Teyvat’s AFK Master

There are too many originals, and it feels like you're watching fantasy instead of Genshin Impact, and it's hard to be popular.

Most people who read Genshin Impact doujinshi come here for plot-related reasons. Although the author's writing is good, the current way he writes it is too narrow for a narrow audience.

Don't be too short-sighted 🙂

Just keep it for now. If you die, you'll kick me.

How to put it, originality is fine, but the logic must be sorted out, the Genshin Impact timeline must be clear, what major events are there, and then add your own originality appropriately. And your villain gives people a general feeling.

At present, I have read sixty-seven chapters. The original content added by the author himself has enriched the work, but too much originality means that it is easy to conflict with the original work. Especially for MiHoYo, many settings are not included in the plot, so you can only read various documents in the game by yourself. The author's setting is decades before the plot. Based on the protagonist's previous life, it will take at least 50 years to reach the plot point. At this point in time, the plot characters that the protagonist can come into contact with are basically not born, and all the people he comes into contact with must be original. This has exponentially increased the requirements for the author, and there are already problems (I only found out that the author has changed it after reading the comments in chapter 53).

Author, is Sword Master still updated?😭

Isn't it? If you keep it, it will disappear.

The writing is not very good, so cut it?

My evaluation is that the original plot should be praised first (after all, if you like the original plot so much, why don't you go and play it again), the setting is not bad so far, but the plot seems a bit confusing (especially the jump after resurrection until arriving at Yuanxia Palace is particularly serious, I always feel that I missed something), and the birthplace of the protagonist is Inazuma, but the name... It should also be a point that needs attention. The plot of Yuanxia Palace is better, it seems coherent and more reasonable. This is how I feel right now