My Retirement Plan Expands from the Three Kingdoms to the Myriad Worlds

I would like to ask, in martial arts, you have written three flowers and five qi toward the original, five declines of heaven and man, enlightenment, and how to write immortals later. Your martial arts has written immortals and immortals, five declines of heaven, humans, and five declines. Is martial arts that powerful?

It's a pity that the protagonist's golden finger only has storage space and the ability to travel through time, which is already strong enough. Later, he had to add some messy abilities and finally got a weapon spirit. It was also related to the characters in the list of gods. It was really poisonous.

In summary, I was so embarrassed that I didn't know how others felt, so I slipped away.

It gives me a headache to read, there is a long paragraph of densely packed words, especially some special symbols stacked in a large paragraph.

Well written Have you seen any improvements to this?

I originally thought it was the Infinite Luck Dynasty style, but in the end there was just a guy wandering around. As a king, he didn't think about how to strengthen his territory or how to dominate the heavens. He just kept wandering around there. I can't stand it anymore. Goodbye.

Our protagonist, your protagonist, what the hell is this writing method, can't it just appear once or twice? It's happened so many times, it's so awkward and awkward

It's dazzling to read a large pile of text without segmentation. There are so many words crowded together that I don't know how to change the map.

It was pretty good at first, but it was because I saw Huang Yaoshi's possessed feeling... It was so bad that I jumped right away.

Why not write about unifying the Three Kingdoms?