I Am Making a Revolution in the Mysterious World

I have been playing, and I feel like I have learned so much, and I am already extraordinary. I still can't beat others who are not extraordinary. I feel that the pace can be slowed down a little, and I can develop properly, otherwise everyone will be playing for a long time.

I'm so desperate. I can't win at all. What the author gave to the protagonist can't be revolutionary at all. He gave me the wrong plug-in. Can I change the introduction? I was attracted by the introduction, but the result is this. What's the difference between this and selling dog meat by pretending to be a sheep's head?

Just don't use eunuchs. There are already several eunuch books

In such a hopeless world, there are still a group of people who are willing to sacrifice themselves for others? Knowing that the wild is extremely dangerous, there are still people who cooperate with the protagonist to send a group of people who have nothing to do with them home. No way, no way... Also, those rescued people have the nerve to say such things. Such people are not worth saving. Who in this world doesn't know the danger of the wild?

It's so confusing. What is the ratio between the level of old warriors and the level of extraordinary ones? Or is it that we are still in the 5th realm of transformation, and only after reaching the standard can we become extraordinary?

I feel so tired after seeing it. It's really so dangerous. There's no village left for a long time.

It's a bit silly. Why don't you practice for a while and then send the person there? The protagonists are all adults.

This is a fairy tale. I enjoyed reading it. I hope the author will work hard to update it, and I also wish you better and better grades.

If it changes hands, I will give you an internal suppression!

Let's play the national anthem again! 😁Get up...

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In the extraordinary world, if the protagonist really wants to revolution, he should temporarily give up all good intentions and use all means to maximize his strength. Then he can do whatever he wants. The most important thing is that in the extraordinary world, as long as the strength is strong, change is very easy.

In the extraordinary world, strength is the most important. True thoughts are of no use. Brainwashing is very easy. As long as you are strong enough, no one will care about anything you do.

The plot connection is too abrupt, but the subject matter is actually acceptable. What a pity.

After hundreds of thousands of words, I still don't think you have any intention of making a revolution, so it's gone

After reading dozens of chapters, I couldn't help but jump to chapters, and then I couldn't stand it anymore. The main problems are as follows: 1. From a conceptual point of view, the theme of this article should be change. This is also the most attractive part of this book. Change must start from scratch and slowly infect the masses ideologically. In the words of a great man, it means to have more comrades and fewer enemies. Even in an extraordinary world that relies entirely on the force of one person, it can only be superficial. After dozens of chapters, the protagonist has not changed. The idea of ​​changing the world, especially after seeing the misery of the people at the bottom of the world, our party's development experience tells us that ideological enlightenment should go hand in hand with strength. The protagonist has grown in strength, but the idea of ideological change in this world has not even burst out for himself, is a bit off topic. Even after seeing the protagonist move closer to Zen Buddhism, the protagonist has a red Buddhist thought, right?                           ，，，？ It's okay to run out without even being extraordinary. After all, this is the noble character of the protagonist. What he does and what he doesn't do, but the development in the middle is too bizarre. The protagonist is just like the broom star, and the strength of his master and entourage is also very vague. If something unexpected happens and interferes with the companions, he will be completely offline. It's purely about the protagonist fighting monsters, and you are like this The setting here is to send some ordinary people home, but how come there are so many hardships and hardships, and it is not set to escort any treasures. Strong enemies come one after another. Even if you want to highlight the cruelty of this world, it should not be too frequent. In fact, it is impossible for the protagonist to encounter such a situation. There will be no villages or wild gathering places, and communication between cities will be very difficult. This seems to be confusing. On the way, I mentioned the suffering of the people at the bottom of the world, and arranged one or two big threats that I could see but avoid. It would be enough to gain some rewards by fighting a few wild monsters like underground demon insects. Anyway, you have become a master and there is no shortage of skills. The resources are not particularly lacking at the moment. Don't have too many meaningless plots. Then a few of the gathering places you want to go to are wiped out (it's normal for everyone to be captured and wiped out). Then the protagonist settles down with the people he saved and starts to want to change the world. This is very comfortable. 3. From the reader's perspective, the author has completely failed to grasp what the readers want to read. People who read your book mainly read red ideas, watch the protagonist implement red changes in the world, and then get a sense of satisfaction. In the early stage, except for the past life background of the protagonist, there is no mention of red ideas and ideas of change. Obviously, when you come into contact with the suffering of the people at the bottom, you can throw out the theme of the book, mention the core ideas of the protagonist, and then pave the way for the rest. The protagonist's training speed and talent should just be the weapons and tools that come with achieving the goal. In the early stage, it was weak and should not be too far away from the red theme. Now it is completely written about training in thick and colorful colors, without mentioning the theme at all. It depends on how good the training is. Why don't I read other white articles? Just talking about the plot of the cultivation novel, your writing is mediocre to be honest (see the second point, there is no time for cultivation and development), and there is no intuitive feeling for the protagonist's improvement in strength. Although there is not much poison in it, this behavioral pattern cannot be established and cannot be tolerated. The theme of "Cultivation to Enjoy" is that the protagonist becomes stronger, and so are the behavioral patterns, relatives, friends and emotional lines to make readers feel the protagonist's strength. This is the theme, and readers can get a sense of satisfaction from it when they feel that the protagonist has become stronger. Isn't that right? If your theme is about getting stronger, you won't have this behavior pattern. If it is a red revolutionary thought, the protagonist should let the readers feel it in his heart or words, so that the behavior pattern can be established. I hope the author has a good grasp of it, and it's not too late to revise it a little now. The reason why I spend time typing so many words is mainly because Xiaobai has written a lot of cool articles. This kind of article is rare. I like the character of the protagonist very much. I hope I can adopt more useful opinions and become better and better. In addition, I have read dozens of chapters of Strong Enemy and I can't stand it anymore. I hope the author will give me some spoilers after reading it😂 so that I can have a sense of hope to continue reading.

The second time I came, Wangyue tirelessly and shamelessly pulled up a small bench.

Brother, why don't you reconsider writing a style month?

Author, please update quickly! ! 😭😭Your book is very good, you don't want eunuchs! ! 😢😢I also want to know what the protagonist's skills are capable of! ! 😫😫😫If something happens, please let me know! ! Don't say nothing! ! ! 😭😭😭

Finally a eunuch, a eunuch in the morning and evening every day. Put it on the bookshelf without reading it. I just want to see if the author can persist. As expected, I was waiting for it.

Author, Happy New Year, Happy Year of the Horse, and success is imminent! ! ! 🙂🤓😎😁🤭😊😆🌹❤️, Also, the author! When will you finish writing this book? ! It's obviously so well written! Or write a book that's not too messy, not too late, and constantly updated! ! ! 😭😭😢😢😫😫🥺🥺