Signing In, Starting from Valhalla

The Lock of Heaven can be transformed by the pollution of Kuanglan... Are you kidding me? Even if you can transfer it, if you dare to transfer the gold pickup, King's Treasure House and EA will fight you desperately if you blow yourself up on the spot.

The setting is not rigorous and there are a lot of bugs. The author is still tough on it.

Joan of Arc? Do you think this is Joan of Arc? (Pointing to Artoria's chest)

It would be outrageous for a knight to be able to transform the Lock of Heaven without dying. Lancelot's dirty hands touching Jin Shining's other treasures made him angry and take out EA. This is equivalent to face-to-face NTR. Jin Shining was so angry that he directly opened the omniscient and omnipotent star? ? The golden image collapsed.

Brother Brush has a + agility, and also has the mind eye skill, the protagonist has c agility and everything else is e. It's outrageous to be able to beat him 😅. To put it bluntly, the protagonist's master Kotomine Kirei can kill the protagonist.

After reading 151-252, it seems that the author thinks that the belief of "in order to live" is low-end? Why? Could it be that your belief in becoming stronger in order to live a better life for yourself and to become the final winner in the trial is inferior to anyone else? This is outrageous

There are too many setting bugs. I feel that the author has only read Fate and not checked the settings carefully. The simplest red rose thing that can break monsters can only break monsters. Why should Iax break it? Iax's thing is a standard technological creation. If you say that Iax is not hard enough and can be broken by Red Rose, I don't understand why I can break it with monster breakers. In addition, I remember that except for the twin family ones, there is only one magic seal.

I remember that after IXA's spear form is inserted into the ground, it can release spike attacks from the ground, which can be regarded as mid-range killing. But in the hands of the protagonist, IXA is completely used as a shield, which is too bad.

Because I have watched Fate, I can completely accept it as long as the character's lines are not too abrupt (because the image has been set in my mind, which is the advantage of most fan fiction), and the author's control of the character's lines is very concise. After reading it, it feels a bit like Hemingway who doesn't use many adjectives. The most rare thing is the rationality of the plot. The author always grasps the protagonist's thoughts, which is to become stronger and survive. The plot that follows this idea is very reasonable (this is reflected in the fact that there is not too much psychological description of the characters, that is, every time they see a character, they start to think randomly, which completely reflects the protagonist's desire to become stronger and survive). Anyway, go for it! I feel like this is another great fate fanfic that is similar to the beginning of The Eighth Crown, but I hope the protagonist's abilities become too broken. After all, that's why I gave up the Eighth Crown. I hope that more attention will be paid to the development of existing abilities. The fierce battle of passion and strategy will make people like it more than one-size-fits-all, but if the author can write the feeling of One Punch Man, just pretend that I didn't say it. I'm even more looking forward to the main line now, the 12-player battle.

How does berserker hide from EA? Just relying on his agility to dodge is weird. EA is not a light cannon, but a space-time rupture that cuts through the world. Even the space is distorted. How can you still dodge normally? Just hard cloud