Immortal of Yuling

Thousands of twists and turns, persistence throughout life, cultivating the great road together, and participating in life.

This novel is not a novel, but a pure fairy tale novel with antique charm. If the author does not have certain literary skills and literacy, it would be difficult to write such a work.

There are two suggestions. One is to change the effect of the Moon Pear Fruit in Chapter 5. It is more reasonable to change it to one year. One fruit can be worth one month of hard work in the early stage of foundation building, but it can be sold for more than 200 spirit stones. Is this all sold to the wrongdoer? After all, according to the initial stage of foundation building, it takes six or seven years to break through the first level. If you think about this effect, who would buy more than 200 spirit stones! The second is to find a second-level low-grade top-level bloodline monster. I think the protagonist should be subdued. After all, the top-level bloodline you mentioned is not easy to explain. Even if the protagonist cannot subdue it by himself, you can still find a way to notify the family for help. You should know that in many immortal cultivating families, the protagonist or the family will cultivate one or more monsters. These are the two suggestions.

Don't imitate Immortal Way too much, write more of your own style

The plot is okay, but the name of the protagonist seems a bit uncomfortable.

I hope the author will write well! The current family stories are pretty good, and the only ones that are a bit new are Peak of the Green Lotus, Han's Immortal Road, and Zhudao Evergreen.

The book is so beautiful. I hope everyone can support this author and arrange

Yesterday cannot be recalled, but today will live up to our time.

It's really nice, but the author updates it like a snail, too slow. I hope the author can update it faster and arrange it.

It's well written, and I have a lot of support.

The old-school writing style and energetic writing style bring people back to the beginning of the century, when hundreds of schools of thought contended on the Internet. In today's impetuous world, such authors are even more precious.

The writing is really good, really good. If the update speed is faster, then he is really a conscientious author.

The progress is so slow😒 There are still few updates

Not bad, let's fatten up first (ಡωಡ)hiahiahia