Bone Dharma Form, Subduing the Myriad Worlds

There are so few White Bone Divine Powers, and your White Bone Dao Palace is such a waste of talent. Why don't you come up with some White Bone Spells and Divine Powers? You'll turn into a Heavenly Demon in an instant! 😰 Crowdfunding daytime spells and divine powers: White Bone Blazing Yin Fire, White Bone Armor, White Bone God and Demon.

The White Bone Immortal possesses boundless magical power. He possesses great supernatural powers and can suppress all things in the universe. I can't make this up anymore.

This author seems to have forgotten that they're writing a fantasy novel (Xianxia), switching to a Western fantasy genre halfway through, successfully disgusting most readers. This story is almost certainly doomed to fail. The author is advised to scrap it and start over to avoid wasting too much time.

The protagonist is a loser and indecisive; I really don't know how he's managed to survive for so long.

I was turned off by that Western fantasy world. It was originally a good read, but it became a multiverse fantasy and lost all its appeal.

I had no desire to continue reading after reading the synopsis... Why do authors still like the "underdog" starting point these days?

Please share your opinions in this thread. Thank you all for your guidance. I've been writing for only six months, and it's part-time. So there are many problems. I really want to improve, but I can't figure out where the problem lies.

There's no need to write about other worlds in the early stages, and even if you do, it shouldn't be too long.

It's unbelievable that several of your books combined don't even reach 300,000 words. How can readers possibly trust you? Whether the writing is good or not is one thing, but whether you're serious and responsible is another. So disappointing! 😰

Let's go into a dungeon! Which dungeons are fun?