Paper Fruit in One Piece

The sand crocodile has been strengthened too much. Is it necessary for the power of knowledge to be so strong? Collapsed

It feels complicated. I really want to praise this book, but I still feel that it has a lot of room for improvement. My favorite part is the crocodile scene, because the emotional expression is great, and the rest of it doesn't have such a big feeling. But overall, it's worth a visit.

The author has a bold idea to add the attribute of teleportation to the protagonist's knowledge. This can firstly explain Eniro's insight into the protagonist's thoughts, and secondly, strengthen the protagonist's ability to position himself as a strategist. During the war, he directly led tens of thousands of members of the Whitebeard Pirates to fight guerrillas, and then made the Straw Hats and themselves famous. How nice Also, what do I think about the protagonist's nickname being the Pale Prince?

Give the author a suggestion. Before the pig's trotter traveled through time, it was a paper cutter who knew some of the secrets of this thing.

Either do it without cp, or confirm the relationship. I have read countless novels, and all of them have done it very uniformly: "I know you like me, but I just pretend not to know. It's not because I don't love you, but because I'm not strong enough." It's like saying that if you are strong enough, the crisis will not appear. It makes people sad to read 😒

It was clear that I traveled through time but I forgot about the plot. I selectively forgot every time. I was planning this and that. It was like having fun in my head. To be honest, the Straw Hats could have arrived at Lovedrew smoothly with or without you. You were talking on paper and planning ahead, but nothing changed. You still followed the plot development honestly without even changing the lines. It was written in such a tight schedule and I felt nervous when I didn't wait for the day. You might as well be careless and careless. The atmosphere of the protagonist is incompatible with the Straw Hats.

Such a buggy thing. Matching the world view of One Piece. The first and simplest counterfeit currency. Bringing down the world government economy is not a problem. If you have money, you have nothing, you can sponsor the navy with billions, and hire people to teach you physical skills and domineering skills. On the other hand, it supports the funding of the revolutionary army. In this world, you can make flowers out of paper fruits and fake money.

After reading the first two chapters, I thought it was a dark realistic style, but I didn't expect it to be about boat flow? I didn't expect that it's already 2021 and there are still people writing about boating. The author should be mentally prepared. Boating is completely thankless. 😂

After reading more than two hundred chapters, I put it down. It's not because the author didn't write well, but because of the limitations of the book. Watching One Piece as a teenager made my blood boil, but that was more than ten years ago. There is definitely a difference between me at that time and me now. Three views and hobbies are different. The most important thing about Chuanliu is the love for the original work. The author writes it very well. I haven't followed the One Piece comics since the top, just because I used to like them a lot, and when I have free time, I will take the time to follow the development... So without the emotional bonus, I don't want to continue reading... Now when I read the Pirates comics, what I like more is the protagonist whose goal from the beginning is to "overthrow the rule of the Celestial Dragons and improve people's lives" and has been consistent. A very good book. I, who don't like to follow the boat, read more than 200 chapters. Relived the emotion of more than ten years ago. Thank you author.

Apart from anything else, the third chapter is really annoying from the beginning. It has a flowing plot, no order, awkward dialogues, and inexplicable complaints. I can't stand it. I don't know what happens next. I hope the author will change it. It's too annoying.

The captain must have the majesty of the captain, even if he is a hot-blooded fan, at least the king will be against the king and the general will be against him. And it shouldn't be the protagonist who gives the orders, it should be Wang Lufei

The writing is good, but it's too bragging. Can Crocodile predict the future? Oh my god, Oda doesn't even know that Lao Sha can predict the future.

Hunter and Prey

Cheongsam Nami

I subscribed to a chapter specifically and came back to comment. Although everyone said it was good, or there were some bad ones in the front but some good ones in the back But, I really didn't want to read any more. The first three chapters made me cry out, what the hell, this extremely embarrassing conversation, this chronicle of the plot, why did Luffy inexplicably want the protagonist to become his crew? A wave of plot killing?:-O It was completely forced YY? Gone, gone

High EQ: Emotional reproduction and boat flow Low EQ: Basically the same plot as the original 😂 This book feels like the second episode of a game. The plot is similar, but it is more efficient. Prepare resources in advance to refresh the book.

Label fraud, it's all routines, what is anti-routine, the protagonist doesn't join Luffy for the first time, so I admit that this is anti-routine, I'll tell you what anti-routine is, I usually quit after just one glance at a novel like this, but I not only commented but also paid six yuan for the little fan value required for this comment, This novel is actually a counter-routine.

Although the protagonist is written as if he is a real pirate, arrogant, arrogant, and indifferent to life, the most fundamental thing is not visible at all. Whether he is a kind pirate like Luffy or a purely bad pirate, they actually have one thing in common, and that is unfettered freedom. Doing evil or doing good is because you want to do it, so you do it. I don't see any freedom in the protagonist. Everything has a purpose and he imposes his will on others, just like a parent who severely forces his or her children to study. They sincerely believe that it is for the good of their children. The disgusting self-righteousness and the ugliness of not respecting other people's ideas are invisible to me. Maybe in the author's opinion, the protagonist he wrote is very harmonious with the Straw Hats, but in my opinion, he is out of tune.

To be honest, the protagonist's current mentality is not at all compatible with the Straw Hat Pirates. No matter how powerful the enemy they face, the Straw Hat Pirates will always move forward courageously. The protagonist wants to catch everything and only thinks about it when he is 100% sure! Alas, to be honest, I don't really like the character of the protagonist. If I don't change, I might as well quit the Straw Hats and do it myself! To be precise, I don't want someone like the protagonist to be in the Straw Hat Pirates. I feel that the protagonist has destroyed some of the purity of the Straw Hats.

There is really nothing good about the writing 😒. The book is basically finished when the plot of the original animation ends. The author of "Flower" basically does not need to think about the plot. Anyway, he will finish the book when the plot of the original work is over. Do you expect him to write something different from the original work? Stop dreaming, nine times out of ten, when the plot of the original work is over, the book will be over.

It's been really boring since I became a Celestial Dragon.

The plasticity of emerald water splash is similar to that of paper, right?

Did I get drunk and follow the dragon people in the boat? Did you join the navy based on the chapter title? Can I still watch it later? I'm really convinced

Paper Fruit

To be honest, I met you so late This book has been recommended to me more than once But every time I saw the comment section, I passed it by again This time I finally tried to read it After that, more than 300 chapters passed in one breath Let me tell you This is the most beautiful book I have ever read. The existence of the protagonist is not obtrusive br>The portrayal of the original characters is also in line with the original work The adaptation of the plot can be justified The author also helps Oda improve the bugs from time to time Conscience Of course everyone has different tastes But I still recommend everyone to understand it As for some chapters, it is said that everyone understands it 🤭 Don't worry about it

The power comes from paper. Today's paper has nothing to do with it. It is fireproof and waterproof, and there is paper in transformers.

Are there any other books about boat flow? Recommended by book friends (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

Your protagonist is Tang Buddha? You kill and fight, and even if you jump to help others, you still have to say "you did it first". Why do you jump to join the merchant ship because you want to take advantage of others, but they still have to follow you? It's so exciting, I can't stand the first chapter anymore.

He is a pretty ordinary pirate, but what is different is the way he saves Ace. It's a pity that there are too few emotional scenes and the skills are a bit messy

How to say it. . . Compared to The Magician Next Door, this book is indeed a bit "mediocre". . . First of all, don't steal the famous scenes/captions of the original characters. You can create several new characters yourself. Anyway, it is normal for the number of enemies to increase due to the butterfly effect. You can also create one or two chapters of your own, or even use the boss from the movie version. But he didn't steal other people's highlight moments, even the scene where Luffy dunked his hat. . . I don't dislike the protagonist's fun-loving character, but it's a pity that it wasn't well written, and it conflicts with the male protagonist's character of "reluctant to take the lead".