Weird Life Simulator

As proof, the author will jump to as many floors as this building is. It's so sad.

Author, I read more than ten chapters and almost vomited. The content of your book is so good. To describe it in one sentence, the sea is full of water.

Lovecraft was a third-rate author who failed to achieve his goals during his lifetime. He was regarded as worthless by various magazines in the industry at that time. Some people really regarded his books as myths. The Dutiful Son of Cthulhu is so funny ———— Tonight, let's have two plates of fried Cthulhu King in Yellow with beer.

Good guy, I'm just a good guy. I read it in the style of a novice novel from ten years ago. The description of the fight was unclear and self-entertaining, which made me feel that I might as well have written it as an awkward text about yelling out the names of moves during the fight. The things explained in the book were also vague. In a fantasy world, scientific names and scientific reactions were forced on me, which made me confused ("▔□▔)

Pulled out a knife and wrote three chapters, awesome

To be honest, your subject matter is very new, but what the hell is your writing style? You ramble on and on, it doesn't make sense at all, and you can't find the sense of the picture. It really looks too tiring. I started to feel dizzy after reading fifteen chapters.

This world system is chaotic. The Cthulhu system and the Heaven system are completely in conflict. One is chaotic and disorderly, the other is lawful order, and there are also problems with the introduction. In the Heaven system, the underworld is an important institution and an important part of the heaven system. If you want to capture the underworld, you must defeat the entire heaven system, otherwise it is simply impossible. If you could defeat the entire heaven system and capture the underworld, it would be impossible for the human world to still exist. There are only two possibilities. First, the heaven system as a whole is weaker than the Cthulhu system and was defeated, and the underworld was captured. Otherwise, do you think heaven will let you capture the underworld? Even if you attack the underworld in a sneak attack at the beginning, as long as heaven can defeat it, do you think heaven will let you capture the underworld and not take it back? ? Second, if the heaven system can defeat the Cthulhu system, if it can win, the underworld will not be captured.

Water King, cut it with a knife. There are three chapters in which water is inexplicably filled with water. From the identity of the enemy to the knowledge, it is a mess. If you don't know how to describe the fight, don't fill the water with water!

The inclusion of private goods is too powerful... The various poisonous chicken soup-like brainwashing contained in it is not suitable for novices to read. It is easy to be influenced by the author, and there are a lot of subtle influences... Then, talking about the work, the author wants to integrate the Cthulhu mythology, the heaven system, and the human world system plus the protagonist's system. There are too many things that the system wants to integrate, and it looks too messy! And if you sew too many worldviews in the combat power system, you will definitely be trampled on! Then there will inevitably be low-level players beating high-level players... Generally speaking, it's too urgent. Obviously every system is worthy of special mention! But in the book, it just jumps into the direct battle. It's too confusing and not suitable for novices to read. But there are also difficulties for veterans. Veterans of various systems basically have preconceived ideas and basically have their own opinions on this. The author simply criticized it without expressing his own ideas and opinions! It's too inconsistent and too embarrassing... The summary is that there are too many things integrated. To put it simply, there are monsters, heaven and earth, Cthulhu, science, fortune, Yangshen, martial arts, literature, Taoism, games, etc. And many of them are mentioned in one sentence, which makes people feel numb... To be honest, I can't stand it anymore and run away, but it's a waste not to comment on it after feeding me a lot of poison

It seems very tiring, there is no sense of immersion, there are too many narrations, and there are too few words and inner battles (as long as there is some action, the narration always adds settings and new knowledge, which is very tiring). I have only read the first twenty or thirty chapters, and I have no interest in it. I will not comment on the following ones if I have not read them.

It's routine to flirt with others, flirt with girls, and write some online jokes. When you're fighting with an enemy, you're flirting. There's a line in the article after the story (it only took a few seconds to say so much), which made me feel like a third party (narrator) is narrating the story of the protagonist.

The writing and setting of the plot are good, but the content is too damn watery. Every time I feel a little bit more immersed, a bunch of messy things suddenly appear. It's too confusing. Goodbye!

The content is good, but it's written like farts. It's all narration and has no sense of involvement. One second he was drawing a sword, and the next second he was explaining everything about heaven and earth.

I don't think the old days can be stronger than heaven, right?

I jumped when I saw it, because there are too many settings. I feel that the author wants to show all the settings in the first plot, but it is boring to be obvious, and it cannot be said to be watery. But it is boring to write a chapter with just a few actions. Some settings need to be written slowly, which looks too ink.

It's so stupid. You can write six chapters about killing a tiger. It doesn't matter if you write about the protagonist's various psychological descriptions. Each chapter contains a lot of the author's own personal insights.

The introduction is written like this: Gods and other divine guardians gifted by heaven cannot withstand mental pollution. How can mortals live?

If the local Chinese mythology is not saved, then you just use the Japanese one... What do you mean!!!!! Never see you again

I don't know where the author learned about Cthulhu, but his understanding is ridiculously wrong. I didn't expect Cthulhu's direct belief system. It's typical to have a Cthulhu system but don't understand it at all.

I persisted for fourteen chapters and couldn't stand it anymore. There are actually more inner dramas and various explanations about fighting and killing ghosts than the serious content! I don't even know what you are writing! Too watery. Reading a novel is even more tiring than reality.

One move can write a chapter, but there are too many poisonous points. I don't write in detail when I should, or I don't omit when I should. Sometimes the connection is not natural, which makes people feel that they have missed something. Fortunately, some people regard it as a masterpiece. It is just a pile of various words together. I have been deceived.

The first volume is a bit too much to go into detail, but the rest is okay, come on!

I can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 12. It's really poisonous. In one chapter, a mysterious Lei actually explains it chemically. What? Do you want to cultivate immortality scientifically or take the thunder and lightning factor postgraduate entrance examination? There are so many inexplicable mentality and explanations.

Let me explain for the author The setting of this book should be The setting of Cthulhu has been strengthened, and the setting of Heaven has been weakened a lot, just like the original Miyamoto and the current Miyamoto. Cthulhu is like you let the soldiers wear a set of divine equipment to fight other soldiers. The settings of the two, one is infinitely strengthened, and the other is infinitely weakened. It was forcibly made into a 50-50 ratio So don't ask anymore about Cthulhu being able to break through the heavens One was infinitely weakened and the other was infinitely strengthened, what do you think?

Those authors who have written hundreds of pictures and only have a few dozen fans must not cry to death

Too much nonsense, Luo Liba is a lot of verbose

It's too long-winded and too confusing. One sentence and one action can explain half of a chapter, and passers-by will have to make up another chapter!

Well, it's okay to draw a sword and take a chapter

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Does the author still write? Are you a eunuch? If you live, call me