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Seeing that he has been retired for two years, I would not be happy without complaining. . . There is too much written about the competition, but the excitement that it should have is gone, and it is just brushed off. The fun elements of interacting with other anchors, live broadcasts, videos, and explanations were not fully utilized. I have this kind of constipation feeling: finally winning the championship, the celebration is mentioned, the influence is mentioned, the fans' reaction after returning to China is mentioned, everyone's praise after the live broadcast is mentioned, the interaction with other CSers is mentioned, and then the next chapter suddenly goes directly to the next event, and the emotional chapter with the heroine did not even have ten chapters before getting married. . . After seeing the second major championship in a row, let's talk about the championship stickers in detail, the live broadcast interaction in detail, and the fancy praises of domestic fans. I can write a show-off scene where the protagonist returns to his hometown. There are many highlights in the middle: the protagonist explains the professional brother, integrates the live broadcast description of the barrage, plays CS for his wife, leads the anchor to score points, etc. However, it is not long. It basically disappears after less than one chapter, and there is no further mention. Including the transition between major events, you can write a longer story, such as signing a contract with the live broadcast platform, pre-match preparations, training process, tactical innovations proposed by the protagonist, how to live broadcast during the break, or helping Tianlu train newcomers, etc. Instead of "We are the champions" in the previous chapter, enter the quarterfinals and faze competition in the next chapter. Including seeing the second consecutive major championship, the next chapter will directly flash back to the protagonist's retirement for two years? The Spring and Autumn style of writing is directly described in one stroke. . . Let's expand on this. Isn't it huge and exciting + pretentious? Even if the reason for retirement can be ordinary, the response from all walks of life can also be a big write-up. How the protagonist adapts to a life without competition after retirement, what is the live broadcast career like after retirement? There is a lot of content that can be expanded, including the impact of subsequent comeback, and the response from all walks of life. You are all alive in one or two chapters. Do you need rehabilitation training? There is no performance in training matches. Just go up and kill indiscriminately. I am not Sister Li. The whole chapter is written about the game. But the key is that the writing of the game is not outstanding. The protagonist's random killing is okay at the beginning. Later, he is basically limited by props, or one by one, and then each small point is arranged. After a few explosions, I didn't write much. I just wrote about how strong the opponent was, or how my teammates performed. Then I summarized it and found that the protagonist actually had very good statistics and won the game, but I always felt uncomfortable. The protagonist's talent was so high, and he was on the first line to play majors for 6 months. The starting point was so high, and he stopped after winning two consecutive championships. If you don't write more, it will be difficult to develop the plot. It is better to write about joining a domestic team, and then leading 4 pits. The protagonist works hard to turn the tide, and his teammates improve in various ways. He enters the major in the first year, his teammates work hard, and the protagonist helps, drive the development of cncs, and then enter the semi-finals next year. It will be great to finally win the championship. Let's just go back to G2 when the protagonist returns. I don't want to see it anymore.
Open a prop post and post some useful props in the picture. At least the brothers can learn something.
Chapter 40: The protagonist loses two flashes of light. In the first lesson, the player slipped in the middle of the stage and lost it after running a few steps. For the second one, aim a little to the left and shoot a jumper. This one is mainly for people with small B. Two flashes, one high and one low, can kill the person in the middle who has no back flash for several seconds, and seize the opportunity to clear the enemy. B2 floor of Lost City seals link A Push against the wall, roughly aim at the point, and make a jump shot. The door cigarette hanging in the middle can be used as an Xbox cigarette Align the bulge on the right side and right-click to throw
Sen Po is a clown now, but it makes me sick.
The screenshots taken two days ago made me feel like I had traveled across the capital.
This is not the peak 😃
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I couldn't stand it after seeing the introduction, now is fantasy time
Who would have thought that a male protagonist from a novel would actually come to sweep CSGO?
Posen - Brother Guozi, nicknamed the Wrapping Lover! Famous quote: E-sports has nothing to do with ZZ! Rating: A failed zz clown
Alas, today's game made me look stupid. My blood pressure is so high. Tianlu really needs to reorganize. Now it can't even break out of Asia, and there aren't many teams in Asia now. Those old guys have a lot of problems. Just iron eggs.