Immortal, I Use Martial Arts to Witness Immortality

This book is very fairy-tale. As a simulator stream, it is very interesting to accumulate qualifications in each life, and the plot progresses quickly and is more enjoyable. At the same time, we don't worry about the details of development, which is great! It's much better than those excuse simulators that constantly refresh themselves to give themselves a set of heaven-defying entries. If you think about it carefully, the long-browed disciple who became an immortal in nine lifetimes in the Shushan Swordsman can actually be understood as a similar situation, but they didn't say it was a simulator! That's why I say this book has a classic fairy tale feel, I look forward to it!

It was indeed good before, but now the taste has changed Now the content and the title are no longer consistent. There is no simulation, and we are not very spiritual. At the beginning, we entered the trap for this format. Once the format changed, the whole coolness changed. Updates have been interrupted for too long and the updates have not caught up. If the content in the early stage is not enough, once the update is slow, the previous plot will be forgotten. I think it is okay during the time when the update is resumed, but now I have no motivation to read. The update is slow, but there are many books that everyone is chasing. Basically, the early coverage is enough, such as the two major tubes such as Get Out and so on. Your current novel is obviously a cool article, but the format is like a new book, the update is like a fine novel, and the content is a cool article. I thought it was really good before but now I can't catch up. I feel like you are just practicing your writing. Online readers and authors are simply buyers and sellers. Let's buy it for fun and see what it means. You exchange your time for some money. This book is really disappointing I hope you can produce better works in the future.

On average, I can't update one page a day, and I get stuck every now and then. Author, you'd better cut it off.

It's well written, but too little! And it will be available soon, with full order support!

At the beginning, I saw the shadow of Ke system. I like the simulator to add Ke system to cultivate immortality!

It was good at the beginning, but after I became a Buddhist, people became wiser. It was too poisonous. I regretted buying it in bulk. Can I get a refund if I don't read the 50 chapters left?

The writing is very good, the power system is complete, the protagonist's IQ is online, and he knows that ten birds in the forest are worth one in the hand. In the first life, he studied medicine and knew that doctors are the most helpful in practicing martial arts, and ordinary people who don't study medicine will easily die of illness, and living long is the most important. In the second life, he started practicing martial arts, and it was still a life-extending type of exercise.

Chapter 2 Let's change it It was common for ancient people to live sixty years old, and it was not considered a miracle. The reason for the low average life expectancy in ancient times was the high rate of infant mortality. If people grew up normally, living 60 years would be nothing if not in troubled times. For example, if you have two children, one dies after birth and the other lives to be 60 years old, the average age is 30 years. There are several ways to study the life span of ancient people: 1. Cemeteries 2. Genealogy 3. Celebrities Take genealogy as an example. If some have statistics on children who died in infancy, the average will be lower; if there are no statistics, the average will be higher. And if you look at celebrities in tombstones and literature, the average number is even higher. The living standards of celebrities are much higher than ordinary people. In ancient times, people in cities were different from people in villages. They were both in rural areas, and those with good environment were different from those with bad environment. In short, we often say that the average age is 30 years old, but it does not mean that people will die when they live to be 30 years old. Just like today's college students and graduate students, how can they not be caught at once? Common or not? How much of the total population can it account for? The average online education level is only junior high school. Here are some data, no more debate. Let's debate again, you are right. Figure 1 is the data without statistics on premature deaths: Figure 2 is the data with statistics on premature deaths: Figure 3 is a place with a good environment: Figure 4 is the data on Han and Jin cemeteries: Post some celebrity data later:

I feel like the author made a mistake in writing, or was involved with immortal cultivators in his second life. He was too hasty. The protagonist should not have used the Changchun Eternal Age Skill to live to the age of 140, and was named the best in the world by the court! Then there was a cultivator who heard that a mortal warrior could live to be more than 140 years old, so he went to chat with the protagonist. Then after the protagonist heard about the deeds of the cultivator, he laughed three times, and then passed away! Only in the third life did he really begin to touch the world of cultivating immortals.

To be honest, I stayed up late watching the first two worlds, but I really couldn't stand the third world of cultivating Buddhism.

A simulation is a simulation, and the result becomes immersive. Is this what a life restart simulator looks like? 😅 It's a bit of a trick... You might as well just write Zhutianliu with a golden finger for talent.

Just cut it off, why bother yourself and the readers? If you can't do it, just say you can't do it, and looking for various reasons will only make readers more disappointed.

... Hahaha 🙂 Another practitioner of the Sunflower Book

The Holy Mother begins in the third world. The true Holy Mother has no clues to guide her. The protagonist and his senior brother go to recruit apprentices and examine the apprentice's character, all with kindness as the core. The protagonist's senior brother turned into the Virgin without any clues. Before the disciples were confiscated, the description of him was that he was not a truly kind person. Later, when he saw other immortal cultivators massacring civilians, he felt so angry that he scolded them for being unworthy of cultivating immortals and having no mercy. It's embarrassing.

Talking is the same as saying p. I can take four days off in five days. I say I want to update every day, and I take off the next day after saying it. When it comes to writing about this life, I have to practice my calligraphy all over again, and I don't know how to write down the priorities. In the third life, the Dharma has already passed, and in the fourth life, I am still here to resolve the case. I wrote about being a Buddhist and having an affair with a monster. Selling dog meat on a sheep's head, and even pretending that Buddhism does not prohibit marriages. For the sake of the common people, throw yourself on the street and throw yourself to death.

The early stage was eye-catching, especially the part about rebelling against the feudal princes, but in the later stage, the cultivating immortals was ignored by everyone, and there was no highlight. The title of the book says it's about martial arts, but it gets off topic later.

Otherwise, don't ask for leave. Otherwise, if you ask for leave, just update at the time you say. Is your time zone different from everyone else? Daytime update = no update all day, noon update = evening update, and another chapter at two o'clock in the evening = I don't know if it is there the next day. Do you really think that if you delete a single chapter, no one will remember it?

If you write this kind of Braille in 4 months, if you don't get angry, who will? 🙂

I held it in for a total of 2 days with or without asking for leave, and I finally came up with a chapter. Is this your idea? If you can't write, just cut it, don't disgust me here.

I advise you not to be ungrateful. If you are in a good mood, I will reward you with two chapters. Do you really think that I can live on this little money? I'm not one of those guys on this site who has no talent. When the time comes, I'll change my account and it'll be like killing chickens😅😅

A good novel about cultivating immortals must be about solving crimes.

What kind of garbage is this new copy? Demon and Buddha love? It makes me want to vomit. And what kind of motherly sentiments are there? How many lives has the protagonist been reincarnated in and he still hasn't come out? In short, this new copy is really awesome!

I heard that he became a monk later? It's gone. The first few chapters are really good, but I don't like monks.

What is written in this chapter about cultivating Buddhism? The author asked someone to write for him? 1. There is no difference in combat power. As mentioned earlier, the sacrificial vessels used by warriors can be compared to the level of magical power. Then, it took a long time to fight the two interior fox demons. Then, start the military hegemony, what the hell, brother. You are writing about cultivating immortality. Aren't the grandmaster warriors who use sacrificial weapons and have magical power realm the protagonists on the battlefield? One man is against ten thousand. Why are you writing about the army? 2. There is no distinction between primary and secondary. This is a novel about cultivating immortality. The focus is on the protagonist's cultivation of immortality. Are you writing about fighting for hegemony during the Warring States Period? Unify the world? The protagonist's journey of cultivating Buddhism is the key point. What are you writing about?

Author, the average number of orders for your book should be 5,000, right? After you have finished your college affairs, come over and write this novel. If you have three books, you can just get a diploma. Writing novels is much more promising than working. Now, I think even if your updates are so bad, it will cost tens of thousands a month no matter what. Think about it for yourself, and the author. I don't know what you have been thinking about your book recently. Whether you are inflated or floating, so I feel that even if this is This book has been sold out. If you can make money by just writing the next book, I am afraid you are wrong. I suggest you keep writing even if you can't stop writing. Otherwise, according to your bad character approach, unless your next book is really very good, otherwise haha, although according to your approach, even if you finish writing the next book, it will not be much better as long as it is not very good, but at least the bottom line of character still exists.

Let's put it this way, the writing of this book is very good until the first half of the book. The plot is somewhat indifferent but not bad. The weird and simulated elements added are quite interesting. Generally speaking, it is not bad. However, in the second half of the book, it starts to be no different from ordinary immortals. The plot becomes thin and the characters start to become flat. And when it comes to practicing Buddhism. . Oh, what a mess. I suggest you just read the first half.

I'll give you a monthly pass, and you'll give me extra juice?

The writing is surprisingly good, I can't believe this is a novel written by an unpolished novice. If the follow-up plan does not collapse and can be updated in a timely manner, it is not a problem to become a god with this book, but it will be no problem to stand out among many writers.

Monthly pass, plus finessing, understand? (Dog head, dog head)

I think it's very interesting, the writing is really good, and I personally like the plot, but it's a pity that it's gone😔