In Order to Become a Heroic Spirit, I Had to Make Trouble in History

To be honest, I have been looking for this type for a long time. Ever since I first learned about the setting of heroic spirits in Fate, I have always imagined that I could go to the past and create stories with other great people, and then become heroic spirits to compete with other heroic spirits on the same stage, and a series of happy or sad stories would happen, and even enter Chaldea and Gudafu to save humanity together. But unfortunately, I have been looking for it for a long time and haven't found anything written like this. The books related to becoming a Heroic Spirit, fighting the Holy Grail War, and entering Chaldea are either rushed by the infinite flow, directly ignored and then the author cheats, or they are just a brief introduction to the experience before becoming a Heroic Spirit... In short, this book is really to my taste. I hope the author can write more without affecting myself. It doesn't matter if it is slower. I hope I can keep writing 😌

This is really the best FGO fanfic I have ever read. The author's writing style is exquisite, he has excellent control over the plot, and the rhythm of the writing is also very good. But can you please stop using the knife? The child is going to be stunned by the knife😫😭😭😭😭😭😭

I finished reading it last night. It is indeed a good book (although it may not be in line with the so-called mainstream nowadays). Many people think that the protagonist is just like a tool man. He did not become a king, collect a harem, and change various endings like the time-travelers in various novels. However, Annuo's life in Britain is still wonderful. He does not say that he is a time-traveler. He is indeed a person living in that era, a noble knight. Becoming a heroic spirit should not be about doing things like in various YY novels. Living normally and doing your best in every era is probably what this book is about. . .

A very nice book. Compared with other fan fiction, this book is very original. It does not copy the plot, but uses its own thinking to conceive the protagonist's story. From the beginning of Saber to the later Archer, it can be seen that the author's writing style is becoming more and more mature.

I feel like the book is good and original. It feels like listening to a story, and I really enjoyed it. Then, the protagonist is directly involved and melted into the story, without that sense of superiority, and with a refreshing feeling. Also, I would like to complain that the pace of the story is a bit slow and I feel awkward if I don't follow it. As expected, I have to read it in one sitting.

Reading the free chapters, I feel weird. Many of the protagonist's actions lack support. According to the setting, there are two major inhibitory forces to support it, and there are roots in the body. There are at least two routes to being a heroic spirit. One is, as the author said, the protagonist is a new life with a vague memory of a time traveler. In the early stage, the protagonist should be described as a new life form. The plot finds identity in the trend of the times, but in the end, the book wrote that he learned knight etiquette for a month, and then became a die-hard knight? This is not impossible, but the support point is too short! The protagonist then went to the Inhuman Zone to kill for a year! With just a few words, Merlin said he would become a knight if he was allowed to be a knight? It is better to say that Merlin used the favor that the protagonist owed to ask the protagonist to become a British knight. Easy to fight alongside King Uther after that, it was all in vain. He felt like a tool-man protagonist with a template personality. At the same time, there is another way to write it. Simply give the identity of a time traveler, who is not afraid of death and travels to various points in time to create legends and become heroic spirits. Any special points are bullshit. He has a high status (the thread of roots) and has a backstage (two major inhibitory powers). What special points are there to be afraid of! Human principles are for the survival of mankind. Who stipulates that changing history cannot make the earth and mankind better? Travelers to the past exist to change history. And based on the time traveler, as long as he is not an anti-human character, it is not inconsistent at all to cosplay a knight in the past. Even if it is not to win over Artoria, he does not mind throwing his life and blood in the mythical era. After all, he is not afraid of death. At the same time, there are two endings that can be written like this. One is to use the knowledge of the time traveler to develop technology at the time when the mystery subsides. The protagonist has the support of force and righteousness, and successfully establishes a new timeline of the unified British world. Or it would be good to write that the protagonist tries his best, but cannot go against the general trend, and has a tragic ending. When he is summoned as a heroic spirit in the future, humans will lament the tragedy. However, after typing so many words, I saw that the author is basically a newbie, and I feel a little ashamed. After all, if I think about writing it myself, I won't be able to write the author's level in my first book, so I feel a little speechless. In short, the author wants to be hopeful, but he still has no desire to follow up. 😥

The Trial of the King The King is Unstoppable

The protagonist always feels a bit regretful in the plot of Britain, and what will happen to different Anno in the end is more exciting, and the article is also short. But come on! Author, please present a good article to the great readers! 😏

Come on ＾0＾~, the author is Ganba Dad, the writing is very good. Also offer my pictures

How about these?

Anno, the chalk knight, is an extraordinary time traveler but unable to change everything. It is true that as a time traveler, Annuo almost failed. It seemed that something had changed, but it seemed that nothing had changed. Xingyue's worldview is cruel. The earth will eventually either enter the land of steel or the coral of the moon. There is only Bad Ending. Isn't this the shock that fate brings to us! Stories are written by people, and the ending has already been determined for the people in the story. Some people are dead and some are alive. But the process can be exciting and inspiring. I hope that the characters in a work are vivid and inspiring. Talking about the plot, Annuo can be said to be a veteran of two dynasties, extremely powerful, and one of the ceilings of Britain's combat power. With his cold temperament, old body, and gray hair, I think his body must be in dilapidated condition. When he was young, he killed alien species on the border, and then fought against the humble king and massacred the alien army. Unfortunately, the emotions of the protagonist at that time were not well depicted, but it seemed that this gave people a little more room for imagination. The Knights of the Round Table, which symbolizes the seat of disaster, is a symbol of legend and even more of a symbol of hardship. He started his life with his left hand being mutilated. Some people will say, doesn't the plot remain the same? The world is so big, and people are only a small part of it. Anno couldn't change all this, but he could do what he could. That's it, I hope the author can write more brilliantly!

Brothers, let me announce something, I am blind!

I was quite fascinated by it. At least the White Knight does not carry the superiority and pity of the other protagonists, but has deeply become a part of that huge history.

Ahem

Please read this passage. I have been reading this book for a while. Let me share my own opinions. In terms of objective evaluation, this book cannot be said to be first-class, but the quality is very good (just the author is short). At least as far as I am concerned, it is a book that can be read. At present, I feel that the biggest problem is that it is too bland and has very few modifications to the original plot, so that it is more like a game plot than a novel, and it is not as exciting as other works. Well, although this is a good choice for me, after all, it is rare for me to find a work that is not so impatient and hasty among so many works, and the author's writing style is not bad. I just feel that in the current Internet environment, more people like to read novels that are more impassioned. For those readers who can't hold on, I recommend that you read Britain to the end, because I criticized the author harshly in the middle period, but to be honest, the end of the first chapter also brought me a big surprise, and the existence of the protagonist is not meaningless. For those who prefer quietness, this novel can be said to be a treat. For those who like a refreshing feeling, this novel is bland, but if you taste it carefully, you can also feel a little bit of peace. I also know the author personally, and it is because there are many comments questioning and criticizing in the comment area that I wrote such a long review. The author is a very standard 996 office worker. He usually has very little time, really very little. I have learned about this book from him, and he has no intention of putting it on the shelves or charging for it. He just wants to write out the story in his heart (the author's original words), not just to gain popularity. So, if you really can't stand this book, there is no need to leave your doubts in the comments. You can exit in the upper left corner, just think of it as a little gentleness to this person who just loves novels. The book is a good book, but it is not a perfect book. It is more suitable for savoring. It is not as refreshing, and the protagonist has changed less than expected. That's it.

At the beginning, I really wanted to generate electricity for love, but now, due to some reasons, it has to be put on the shelves. I'm sorry everyone, I can't complete the experiment without putting it on the shelves. However, I will write this book more seriously and seriously. You can join the group to learn more about the specific situation. I will also accept everyone's criticism. So, let's do this for now... Thank you all for your support!

Suddenly interested in Umura Anno. Umura Anno, along with Gintoki, Wig, and Takasugi, is a disciple of Master Shoyo, but she is a very late batch. She only came to the school two years before Songyo was captured. At that time, she was only 13 years old, and she was the younger sister of everyone. Later, she joined the army to resist the barbarians because of her strong strength. Because of her agility, speed, and weird fighting style, she left a psychological shadow on the gods. Later, together with Gintoki, Katsura, Takasugi, and Sakamoto, they were collectively known as joy5. Back again, due to injuries and a series of things, the five of them had to separate. Later, because of their cute appearance, sweet voice, and being a natural, they were spotted by talent scouts and became idols. Xiaodong called Uecun his senior. Umura is one of the best among the five, because naturally it is easy to be defrauded by Gintoki and Wig, but there is no problem, because Takasugi will take action. When Umura went to play with Gintoki or Katsura, because he had been pampered by Songyang and other senior brothers since he was a child, and every meal after becoming an idol was a big meal, he would often unintentionally say things that would make a poor guy like Gintoki jealous, such as "It turns out that chazuke rice can be made with ordinary tea, I thought it could only be made with Gyokuro" (Gyokuro, a famous Japanese tea) Sometimes when he goes to Katsura's place, he will be discovered by the Shinsengumi, but in such cases, he will be unilaterally released by the captain of the Shinsengumi 1st Team. Because of Umura's relationship, Gintoki, Katsura, Takasugi, and Sakamoto have all become sister-controllers, but the most trustworthy brother is Takasugi. (The scraps of cheating my sister out of money) The following is a self-written essay. The so-called handshake meeting is just a money scam! "What happened to Gin-san today? You came here early in the morning, Aru." Kagura asked Shinpachi doubtfully while being jealous of Kombu. At this time, Gintoki was looking around at the intersection. "Today seems to be Miss Umura's handshake party. Are you so afraid of your sister's safety?" Shinpachi replied with some relief after seeing Gintoki's behavior. "Huh? She's so strong that she doesn't need my protection." Gintoki replied without a face when he heard this. "Then why are you here?" "It's because of money. Takasugi was the first to arrive at the handshake meeting a few days ago. Annuo was a little confused as to why he always arrived first. To see who came first this time, she was willing to give 500,000 yen to the first person to arrive, and also said "Oni-chan." "Why does it feel like the last one is the real reason..." Shinpachi complained silently, after all, he knew that although the guy in front of him not only gave his sister tea and rice when she came to play at his house, but also defrauded his sister of her money, he was still a hidden girl-controller. At this time, when Gintoki was looking around, he saw a person and suddenly yelled. "Stop the wig! That position is mine!" Katsura Kotaro looked back and smiled. "Hmph, you didn't come to stand, Gintoki, I'm already standing now..." As he said this, Gui was kicked out. "It's easy to deal with it and continue fishing." "You bastard, is this the original plan?!" "A soldier is never tired of deceit, Gui." The only thing that returned to Gui was Gintoki's weird smile. "Asshole!" "Hahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!!" "Oh, when did you have the idea that I have no preparation? Look at your feet, Gintoki!!" "Huh?" Gintoki lowered his head in confusion. "Drip" "..." "You bastard, when did you plant the bomb?!" "You're stupid, Gintoki, I already laid an ambush for everything last night! Now there are bombs all around, hahahahahahaha!" Shinpachi on the side couldn't help but think of a terrible thing after hearing this. "Mr. Gui, you should still remember where you buried the bombs..." "I don't remember at all!" "Ahhhhhhhhhhh!" Shinpachi shouted desperately. "Don't worry, I drew all these burial points on the map." "That's great!" "Well..." Gui's face suddenly twisted. "What's wrong, Mr. Gui?" "Um, I seem to have brought the wrong one." He silently turned over the paper in his hand, and there was a leaflet for resisting the foreigners. "..." "You are the biggest idiot in human history, come up with a solution!" Gintoki shouted in fear and anger. "Wait a minute, Gin-san, there's someone else who hasn't been stepped on, isn't there?" When Gintoki heard this, he also reacted. "Yes! Hey! Kagura!!" Kagura, who was sitting on the trash can and jealous of Kombu, heard Gintoki's shout and walked out of the alley. "What's the matter?" Ginsang asked, jumping up and stepping on Gui. "Wait a minute..." Before he finished speaking, Kagura jumped down and heard a "beep" sound. "It's over" x3 To this extent, Kagura also knew what happened, and looked at Gintoki affectionately. "Gin-san, are we going to die?" "Don't worry, Kagura, we can't kill people with a comedy show like ours." "But Gin-san, Gintama is still a fighting show." "Nani!" "Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha... At this time, a loud idiot's voice came from above. Yes, he is the one with the loud voice - Sakamoto Tatsuma. At this time, he was standing on the spaceship looking at several people. Seeing Sakamoto's arrogance, Gintoki was very angry. When he saw Sakamoto bent over and vomiting, Gintoki suddenly thought of something and turned his head to look at Kagura. Kagura immediately understood what Gintoki was going to do, then turned around and picked up Katsura. "Wait, what are you going to do, hey... Hey!!" Gui screamed and was thrown out, hitting Sakamoto down without missing a beat. When the two fell, Gintoki shouted. "Run now!" Gintoki ran out. The other two people also ran out after seeing it. The two people who were missing happened to be detonated by a bomb, and they were blown to the other side and continued to explode. "Hahahahahahahahaha, will you laugh next time, Sakamoto!" "It's so funny, Gintoki." A magnetic voice came from behind Gintoki. "... Takasugi." When Gintoki turned around, it was indeed the dwarf Takasugi smoking a cigarette and looking at him. "I have to say that your farce made me laugh very happily, but the first person to shake hands must be me." "Huh? Who cares whether to shake hands or not, I just care about the 500,000." "Who knows?" He didn't believe Gintoki's words at all, after all, everyone is a girl. Just as he was thinking about it, Takasugi drew out his knife. "I advise you not to stop me Gintoki." Seeing this scene, Gintoki also pulled out of Lake Toya, but he had to block it. Takasugi looked at Gintoki, and when the two were confronting each other, he suddenly felt a pull under his feet. The two lowered their heads and found that it was Guihe's version. At this time, both of them were not feeling well. Their clothes were burnt in many places, their heads became afros, and their skin was dark. "Absolutely... We cannot let... You two shake hands with Annuo!" Takasugi and Gintoki looked at each other, and both of them pulled out a foot and stepped on the person under their feet. "Die, you bastard!" "Oh~!" At this time, a strange shout came from a distance. "Hey Gintoki, did you hear anything?" "Ah what..." Gintoki was suddenly stunned. "What's wrong, you guy..." Takasugi followed Gintoki's gaze. The sight in front of me will be unforgettable for the rest of my life. A group of people were wearing blue support uniforms, and there was someone in the middle carrying a sedan. Standing on it was Atong. Another group of people were wearing red support uniforms. "Everyone, please complete Atong's dream for me!!" The leader in the blue support uniform shouted. "Oh!!!" "Asshole, you can't be compared to Atong's fans, brothers, come on!" Atong looked at them and shouted. "Asshole, I was the only one who could touch it when I was a senior!!" Gintoki and Takasugi looked at them, nodded, and then picked up the thing below. "How can I let you hold it!!" After saying that, he threw it out. At this time, several waves of people were fighting together. On the other side, the scene shop has been set up, and Umura Anno is sitting inside, looking at Okita Souji who walks in. "Oh, am I the first?" Then he sat across from him and put down the CD in his hand, along with some other things. "Yes, Onii-chan." Okita looked at Annuo with some confusion, but didn't say anything. "Oh, by the way, I have this for you, Onii-chan." Annuo took out a check from somewhere and handed it to him. Okita accepted it without hesitation. Then he held the work on the table and said to her. "You are still too immature in many places, such as the place where you step on the protagonist..." Okita Souji was spreading abnormal knowledge, and Annuo tilted his head, with some doubts in his eyes, but he still listened carefully. Kagura, who was standing on the other side, asked Toshi who had just walked over. "Old woman, what on earth is this?" "Don't call me old woman, can you have some respect, kid?" He took a puff of cigarette and continued speaking. "It's okay. After all, the handshake thing is just to cheat money."

This one is pretty good, right😚

The main character is already fifty years old, and I'm looking forward to his death right now. Then start the Holy Grail plot, or start the FGO Holy Spear plot.

From the first chapter of Jian An to the current Sha An, progress is visible to the naked eye, and the story becomes more and more exciting. In Jian'an's story, many details and other problems can be seen, but by the time of Shu'an's stage, considerable progress can be seen. The most important thing is, what you write looks like. I can see the knights fighting on the sword fence hill. I can see the artists sitting quietly in the studio. What I can see now are the samurai active in the Bakumatsu period. I heard in the future that there is a Greek Anno, and I look forward to it in advance Your efforts should not be denied, because your works are indeed excellent. I heard that you have been very busy and distressed recently, and it is not convenient for me to visit you. I hope you can get through the difficult period of your life smoothly. You don't need to pay too much attention to the negative comments in the comment area, just write the story you want to write. Also, I hope Samura and Okita can be together.

The most impressive words of each special point (not completely consistent with the original words) "Senior, can you hold my hand?" "You have to play the piano for me again~" "The world is Rome!" "I! Not!! A monster!!!" "Are you still here to kill me? Father" "Being able to be summoned with that guy... How did it end like this? It's over..." "I know very well that I can explode at any time, so what does it matter?" "It's just a fatal injury, what does it mean to me!" "Then, Goetia, let me teach you the last magic." This is a life that no one knows about as an incompetent master, but he accidentally created a miracle called fate.

This game has left me with too many memories. In the burning city, I relied on the Noble Phantasm I just came up with to block Heidi's full blow; in the Hundred Years' War, the blooming lilies in France faced the evil dragon saint alone; in the wilderness of the City of Seven Hills, even in the face of the Sword of the God of War, Before, the emperor of Rome was like a red rose who never gave in; on the sea of ​​endgame, the heroic figure of the eldest sister who shot down the sun was imprinted in my mind; above the fog, even the master of the storm, the rebellious knight would rebel against her; on the land of North America, The steel angel galloped with the naked king on his back; on the throne, the noble knight held on for 1,500 years, which was a full 1,000 years longer than the 500 years of persistence that led to the loss of self; black mud flooded into the city of Uruk, "Such actions, this is not the right thing to do." The king called it a great deed!" As the lock of heaven locked the mother of life, the king began the last resistance of life; under the Amyrlin, "the moment of farewell has come" the last ring shined, taking away him and everything about him, leaving only the commander's final order. . . Lying under the quilt and watching France secretly, it seems like it happened yesterday. I always felt that Merlin and Wang Ha were so far away from me, but when I came back to my senses, I found that they were already very close to me. Time flies, leaving only the memories of being at each singular point. I was touched by the behavior of the saint, angered by the black beast in the seven chapters, lamenting the love between Rama and Sido, amused by the two writers caster who only shouted 666 in the back row, and was helpless by the invincible Holy Spear. . . . . . I don't know why I stayed up so late at night to write this. Maybe it's just to commemorate the feeling this game brought to me. Thank you fgo for making my ordinary life extraordinary this year, and thank you for telling me these unforgettable stories.​

What fascinates me the most about fate is the mushroom setting that summons historical celebrities and fights. This is the most surprising point. Heroes from different periods express their own ambitions and fight for their dreams. There are many people in history that you may not know, or have never heard of their stories, but this does not matter to the author or the reader, because you only need to grasp the key points. When I watched FZ, I didn't know who Gilgamesh was and why he was so arrogant. Later, when I learned about the legend of this hero through Xingyue, I sighed. When I first heard about King Arthur, I thought the story was full of mystery, but then I saw the little girl Liang in Xuan Urobuchi's novel. What's exciting about every hero is not his story. In the original story of the King of Heroes, he was a man of both genders, which is not good-looking. But his spirit of daring to resist the gods is what I want to see, his fear of death is also what I want to see, and his final calmness is what I admire. This book has been well written. In the original Knights of the Round Table, people were randomly given hats, but there is no such thing here. What I see here is the protagonist's loyalty and the courage of two generations of kings, the body that is still wielding the sword even if its consciousness is wiped out. If this character existed in history, he would definitely leave a legend. Because we have the same character, Guan Gong, who looks higher than his head, treats others with arrogance, and is also loyal to Liu Bei.

Maybe my expression was too vague. Basically, except for the information of this era, the protagonist's other memories in history have been eliminated by the suppression force, and the elimination is a process. I didn't explain this setting clearly before, I'm sorry.

Cover!

The protagonist of this time traveler is in a bit of a misery. The combination of a trace of the true spirit and a part of the root is supposed to be an invincible start in the Xingyue world view (refer to Shajo Aige, no matter how bad it is, it is easier to get to the root than ordinary magicians), but in the end, he was caught by the inhibitory force and reincarnated to erase the memory of the true spirit. It is estimated that the ending of this book is that Annuo's nature as a time traveler is completely wiped out, and then a trace of his origin returns to the world of Xingyue. Isn't this a negative teaching material for time travellers? It would be nice if Annuo had a golden finger or something when he traveled through time, or if he didn't combine with his roots, and gained power through himself in the Xingyue world. This book feels like the fate of the time traveler is too miserable, resulting in no sense of substitution. In fact, the level of this novel is really good, especially when the writing style of Xingyue fandom is not very mature at the beginning. I like to follow the plot all the way and there is no freshness. It is not at the same level as this book.

How long will it take for Qidian to finish the character? I can't even post fanart. Anyway, it's Zuomura desu wow. Give me some advice~

Based on the feedback from book friends and my own thinking, I decided to change and refine the beginning of the book and some settings of the protagonist. The useless and routine traveler setting has been abandoned, and the more controversial part of becoming a heroic spirit has been modified to optimize the look and feel. Thank you all for coming to read my book. Above.

Above. Damn it, I had tears in my eyes when I wrote it. This is probably self-impression. It will be finished soon. "The Birth of Apollo". Spoiler: Although Harley did not want Lawrence to commit suicide, Lawrence still behaved in a manner that was undoubtedly suicidal () Above.

The painting is finally finished, Lawrence has an unbroken card!