A Trainer Who Came Out of Kaji Town

Liu Bo wants to accept the protagonist as his disciple, but because of the aura on the green cotton bird, Liu Bo thinks that the protagonist has a backing. To be honest, this routine is old-fashioned. Do civilians really have a bad start? If you insist on making some messy things, you are really trying to persuade them to quit.

I was poisoned in Chapter 5. If you can't conquer something yourself, it doesn't matter if you encountered it first. Even if you bargain with others, they will bury you in minutes. He also asked others to exchange the cultivation methods he had figured out.

It's really poisonous to write about little Ju'er being cared for by Big Ju 🤤

The author uses a bunch of yy urban legends to write it, some of which are forgettable, and some of which are just disgusting things. Xiao Ju'er is one of the elf fan goddesses. If you write her like this, if you don't pounce on her, who will?

Regarding the question of the type of attribution of this book. Recently, many readers have said that the first chapter and Liu Bo's recruitment of disciples are too old, and it is better to write honestly about the civilian stream or the cheerful stream. I will briefly mention it here. In essence, this book is not a simple rise of civilians flow, nor is it a simple cheerful flow, but a genre more similar to the behind-the-scenes flow. Readers who have read Chapter 50 should already understand that the main line of this book is to investigate the Dark Night and the so-called evil organization. At the same time, the protagonist will be exposed to various secrets of the elf world in the process. These secrets are basically not made up by the author, and are based on various urban legends of Pokémon and the contents of the Pokémon Encyclopedia. It can be regarded as presenting the elf world in the author's mind as much as possible. As for many people asking whether the mother of the protagonist in the first chapter is the one who gave the protagonist the green cotton bird, the author here asks, is there anyone stronger than Liu Bo in the setting of the elf world? The protagonist's mother's line can only be considered a branch line at best, and has little impact on the main line. Therefore, don't look at this book in the same way as those novels about cultivating immortals from more than ten years ago. This book is not a stream of cultivating immortals. Above.

The author, Liu Bo, is he weak? After all, he is a fierce man who can capture Lugia and Phoenix King with a small wild boar.

You have to meet the Phoenix King before pretending to be a magic envoy, and you won't be afraid of being fooled 😅

There are bright spots and poisonous spots, but the overall feeling is like a five-nut mooncake with green and red threads, which is both beautiful and ugly. The graded setting and background have a bit of urban flavor and fantasy flavor, but most of it has the warm feeling of elf writing. This is very fascinating, I want to see and leave again.

Can the author please stop being obscene?

The Golden and Silver Age of the Elf World is the second era. The difference between each era is 3 years. Xiao Juer should still be a little kid. The author has never really understood Pokémon.

The plot and so on are okay, at least better than 90% of the fandoms, but the actual effect is just... It feels a bit childish after writing it (; 1_1)

Why do you have to arrange Xiao Ju'er like this? . . I really liked this character when I was watching the anime. I felt so uncomfortable watching it.

It turns out that he is not a civilian stream, but has a hidden background!

The first few chapters are somewhat game-like and command-oriented (the trainer can command the elves to fight), and the elves have no ability to fight independently. It seems that the elves in the wild have the ability to fight independently, but the trainers do not have the ability to fight independently. There are really many such novels, and they have no characteristics. The times for adults have changed.

In fact, the protagonist only feeds his elves energy cubes to provide them with what they need. This setting is not good. The elves also need some trace elements and normal food. Energy cubes are only used for training, energy improvement, and energy consumption during battles. This setting is even found in anime.

The author should be careful not to make the supporting characters less intelligent. Nowadays, the first requirement of readers is not the writing and plot, but the IQ is online! ! ! Don't think too much about the plot. You can first raise the IQ of each supporting role and each character before talking about other things, okay?

This is a real world, right, so why not make some weapons? It is very easy to make a gun in the elf world. As for bullets, why use the power of the fire elf instead of the elf below level 50? Basically one gun per gun.

The part about making energy cubes made me laugh so hard. I tried to understand my telekinesis and quit.

When I saw Chapter 14, the author wrote really well about the elves, but the author was really bad at writing the characters. He also liked to make things mysterious, foreshadowing was foreshadowing, and making things mysterious was just making things up. There is also the hidden aura of the green cotton bird. I guess it is either the parents of the green cotton bird or the breath of Xiba, but how can Uncle Liu feel such a mysterious thing as a human being? There are also various speculations about the protagonist. The qualifications of elves, the skills of elves, how can a SLR give the protagonist a golden finger to see? A child from an ordinary family can distinguish the qualifications of elves with just one more time travel? What nonsense? I can accept the following. It really started to poison me in Chapter 14. If the author opens the next book, don't use God's time to write the book, but the description of elves is indeed very interesting, which is a pity

A commoner dares to interfere with the affairs of mythical beasts. The writing is not solid at all.

The author is writing a certain book. You wrote the first one very well.

I wouldn't be interested if it were written according to Japanese comics. Japanese comics are meant for primary school students. At least there are pictures to read in the anime, but not in the novel, so if you write it, you have to think about it well in advance. You can't do this.

It's so damn poisonous. I resisted it in Chapter 14. How come they came out again? I should have resisted Xiao Ju'er and Boss Ju too, but when it comes to suspecting Xiao Ju'er and the others of doing bad things, I can't stand it anymore. I can't help it. It makes me sick.

The elvish text without hanging doesn't look very good. Farewell.

Recommended book, "Elf Everything Begins with the Rockets", introduction: The only rule is that there are no rules. This is not a house game like the league, but a battle in which you bet your own future. You can do whatever it takes to win the battle including attacking the trainer

Xiao Ju'er's place is too poisonous...