Crossing the Immortal Realms

After seeing the latest chapter, I couldn't help but comment. This book is different from many other articles on the market. To a certain extent, this can be regarded as a rebirth novel, but what is different from others is that the heroine died in the previous life, not because of arrogance or stupidity, or because she misunderstood a scumbag man or a scumbag woman due to unclear understanding of people. As a general, she fulfills her duties and fights to the death; as a king, she protects her subordinates; as an immortal, she protects the common people and fights against the devil! In female videos, it is rare to see the heroine die because of righteousness, responsibility, and responsibility. There is no mention of strong women from beginning to end, and the heroine does not shout about strong women, but the heroine's actions and experiences all reveal strong women! Moreover, in the article, whether in the lower world or the fairy world, you can see a group of outstanding female nuns and immortals. Xianxia novels only focus on strength, not gender!

I have read so many cultivation novels. The author's writing is pretty good and the plot is well thought out. However, the details sometimes make people look a little weird and violate the original settings (for example, after drifting on the sea, he pays special attention to his sleeves being torn, and mortals use sea water to wash and bathe, etc.) ; The foreshadowing is very obvious, but it is not made clear when solving the puzzle later (or maybe it is because I have to continue to be bored). For example, Ah Li's blood killed the Mo family. Not all readers can infer from the text (sometimes they are forgetful or read too fast). These are quite obvious shortcomings. But the flaws do not hide the flaws. The author's writing is capable, the narrative is smooth, and it looks decent. As long as the plot does not collapse, people will want to continue reading. I hope to see a masterpiece that breaks through the fairy map 😁 The first book can be such a powerful one. I hope the author will work hard and become a great master in the future 👍

I can't stand it. An older woman who traveled through time travels and writes like a retarded person.

I just read Chapter 13 and I really can't stand it anymore. An adult before time travel is like a retard.

It's outrageous that the editor wouldn't recommend such a beautiful article. Dacai lv1. Qidian Female Channel

I feel like many people just give up on fairy novels when they see a male protagonist. However, this book is very good in terms of setting, layout, structure, writing and plot. It is much better than some formulaic books. The more you read, the better.

1. On the island, before Mo Qishan died, the heroine hesitated. Explanation: In the early days, the heroine was a student who had been living in an ivory tower. After time travel, she was a girl who enjoyed thousands of favors in Fugui Township. She had never seen blood at all. She also adhered to the modern concept that human life is greater than heaven. She was not a murderer in her previous life, so she could kill suddenly and decisively. Although the male protagonist is only a nine-year-old boy, he comes from a military family and was favored for his martial arts talent since childhood. He has already seen life and death and bloodshed. A child who has been trained as a general since childhood, he has been taught that all threats must be eliminated in time. Two, I tried to introduce Qi into my body for the first time on the island and fell asleep. I was lazy. Explanation: Because the identity of the heroine was unknown in the early stage, this is written in secret. She was a demon cultivator who was using spiritual energy to improve her body. Before she fell asleep, she felt that the spiritual energy was more intense. Later, when the male protagonist saw the spiritual energy coming out of her body, all the essence was lost. Moreover, the Spirit-Inducing Technique is a human skill. Of course, she, a demon cultivator, cannot practice it. She can only feel the spiritual energy on her own to improve her body. Third, after leaving the island, she came into contact with a cultivator for the first time. The heroine expressed her doubts and revealed her identity as a newcomer. Explanation: At that time, they had just entered the world of immortality and had never seen the sinister nature of people's hearts. Facing a person they had saved, they would naturally be more relaxed and less vigilant. In addition, after practicing the Hongchen Kung Fu, the heroine has a keen sense. She can detect the good and evil of others, so she is relatively relaxed. Four, the heroine is scared when she fights a monster for the first time. Explanation: At that time, the heroine did not know her own strength. She had just practiced spiritual energy and was still in a state where she had no power but didn't know how to use it. Of course she would be scared when faced with a monster that could swallow them in one bite. Five, be afraid of snakes, so scared that you dare not move. Explanation: This is related to the heroine's heart knot, and it will get better later. This can only be fully explained in the fairy world. Sixth, the heroine has five spiritual roots and is useless. Explanation: This article sets that the mythical beasts have all five elements and all have five spiritual roots. Cultivation in the immortal world does not depend on spiritual roots. The heroine is not useless, on the contrary, she is a genius. It is precisely because her talent is so good that she falls. 7. The interaction between the male and female protagonists in the early stage was awkward. Explanation: This is really embarrassing. It's my first time writing an article, so I'm not sure of the accuracy. I'm so embarrassed when I read it later. I'll consider revising it later 😂

It's quite nice and reads very coherently. Ah Li was a bit silly at first, but after the early island plot, the character settled down and she became quite cute. Right now, I just hope that my senior brother will escape, and I feel that it is impossible to rely on Master Fuyu to refine the antidote. I have to rely on Mu Yan for my intuition - she and Ah Li must have a destiny. Speaking of which, the protagonist group should be regarded as reincarnated, but as mentioned before, they will not enter reincarnation after establishing the foundation. Is this just a rule restriction of this space?

I think it's great! The writing is very good, neither noob nor childish, the plot is not cliché, and the fighting details are also fascinating. As for the heroine, everyone pointed out that she was only fifteen years old before the time travel. After the time travel, she had an excellent growth environment and she grew up in early childhood. It is normal to be immature! Think about it, weren't we also crazy when we were teenagers? Don't look at others with the mentality that we have experienced hundreds of thousands of words. We also matured little by little.

The heroine is so stupid, I can't stand it anymore