It's Dark, Please Go to Sleep

When I saw Chapter 82, uh, I felt that the author might be stuck, the content was okay, and then I looked at the author's resume. This is the first book (successfully capturing a cute new animal), um, so I hope that if the author can think about the main plot arrangement, how to give the protagonist more emotions and character relationships (Of course, there seems to be some main plots in Chapter 82?), In short, I hope not to be an eunuch easily? Meow

After reading Chapter 60, I should be qualified to evaluate my current feelings. First of all, there is no sense of fear or oppression. This type of novel has no sense of fear and oppression. What is the difference between this type of novel and Long Aotian's style? The sense of fear is for the readers, who dare not go to the toilet after reading it, and always feel that there is someone next to them at night. The sense of oppression is for the protagonist. The surrounding situation should make the protagonist feel a sense of urgency. The protagonist can be paralyzed, emotionless, and funny, but the sense of oppression should still be there. Secondly, it is too simple. When you see one, you will think of two. This logic is normal in the eyes of adults, because we have learned one, two, three and four, but in the eyes of babies, why is one followed by two? Why is it two? All the characters in the novel are comparing the nightmare to the baby. Why is it that the nightmare shows one and the characters can deduce the other? Instead of reasoning out 1.5? Finally, does the protagonist have a secret? Everyone knows what abilities you have, and if you are targeted at all, you will die! In Chapter 60, there are two organized and premeditated terrorist incidents involving dozens of people. Why did the protagonist get the ability? What is the ability? Everyone knows it. After getting the new ability, tell others immediately. Who gave the protagonist the courage? Author? Which female character was given to the protagonist by the author in a dream? Is she the one who belongs to the protagonist who is absolutely righteous? What's the most important thing? The protagonist can shuttle back and forth between several nightmares. There can be several nightmares in one building, but I don't feel any fear, oppression and tension. This is the most important thing.

The setting is good, but it just doesn't feel like it can capture the scary, weird, and tense atmosphere. It feels a bit like watching running water

The introduction is so-so, you hired someone to write the text at the beginning, and the second half is not as good as one chapter, especially for the sister. In a supernatural novel, you write a sister who is a ghost. This is a common problem for male authors. The supporting female characters are also awkward to write. Childhood sweethearts are like having a serious brain disease. That best friend must have killed the protagonist, his sister, and Qingmei's whole family in the previous life. But if one of them is missing, they will not die like that. Even if they have a gun in their hand, they can't kill her. It attracts people, but it has impact, but I just don't smoke, just play. I have a cigarette in my hand, but I don't smoke, just play. I have to wait until everyone else is dead before I smoke. Don't disgust me. My best friend died because of weirdness. That's because you have to send her thousands of miles away. You are afraid that the villain will not have enough people. Why take a little girl who knows nothing to the villain for the purpose of hiding her in a classroom and letting her fall asleep?

This book has little to do with that "Mysterious Resurrection". . . It doesn't even matter. The description is also different. . . . . . I recommend similar ones, Strange Detective Agency, Mysterious Earth Sea, and Alchemy Notes. . . They are all similar unpopular books. . . . . . Mysterious Resurrection is not a good look, a bad deal.

Just a reminder, this book has a sister.

Tsk, it's been so long since I've been reading a book that it's really rare for someone to complain about the settings. This isn't just a comment, it's a joke. Did the author offend someone? There are quite a few people who made the negative comment

I've been reading this for a long time, but this article is just mediocre. It doesn't look scary at first, but the text is clear and makes people want to read on. However, since the protagonist learned that he can swallow the nightmare fragments, he eats them unscrupulously. This is okay. I will do the same when I taste the strength. But telling this secret to a woman you have known for two days is a bit inappropriate, but I understand that people want to share a little good thing, and it makes sense to use his neighbor to kill a terrorist organization, but then everything changed after he continued to track down the Shinrikyo and wanted to kill that woman. First, an "old enemy" who knew all your secrets appeared and then he completely let go after he understood the fact that the real self is a nightmare. I'll come back after I get through this chapter.

There are so many people discussing the rationality of the setting for a fantasy novel? ? ? Looking confused. Isn't it time to discuss whether the plot is reasonable and cliched, whether the characterization is stereotyped or vivid, etc.? These comments on discussion settings have no reference value at all! It doesn't explain at all whether the novel is readable or not! Wouldn't it be good to read historical novels if you want to set the rationality? You can even criticize the author for wearing clothes that are not in line with the dynasty, but the author hasn't said anything yet. Are you unhappy? The first comment section is like reading a comment section for a historical novel, discussing whether various background settings are reasonable. I thought I was looking at some historian or folklorist quoting scriptures!

It's a pity that it turned into fantasy later on. If you keep following the previous rhythm, the background of the story will be more mysterious, the protagonist's strength will increase more slowly, and more chapters based on wisdom will be written. I guess it would be difficult not to become a god in this book.

Listen to the report from Japan. . .

This is an ordinary fast food novel. The author only has so much writing power. Not everyone can arrange the plot as clearly as a master. It is normal to have some poisonous points.

He heard that he was poisoned by Japanese poisonous milk, and he also solemnly introduced that it was the great god next door who came here. . . . . . .

The writing is really bad. It's clearly about one thing, but it has to be written here and there. It's really bad. The details are also bad, and the protagonist is also useless. How did you write such a useless protagonist? He has no ability.

1. The weird setting of this article is similar to "Alien Horror" and "Hell Apartment" written by Black Tinder. Human technology cannot destroy weirdness, and even those with awakened abilities cannot confront them head-on. They can only use their abilities to ensure their own survival. The only way is to use weird rules to destroy weirdness (it's very similar to watching weird horror movies back then, but the weird horror atmosphere is better) 2. In the setting, everyone must use the distributed sleeping pills to fall asleep at night, otherwise it will violate the criminal law. Including military police and so on. Only long-eared owls and Secret Service personnel are allowed to roam at night. Moreover, the long-eared owl belongs to a secret organization. It has normal work during the day and sleeps at night. When an incident occurs, it is woken up by the terminal instead of always on standby. 3. The reason why you must sleep at night is explained very clearly by the author in two parts through the words of Fa Xiao (a member of the Long-eared Owl) and the instructor, and is not mechanically repeated, but is closely related to the development of the plot. I think you want to read the kind of setting novel that opens with a single chapter at the beginning and lists data like an online game. . Novels like Qidian are rare these days. 4. So far, a villain organization, the "Truth Society" has appeared, and the purpose of the organization is unknown. This kind of human organization that uses weirdness to launch terrorist activities, the author said casually, has never encountered it. In the past, only the awakened ones woke up at night, and there was never a situation where ordinary people were woken up in large numbers in the middle of the night. Therefore, the author's setting does not conflict with the plot In a word, until chapter 70, the performance is stable, and there is no so-called logical problem, because all logic runs on the author's setting. If you think there is a problem with the logic, it is because you have brought reality in, but the key point is that the novel must be based on the author's setting as the main premise. How can you use the actual situation as evidence?

I can't stand all the forced plots, and they're also very clumsy. I can't even write a horror story that's compact at all.

I feel that the protagonist has a weird personality. At first I thought he was a warm-hearted but cold-hearted character with a high IQ When I saw the instructor, I told him all his abilities When I saw the Truth Society entering the building and consciously teasing the people of the Truth Society, it made people feel that the character was a bit contradictory. I felt that according to the previous description, the protagonist's tone should not be like that Also, the building where the protagonist is located, I feel that the author I wanted to write about how awesome the nightmares in it are. The protagonist uses nightmares to deal with the enemy. This is quite interesting, but I didn't feel that the nightmares in the building were very awesome At first, I thought this book was about exploring the secrets of the night and uncovering the world view bit by bit. Unexpectedly, before it was put on the shelves, it faced off against other forces, and solved the Truth Society. There must be forces behind the mentors of the Truth Society. Isn't this just another upgrade to fight monsters

Emmm, I don't know why I don't have the desire to watch it since the protagonist's glory. I don't have the same feeling as before.

I guess the author will not be able to continue writing in the later period. This kind of novel with a novel setting requires a lot of inspiration, so I just turned to Invincible and ended it hastily.

The early stage has the flavor of a masterpiece, the middle stage feels like just paddling, but I didn't watch it in the later stage. . .

In school, that female teacher was really poisonous. He's a superpower and a night cop. Like an nt. The hero is beating someone, is the gun in your hand just a decoration? Let's fight in a turn-based manner, right?

Chapter 29 is a bit speechless. The two sides are confronting each other. The villain shoots people, fights with the protagonist, uses a recorder to summon nightmares, and uses his ability again. After so many things, you are a policeman. The gun in your hand has a knockback effect, but you don't need it. Don't tell me that the villain has hostages. They have saved all the hostages. Just run over and say it right. Ci points the gun at the villain. Where is the protagonist? The protagonist was shot twice again. You shot to stop him a little. You helped to shoot the protagonist twice and restrained the person. He was a pig teammate, as if he had that serious disease. This person has the ability but doesn't use it. Your ability can temporarily block the nightmare. You use it first. Oh, just give it to your sister. My best friend is not a human being? There is also the protagonist's sister's best friend who died unjustly. The protagonist group got the medicine. If they didn't find an empty classroom quickly and let her take it and go to sleep, wouldn't everything be fine if she fell asleep? It's so miserable to have someone follow her, denying her the medicine and abilities she has, and finally using her as a tool to save her sister. I really feel that she is so ridiculous. If I were her, I would turn into a nightmare and bite her back. Promoting the plot is to advance the plot. The protagonist prevents accidents in school in advance. It is a routine but understandable. I am really confused about the following plot. The world setting of this book is quite good and the beginning is okay. This plot is considered a poisonous point. Let's see what happens next.

Sure enough, I enjoyed reading books the most when I was a novice, especially the kind of books with joy in the front and knife in the back. I am not talking about this book, this book just reminds me of the past.

It's well written and worth reading, but not scary. The world view is quite novel, but the writing style is not sophisticated enough. It's a good way to kill time, but there's nothing outstanding about it. It's just average, but it's much better than the average novel.

The new novel about the esoteric religion is very interesting, why don't you write it again?

I have read about fifty chapters... In short, it looks like an upgrade to fight monsters and change the map. There is no sense of fear, oppression or weirdness. It is a very orthodox novel that will appear on the homepage.

After reading Chapter 4, Sheng Zhuwen persuaded me to quit.

Chapter 16: Persuading to Quit: A sister appeared out of nowhere. I could guess the plot behind it with my eyes closed. The design of this point is really boring 😅

The background of the story is that in this world, all kinds of weird nightmares imagined by human beings are born at night. Only people who sleep normally at night can be exempted from the various dangers brought by these weird nightmares. Therefore, in order to survive, the government issued laws requiring people to use medicine to fall asleep at night. However, the protagonist contracted a strange disease three years ago and became a sleepless person. From then on, he could only try his best to explore and protect himself in the night world, and embarked on the road to find the truth. The opening chapter of this book is very well written, and even captures the mysterious and weird feeling of "Starting from the Red Moon" ---recommended by Gong Zhonghao's "The Thirty-Six Strategies of the Great Book Desolation" The book desolation comes to us!!!

The setting is very new. It would be better to describe the details of each copy in the early stage to make the sense of substitution better. When the story progresses, it also has the feeling of a horror house with a sledgehammer. It's a pity that the eunuch is