The Pirate Commander
海贼指挥官
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 650k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 5y ago
- English
- Request a translation
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294Chapters
7.8kRecommendations
37.5kFans
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Can you please stop using the term "common people"?! ("Common people" is a term unique to China, it's really jarring.) Can't you just use "common people"? 😅 "Common people" is a self-designation that Chinese people (Han Chinese) often use. Before the Warring States period, "common people" referred to people with surnames. The character for "surname" can be broken down into "woman" and "birth," indicating that the son born to a woman (or in a place) received a corresponding surname.
Honestly, I think it's best to use names that everyone is used to in Japanese anime fan art, rather than insisting on being absolutely correct. Because this involves something very important: immersion. For example, there's the character Fujitora Issho. The author made it Fujitora's entire life, which just feels awkward. This greatly affects the reader's immersion in the novel.
To be honest, even Pacifistas exist in One Piece, so most of the Red Alert technology would be easily analyzed by the World Government. Trying to use Red Alert technology to fight the World Government is unrealistic; personally, I feel it might even increase the World Government's power.
Aside from the awkward use of the word "common people" in One Piece, it's fine.
Can we please stop with the harem? A socialist leader having a harem just feels incredibly incongruous...
Well, the synopsis says she's joined the Revolutionary Army. The idea of someone transmigrating into a pirate world and becoming a henchman will naturally deter some readers. Good luck, author!
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The author clearly lacks understanding of science, technology, and manufacturing, seemingly believing that with blueprints, anything can be created. If you don't understand this area, I suggest avoiding scenarios where natives obtain the protagonist's blueprints and immediately create Red Alert weapons. Red Alert's technology, compared to that in the One Piece world, emphasizes a more systematic approach.
A brief discussion of the Navy in One Piece
I believe that the social model of the One Piece world is not suitable for application from the perspective of the real world, although it does have some realistic elements. The relationship between the Navy, the CP organization, the Five Elders, and Im-sama is very similar to that between the Metropolitan Police Department, the Navy, the Self-Defense Forces, the Mobile Force, the Emperor, and…
A bunch of people are talking about how great modern technology is, but why do they all think that One Piece and reality follow the same physical principles? Are there people in reality who can fly? Are there people in reality who can transform into elements? Are there people in reality who can transform into beasts? Are there superheroes in reality?