Bone Dharma Form, Subduing the Myriad Worlds

There are so few magical powers of the White Bones, and you are such a loser in the White Bone Taoist Palace. I want to think of some magical powers of the Bones, and I suddenly turned into a demon 😰 Crowdfunding day magic powers: White Bones Burning Yin Fire, White Bone Armor, White Bones Divine Demon,

The White Bone Immortal has boundless magical power. My magical power is vast, and I can suppress the whole world.   I can't edit anymore.

This author may have forgotten that he was writing a fairy tale, and changed it to a western fantasy genre halfway through. The success disgusted most readers. If nothing unexpected happens, this article is definitely a done deal. I suggest the author start over from scratch to avoid wasting too much time.

He is a loser and indecisive. I really don't know why the protagonist can survive for so long.

I was persuaded to quit that Western fantasy world. I was originally a good person, but it was no longer interesting to become the Zhutianliu.

Even after reading the introduction, I didn't have the desire to read any further. . . Why do current authors still like useless starts?

Have any comments on this post? Thank you for your advice. I have only been writing articles for half a year and am working part-time. So there are many questions. I really want to make progress, but I can't find the problem. 😚😚😚

There is no need to write about another world in the early stage. Even if you do, it shouldn't be too long.

You are also a talented person. You have written several books with less than 300,000 words in total. How can you make readers believe in you? Whether the writing is good or not is one thing, but whether you take it seriously or not is another thing entirely. It's so disappointing😰

Enter the dungeon. Which dungeon is more fun?