore. Let me share my thoughts: The premise is good—a remnant soul travels between worlds. The disgusting part: Once the protagonist is transported to another world, a maid threatens him with his life, saying things like, "If the princess dies, you'll be buried with her," a threat from beginning to end.

You risked your life to obtain a martial arts technique, and now you're teaching it to a bunch of strangers you met online? Don't you know the saying, "The law should not be lightly passed on"? What are the characters of these people? If they learn your technique and indiscriminately kill innocent people, even causing mass deaths, won't the blame still fall on you?

Consider the protagonist's situation: he's inexplicably summoned, only to be killed as soon as he arrives, and upon returning, he finds himself nearly paralyzed. Helping the princess through her tribulation to survive is understandable, but the author's portrayal of the protagonist showing absolutely no resentment is the problem.

The subject matter is good and very novel; otherwise, I wouldn't have been able to finish reading it. The writing is indescribable; it's a rambling account with inconsistencies. One of the seven most talented people in the country can sell a 5-inch calligraphy piece for 500,000 spirit stones, while the protagonist helps the princess successfully overcome her tribulation by writing a 6-inch…

Having read only the first few chapters, the author deliberately crafted a story that wasn't polished, making the protagonist seem rather foolish. The princess is hostile, no problem, the protagonist just needs to perform well and the readers will be satisfied, but the author doesn't. Talking about generating electricity and lightning rods is met with refutation and skepticism.