Transmigrating Through the Worlds: Marvel’s Mechanical Hunter

This name is so girly! Can the author please change ABB's name?!

First of all, I have to say that the first world was a bit awkward, and I couldn't continue watching, especially the part with the female lead in the first world. It was so awkward. Secondly, Xiuer. She had the blueprints for the mechanical dog, but she still needed a dog's soul. After building it, it was actually categorized as a pet... And there was even a quantity limit?!

I'm just baffled. All these American comic book writers insist on making the protagonist Chinese. Can't they be mixed-race or native-born Americans? What are you thinking when you write a Chinese person fighting for justice on American soil as a superhero? Are you trying to show your loyalty to your American daddy? What's the difference between you and the writers of Shang-Chi?

Although the protagonist obtained a system, he was originally just an ordinary person and needed a new world to transition into, adapt to combat, and hone his mental fortitude! It's also a process of accumulation! As for the excessive length of the ending, that's unavoidable! After all, when you arrive in a new world, you have to do something, right?

Well, if you're into mechanical engineering, what's the point of working with it if you lack creativity? Just give them a blueprint and throw it into a machining center, that's it. What's the point of having a protagonist?

The main universe is Marvel, and even a genius like Tony Stark often gets beaten up. And you're suppressing the protagonist's cheat abilities? That's just ridiculous. Adding all sorts of restrictions to perfectly good technology is simply disgusting.

Putting everything else aside, in the Marvel universe, everyone's afraid of Thanos, the Ancient One, and a few are even afraid of Odin. I reckon some will be afraid of the Celestials in the future. But let's not even talk about the rest. What are you afraid of Thanos for? As long as you're not stupid enough to directly confront him, even if he wipes you out, so what?

The synopsis is well-written. But it fell apart a bit when you started writing. The first world is The Walking Dead, what were you thinking? And it took so long to write.

I guess the author's surname is Ye, and that they are 16 years old.

Honestly, the zombies in The Walking Dead are too weak. I don't understand if those who survived the initial outbreak of the virus all lost their intelligence, allowing themselves to be bullied by those weaklings like that? Is this what the writers wanted?