I Am a Continuation of the Fire in the World of Immortality

This subject matter is fine, but be careful not to write about one life for too long. The few books in the world today are just trying to sell people on their own, and the protagonist is still alive after hundreds of them. This is as cliche as ordinary fairy tales. You can refer to the simulated path of cultivating immortality. There are many arrangements from life to life, and it is very fun to strategize.

Your karma is too great, so you better stop cultivating.

Those who have experienced eunuchs really don't have the courage to pursue them. Keep it on a bookshelf 🤫

With such talent, why not imitate the cuckoo and dove occupy the magpie's nest? Isn't it faster to secretly go to the homes of nobles and royal families and give birth to babies than to slowly develop your family yourself? 😁

In this kind of book family, other people in the family also need to be useful, not just the protagonist.

I read it all night, and I think there are a few questions, The first is the golden finger. You might want to change the system into an object. As for how it came about, it may be a magic weapon specially refined by a certain boss to save a certain crisis in the world of immortality. One use of the soul will reduce one soul until it dies. As for the crisis, it depends on the outline of your novel in the middle and later stages. Or it may be a magic weapon specially refined by blocking the memory to avoid an enemy in the previous life, or other reasons. Golden Finger is the finishing touch that echoes the outline of the middle and later stages of your novel. The system you write has zero effect, and it also reduces the sense of immersion in the novel, because even the story of Mortal Cultivation to Immortality is forced to solve the situation of having nothing to do after completing the dungeon by changing the map. However, such novels are already everywhere, and it is difficult to attract readers. As for how the protagonist got the golden finger, maybe it was the pull of fate? Or something else? It depends on your thinking and foreshadowing. Second, if you haven't saved the manuscript, or haven't thought about the outline yet, you can only write it wherever you think. At least hundreds of thousands of manuscripts can be saved, which can greatly reduce the writing pressure. Without a manuscript, you can only describe the plot linearly, and I think it is difficult to prepare for wits or hasty plots. Unless you have a strong writing talent, ordinary people must use hundreds of thousands of words of outlines or save manuscripts to enrich the plot. Third, the overall game is quite satisfactory. There are no loopholes in the plot, but there are no outstanding points. There is no innovation in the system, such as the mysterious resurrection, the innovation or subversion of the entire worldview such as the Xuanjian Immortal Clan. It would be difficult to become a hit, but the plot has ups and downs, the characters are full-bodied, and the long-term main line is clear. I don't think it is a problem if there are thousands of subscriptions. Fourth, there is the problem of the long-term main plot. There can be many branch plots in the novel, but you have not written what the long-term main plot is. Since your golden finger is not the foreshadowing of the main plot, then the main plot must be well thought out, because many novels end up becoming online game novels about upgrading and fighting monsters. Subscriptions will be cut in half by the mid-term, even if there is world peace and vulgar killing of enemies. Ideal, this can also be regarded as the end of values. In the end, the protagonist completes his obsession, and the book can end. Instead of the protagonist becoming the strongest in the world, the book ends. This is completely meaningless, because no one in this world has the highest value of life as the strongest in the world. Musk's ideal is also for all people to immigrate to Mars and realize the sublimation of life. In the end, after achieving the above conditions, it must also be distinctive. This is the standard for Wan Ding. However, it is not easy to write other things well, which is the standard for experienced writers.

I feel that Kan Ze's writing is too simple. You can write him as an arrogant and domineering villain who bites his teeth and loves petty gains, but you cannot write him as a fool. People who can build a foundation are at least fifty or sixty years old. Absolutely not Stupid, let's just talk about the background you explained. This Kanze stood out from the family struggle and definitely had some tricks. He coaxed the ancestors around and made the ancestors ignore the interests of the family and made him unconscious. How could he be ambushed so easily. He has offended so many people and is such a villain. He will immediately become suspicious at the first sign of trouble. According to the character of such a person, he will definitely go out of his way to recruit a few helpers from the outside, or instigate rebels to fight back. You might even suffer a big loss. The appearance of this exercise book is a bit far-fetched, too abrupt, the kind that fell from the sky, rather than carefully designed and hard-earned, so the reading is a bit unsatisfactory. Although there are no logical loopholes in your writing, the ups and downs of the plot are very small and too bland, almost like getting lost. It feels like there is no outline, the plot design is not dramatic enough, and it sounds like a running account.

I'm making the same old mistake from the last book again.

You can quickly let the second life come out later, just in time to write down the foundation-building pill left behind, so that your son or grandson can become a foundation-building pill. Then after generations of hard work, the protagonist will have two or three foundation-building pills when he is reincarnated.

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You guys were really good at the last book. You even finished it ahead of schedule. I'm really impressed.

Don't just write about the son of genius who comes out to turn the tide every time when the family is in crisis. You can write about the son of genius who is in the period when the family is on the rise.

This book is pretty good, I don't know why no one has read it

"The Heroine: Cultivation of Immortality in the City" took the title of the book and ran around the comment area, just in case someone really took a look at it, hehe~ Also, the author is a newbie, so his writing may be a little bad, so readers, please be merciful and be gentle with your criticism.

Look at his details and look at mine. I feel so uncomfortable...