Signing In, Starting from Valhalla

The Lock of Heaven can be corrupted and transformed by Mad Orchid... Are you kidding me? Even if it could be transformed, if you dare to transform it, the Golden Pikachu will self-destruct on the spot, and both the Vault of Kings and EA will fight you to the death.

The setting is flawed, riddled with bugs, and the author is still stubborn.

Joan of Arc? Do you think this is Joan of Arc? (Pointing to Artoria's chest)

It's absurd that a knight could transform the Chains of Heaven without dying with his bare hands. Lancelot's dirty hands touching Gilgamesh's other Noble Phantasms made him so angry that he took out Ea, which is equivalent to NTR'd him in person. Wouldn't Gilgamesh be so angry that he would immediately activate the All-Knowing and All-Powerful Star? Gilgamesh's image is ruined.

The brush-wielding guy has A+ agility and the Mind's Eye skill, while the protagonist has C agility and everything else is E. It would be absurd if they could beat him 😅. To put it bluntly, even the protagonist's Master, Kirei Kotomine, could kill him.

After reading chapters 151-252, it seems the author considers the belief of "just to survive" to be low-level? Why? Does the belief of becoming stronger to live a better life and become the ultimate winner of the trial really matter less than anyone else's? That's absurd.

There are too many plot holes. It feels like the author only read Fate and didn't check the lore carefully. The simplest anti-magic weapon, the Crimson Rose, can only break magic; how could it possibly break IAX? IAX is a standard technological construct. You could say IAX isn't hard enough and was broken by the Crimson Rose, but I don't understand why it could be broken by anti-magic weapons. Also, I remember that except for the Twins' Crest, there's only one Magic Crest.

I remember that when the IXA's spear form is planted in the ground, it can release spikes from the ground to attack, which is considered a mid-range attack. But in the protagonist's hands, the IXA is used entirely as a shield, which is just ridiculous.

Having read Fate, I can accept most of the characters' dialogue as long as it's not too jarring (because the characters' images are already in my mind, which is an advantage of most fanfiction). The author's control over the dialogue is very concise, giving it a Hemingway-esque feel of using few adjectives.

How can Berserker dodge EA? With his agility, it's a miracle he can. EA isn't a light cannon; it's a spacetime rift that cuts through the world, distorting space itself. How can you possibly dodge it normally? It's just a matter of luck.