When an Unlucky Guy Gets the Halo of the Protagonist

After reading the first ten chapters, it is not easy to stay. After reading the first three chapters that I clicked on, a large number of readers basically left. In the first chapter, the main character gives the impression that he is just a loser who directly persuades a large number of readers to withdraw. You must pay attention to the sense of substitution! Chapter 2, traveling to the zombie world, can be said to be a straightforward start, but you must know that the protagonist is a normal person! A normal person would enter a world where zombies are rampant and directly interact with a zombie, even if it is an injured zombie. This is inconsistent with the image of a loser. There are also sleeping and intercom calls in the back, which are the most basic precautions for a time traveler. The beginning of the third chapter is about acknowledging one's relatives, which is very convincing To be honest, you can write about the protagonist's previous daily life first, and describe his personality (what a normal office worker should look like) and what he was doing before time travel. Then I wrote that I woke up and found that I had entered the reincarnation space. I explained the purpose of the space, the consequences of not signing, and the benefits of signing. Then I signed the contract and got the benefits to prepare for the task. Then explain what kind of world the mission copy is like, what the plot is like, what tasks are there, whether the difficulty is easy or difficult, and what rewards are there after completing the tasks. Finally entering the dungeon world, if there are zombies, you must carefully observe the surroundings and confirm their location. Then find a safe nest and write more details. For example, during the period, the protagonist encountered zombies and how he saved the day. For example, the birth point is in a residential building. As soon as you enter, you will find a big zombie in front of you and start your escape career. Then during the fight, the zombie falls down and dies. The protagonist is injured and escapes. There is no drama. Writing two chapters on it is not a problem. Chapter 3: Holding a walkie-talkie and saying "Is there anyone there?" Is what a normal person should do, and then contact Glenn, tell him about his predicament, obtain supplies, and learn about the distribution of forces around the time through the conversation after meeting. Finally, rest, recuperate, recuperate, and prepare yourself (what preparations you have) to wait for the arrival of the protagonist in the mission world. The first tens of thousands of words are very important. Once you have written it, the editor will see that the beginning is okay and attract people to continue reading. The new tens of thousands of words that follow can retain people without straining their hips (such as initial subscriptions and follow-up subscriptions). It is almost time to shorten the website

Good guy, these good reviews are all based on bad reviews, right?

Ah, you, the author, are so cool, aren't you writing a book for royalties, just to let more people see it? You spend more than your income, right?

Imagination: ★★★★ Writing style: ★★☆ Writing power: ★★☆ Sense of immersion: ★★ Reader handsomeness value: ★★★★★

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Rave reviews😒

After seeing so many good reviews and thousands of recommendation votes, I don't know what to say.

Good guy, I am straight up a good guy!

Your introduction reminds me of a person named Kamijou Touma.

After watching the first one, I can't stand it any longer. The protagonist's start is too miserable. The protagonist's shoes are too long and he can't keep people around.

What I wrote before was okay, but it changed after I met that Yang Tian. I don't know why you think that the more you write, the more childish you are.

The plot in the following chapters is much smoother than the previous chapters. The author is getting better and better as he writes! I believe this novel will achieve good results

The recommendation to you has become 10,000,,, my obsessive-compulsive disorder

There are so many reviews and recommendations for a new book. It can't be a trumpet.

Naruto didn't know much about his father at that time, and Naruto was being watched.

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Do you need to collect minor character names? Please make soy sauce. 😁😁

Finished reading 😓

I seem to have seen this setting somewhere 😰

There is something, this comment area 😏

Dude, a bunch of privacy settings

The reviews are pretty good, with more than 20 chapters and over 300 posts. Isn't that outrageous? Even the platinum masters don't have a place for you.