Torch of Immortality

There may be a misunderstanding between the protagonist and Li Changge at the beginning, but is there something missing in the male protagonist's logical chain? How could he accept in one second that he was responsible for the destruction of the venue and needs to pay for it? I suspect the author is taking it for granted here, which makes this misunderstanding very blunt.

I personally suggest you change your name. Your name looks very much like a studio work.

I feel like the main character is a bit dull. It says "The Return of the Excalibur" is written, but he still wants to talk his way up, and he gets interrupted every time something happens. It's so uncomfortable.

Is it possible that it's too draggy and you can't read it smoothly? There's a bit of ink staining. I've read about 40 of them and I feel like I have a headache and can't stand them anymore. The subject matter is pretty good, but the plot is not very good.

I think the princess is just YishaX

Spending more than ten chapters at the beginning writing about a group of gangsters and delinquents? What's the point? Very fascinated to see

Then I'll take second place😃

I haven't seen this type of writing before, I hope it will be well written

😓, It's like me learning to kill gods in a mental hospital

Excuse me, studio text? The author has so many books, why doesn't he have a single review? I have many questions?