There Is Something Wrong with This Martial Arts World

The pacing of the book is also terrible. Talking about the protagonist's experience, it seems that he is a knight-errant doing justice and going smoothly, but in fact he only picks novices to bully. A powerful person bullied him, and after escaping, he lost his memory on the spot, and then continued to bully others. This kind of plot rhythm gives readers a very poor experience, not to mention the problem of forced abuse of the protagonist caused by Goldfinger's disappearance halfway. It can only be said that it is not unreasonable to rush into the street.

Is this class all trash? He doesn't even have the strength to weigh a few hundred kilograms. He has a strength of several hundred kilograms. I remember correctly, he is not as good as Tyson. He is still training so hard. Just commit suicide. He is so weak. It's still empty. In the real world, Tyson can't break the space. It's funny.

This chapter of Tiger List is very unreasonable. The authoritative list is just randomly compiled. The plot is too ridiculous.

You have entered Yandu, and you will be a member of Yandu your whole life 🤓🤓🤓🤓

The plot is so disgusting and chaotic. A low-ranking person wants to make a career in the world? He is still a time-traveler, who gave him the courage. Generally, if he is not the protagonist, he will not survive more than two chapters. A smart time-traveler will either find someone to hold him in his lap or stay alive. When he is invincible, he will come out of the mountain. Even if he is not invincible, he should be almost there. You can't just drop in a supporting role and be better than him. As you wrote, it is too cliche, and he wants to have a hand in everything. Like a virgin bitch, she thinks she is invincible, but ends up being abused in various ways, which does not attract readers at all.

Is Jin Wu raised too high? Just low martial arts

It's disgusting to see a swordsman suddenly pop up. It doesn't mean that the protagonist must be invincible. It's just that you bend your will and force yourself to learn swordsmanship from a beast. It's really disgusting.

Just turn it up when cheating. It's no different from not cheating. It's just right and straight.

It's a bit disgusting, the serious subject is written like a farce. The writing is not rigorous either

Zen practitioners always call themselves young masters... It's really a routine and a contradictory character design.

The author is you, the greatest eunuch in the world.

The author is still suitable for writing this kind of novel with a martial arts style. It feels like I was a little excited when I first read "Dream Traveling with Immortals".

The plot is very confusing, with various characters popping up one after another But the main characters are well described.

Chapters 78 and 79 are too cliche. It feels like I'm reading a novel from ten years ago.

Alas, he is a eunuch again.

During the Sui and Tang Dynasties, The Legend of Two Dragons and The Sun and the Moon were in the sky, and in the Song Dynasty, there was Zhu Yuyan. Did the author really know what he had written?

If it doesn't work, the author should write it back to Zhutianliu. This way, with reference to the original work and the author's writing style, it should be very good. What's more important is that updates are more guaranteed.

Not happy, even a little nauseous

Either you have to stay at the top level and then come out, or you can't win over your grudges, so why don't you have a plan? This way of writing is disgusting. My IQ is obviously not online. If I find it malicious, I won't pay attention to it. Haha.

It's another style that doesn't know how to stop. It's all about the whole process. Are you so anxious to finish the book?

It's so sadistic. Sorry, I'm not a masochist.

Can anyone tell me if that scumbag named Wang is dead?

Author, how many more chapters can you update?

It's so uncomfortable to watch it every day.

Often believing in vain is regarded as confidence 🪖

As long as Qing Wu is not a woman, I won't watch it.

The author writes Buddhist thoughts into the novel, which is very innovative!👍👍

Come on, anyway, welcome back.