The Path of Spiritual Practice That Begins with Settling Down

It's too strenuous to read, but it's fine if you look at it yourself, but it's very tiring to read after you turn it into sentences and paragraphs. The meaning of the spelling of your words is neither interesting nor clear. It is just trying to imitate some ancient taste, but it makes no sense. Writing novels must be down-to-earth. The kind of form and writing style you yearn for are something you personally don't have. First of all, if you can't say a sentence well in vernacular, it's even more impossible for you to imitate ancient vernacular.

(Ming Zun) Is this novel your size? ! The first picture is from this book, and the second picture is from Ming Zun. 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂

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I read a few well-written ones, but after seeing the emergence of similar systems, I didn't want to read them anymore. I felt that the emergence of the system was a bit disappointing. Personally, I don't like system-driven novels. Let's put them on the bookshelf first and see what happens later. Nowadays, I spend more time looking for books than reading. It's hard to find a good one. It's a pity that it's a system.

Alas, you should write an outline of what kind of character you should change and how you should behave. How can you have such a serious persecution delusion as a pig's foot and have a pure, inactive and happy-go-lucky temperament!

As for this novel, I have read it a lot. Your plot is completely copied from Ming Zun's, but it's not impossible to learn from it. Of course, this is based on your own ideas. Ah, you just changed the name, is it yours? Are you kidding me? Then I might as well read Ming Zun. What you write is completely different from others. Your writing style is not as good as others, and your word count is not as many as others. Why don't I read others?

Hongjun is a self-created character in the Ming Dynasty novel "The Romance of the Gods". There is no such god in orthodox Taoism. [1] Some people in Taiwan, China, currently believe in the Taoist sect of ancestor Hongjun, but this is nonsense in the eyes of most Taoists. In "The Romance of the Gods", he is the master of Laozi, Yuanshi Tianzun, and Tongtian Cult Master. [2] Hongjun in Honghuangliu novels is the manifested entity of the Great Dao, but in orthodox Taoism, the manifested entity of the Great Dao is Yuqing Yuanshi Tianzun.

The first copy is a complete copy of Ming Zun, which is very entertaining to watch. Sometimes the logic of the copy is a bit illogical.

Pure lj novel, Shen Nong is dead, the rhythm is messy, the slow explosion in the beginning was thought to be a slow-paced daily immortal cultivation novel, and suddenly a dog p system popped up and exploded directly. It was so poisonous that it was not only out of place in the drama, but also the rhythm was suddenly so fast. The previous leisurely and fairy spirit was completely gone. Looking at the comments section, it was plagiarized and it was hard not to suspect that it was copied and stitched together.

Do you have to live a primitive life to become an immortal? Doctor Strange can still access WIFI.

In general, reading your novel is equivalent to reading a pirated novel, which is full of typos and is updated slower than the original version.

Looking left and right, I can't see the main character Qiu Hong, I can only see the big shadow behind him named Qian Chen.

The serious cultivation of immortality is so beautiful, but a similar system is disgusting. It is like eating half-eaten noodles and suddenly a cockroach turns out of the bowl. It makes people feel uncomfortable.

It's hazy, the plot is too boring, and unappealing. It's mediocre and has no climax, and it's easy to fall into the street.

What a great writing style and subject matter, but the whole system game genre is really off-putting!

The topic of writing is too biased! It feels a bit like painting a tiger instead of a dog.

The biggest failure is the system writing. What's the atmosphere like now? Also write system papers

I haven't watched Danyun Zhongshan yet. . . This book is pretty good, easy and unsystematic (looking for someone of the same genre) 🙂

It's too bland, show me you're asleep

Copied the latest two chapters? The plot is exactly the same as that of Immortal Fish Art, no idea? At first, forget about daily life, but suddenly a random plot comes in. Forget it, it is still the plot in other books I have read. It is so shocking. If you don't want to write, don't write. What's the point of copying books?

The pace is a bit too slow, like a development game

When I saw the road number, I felt it was nonsense, and I really wanted to persuade you to quit.

This book is awesome! You have to use someone else's name to pick a road number. Goodbye! The author can continue to enjoy himself!

Why does it feel a bit like I'm in charge of the fairyland at the beginning?

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~