The Elf's Heavenly Responsibility

One thing to say, I really don't understand why so many authors like to write some complaints If it's for art, such as Fairy Sword and Three Baguio, forget it (these are still in the late game or after the novel has become popular), but generally you have to at least become famous before writing to persuade people to quit? For example, Jin Yong's Little Dragon Girl An author who is not yet famous, if he really wants to write novels as a career or semi-professional, he must at least understand that novels are for readers, and he cannot write too many flaws (at least before many people read them, or before the novel became popular). Even if the newspaper seller originally wrote about sister's book and encountered obvious flaws, he would be criticized and corrected (now the person who writes Da Feng is the one who corrects it) And the secondary setting of the mythical beasts in Chapter 10 of your book can really persuade a large number of people to dissuade (whether you think it is reasonable or not, most people who read Pokémon think it is unreasonable, then it is unreasonable, at least it should not be written in the early stage. You can lay the groundwork a little bit, and it is certain that many people will not be able to accept the second setting of the mythical beasts if you write it in one go). Originally, the elf novels are only for a niche audience, and then in the early setting There are not many people who will really read it. For example, this krypton gold trainer changed the characteristics. The settings in the first chapter can only be changed by himself. In the fourth chapter, Qianli changed it. I still don't know what the mistake is. In less than three chapters, I slapped myself in the face and didn't talk about what it means to change any characteristics. I just changed it for others. I also wrote 1.5 Million words, which can only be said to be for love or self-pleasure If it is for combat power or other settings, many can be made up later. The outline should be written with the ceiling in mind. There is no need to write it out all at once in the early stage (and this is still a second design, so people need to have an acceptance process). The collapse of Dragon Ball's combat power is also a battle power that collapsed after the author finished thinking about the book in the later stage, but the comic book dealer refused to let it be written later. For example, I really don't want to be a trainer for the elf novels that are relatively well-written. At least the setting will not offend people. There are also plug-ins in the book. Many people read it because the setting will not dissuade people from quitting The author hopes that you are the kind who really want to write well and not just for self-pleasure. After all, the elf novels themselves are niche and can be read less... After all, most authors hope that the more people read their books, the better. I hope the author writes better and better

Although you are making up a theory, you also add realistic theories into it, and it doesn't make sense. It's embarrassing to watch. Are you either purely two-dimensional, or are your theories reasonable? What does it mean if it's neither good nor bad?

It looks great. I gave you 6,000 starting coins. I hope the author will continue writing and try to give a complete ending.

The settings in this book are too discouraging. It is normal for elves to have a life limit, but this is too short. The giant needle wasp can only live for two years, and there are not many others. Does this mean that professional trainers keep changing elves? There is no guarantee that they will be equally strong. The four skills are the most uncomfortable. The lifespan must be realistic. The skills are indeed fully set by the game, and the damage is fixed 😅😅 Sorry for quitting.

This book is a pure fantasy written under the cover of elves. The elves in the text can be replaced by any kind of creature. It is recommended that you read it as a general fantasy novel and not as an elf fanfic The only existence of the elves in the play is to eat energy upgrades and then work as thugs. It is almost impossible to see other fanciers coexisting peacefully with the elves. There is only an exchange of interests and reality. The elves will be abandoned if they are not strong enough, and the master cannot Elves will defect if you provide benefits. People and elves are not friends, family or brothers, but bosses and employees, superiors and subordinates I know very well that this is the main purpose of the author, reality, but using it on elves is really a failure. It would be better to directly create your own creatures. The results of this book will be much better. We all know that cats can eat mice, but few people want to see whether Tom Cat really eats Jerry Mouse or cannot be resurrected.

1. The lifespan of the elves is too discouraging. 2. Personally, I feel that the descriptions of some mythical beasts are over-interpreted.

Basically not toxic, the setting is also very interesting, but only four chapters are not enough to read 😃😃😃

If I hadn't seen the elf, I almost thought I was reading fairy novels, family, hahaha

After the protagonist overthrows the aristocratic family, his group becomes a new aristocratic family. What is the significance of this?

I think this book is dragged down by the Pokémon fandom. It would be nice if I created my own set of pet monsters, but I always feel a little disconnected.

At the beginning, when I saw the author's theme, I felt it was interesting and relatively novel. But then the author wrote about the setting in a large section of text, which made me feel that I was over-interpreting Pokémon and it was very embarrassing. In the future, Slowpoke will have to think about philosophy in order to evolve, so I won't go into that. When the fire dinosaurs evolved, the rules came out. Are the rules so simple to understand? You are only level 40 now. Is this how cheating works? What about the settings the author wrote before? What about the rationality of pursuit? Is the author writing Pokémon or fantasy? Finally, the character design of the protagonist is also a bit poorly controlled. Let's not talk about the very awkward personality. Is it possible for a person who can think divergently for two chapters in a battle and not guess when he knows there is a palace underwater? Anyone who has watched Pokémon will first guess that it is Mafina's palace. Why doesn't the protagonist boast about the IQ of the Phoenix King now?

The author looks at your novel and finds that you are not very suitable for writing about elves, but more suitable for writing about cultivating immortals.

The first part is okay, but the second part is really getting more and more mythical, with all the Tao Te Ching coming, no, what I saw is really embarrassing, the protagonist's halo is getting heavier and heavier, and the natal artifact has come out.

After reading Chapter 14, I discovered that the elf only has four skills. Can you believe it? An elf in the real world only has four skills? In an instant, I no longer had the desire to read any more. Have you seen the following article and let me tell you whether there is no limit to the four skills in the following article.

After reading the introduction, I lost interest. . . .

After reading it, how should I put it, in the later stage, it almost had nothing to do with Pokémon and started an uprising.

Lifespan is really bad. Elves must live at least 10 to 20 years. Isn't it a loss if they are gone if they are not cultivated? It costs hundreds of thousands and millions to cultivate elves. Where do you get so much money to train other people?

I feel that the biggest drawback of this book is the lifespan. After reading it halfway through, I don't know if the author will change it later. After all, if the author says so, it is basically impossible for insect elves to be kings or above. After all, the lifespan is there, so what is the point of choosing insect elves? Isn't that training in vain~ So I think it is possible to sublimate after reaching the King level or Quasi-King level? It can greatly increase the lifespan of the elves in the future and maintain their strength for about a hundred years - at least they can accompany their masters. Otherwise, except for the dragon type, other elves basically have no chance to get ahead, and the insect type is basically in the cold. After all, it took so much energy to get two years of peak performance? Inputs and outputs simply do not match

I always feel like this is a fantasy novel covered in Pokémon skin. I couldn't stand it after reading a few chapters.

You, the author, have said that this is reality. The skills are still in the game, just like you have learned to eat and seem to be able to forget it. You might as well set this up and not use it for a long time, and it will degrade slightly, which is better. It's actually the same as the game, and the power of moves is also fixed. How do you know the difference between each elf? What you do is unrealistic and unrealistic. I can already see that your performance in this novel is not much better.

I read Chapter 90 and can't stand it anymore, there's so much nonsense.

There are many contradictions. Many plots are designed to feel like persecution and paranoia. There must be darkness from society. But I can't stand the plot of making myself dark and then replacing the darkness.

Could you please the author and let me experience the joy of cumming for the first time in my life😊

Is the logic in Chapter 1 wrong? -_-|| Elves like bugs, stinky mud, and gas bombs are suitable for poor people to use in the early stage They are all poisonous, and the lowest combat power is formed quickly Low consumption and easy to feed, stinky mud can eat garbage, and gas bombs can eat poisonous gas fermented by stinky mud Low IQ is not afraid of death, and gas bombs can explode

Set poison

The author adds some details😁😁

There is so much nonsense, your thinking is jumping, and if you don't pay attention, you won't be able to understand your settings!

I think the writing is pretty good, but so few people have read it. I think the main reason is that there is something wrong with your name and introduction.

Don't Liu, Li, Zhao, and Zhu correspond to the Han, Tang, Song, and Ming dynasties?

When I read the introduction and saw Liu Neng and Zhao Si, my eyes were also drunk.