A Romantic Comedy with the Wrong Script

Don't you think it's a bad move that the task cannot be abandoned? , Originally the protagonist was free, and it was really cool to abandon the mission when killing Yunu, but now that he is tied up, he feels so low.

The slave of the system made me laugh to death. Why is it just to give the girls a home? The girls were obviously not very willing. When they saw the back, they immediately jumped. They are simply slaves of the system. They pretended not to be scumbags for the sake of the mission.

It's good to rename this book "How to Make a Scumbag". In order to harvest the system's wool, he began to fish for various beauties. After catching them, he ruthlessly refused them, saying that they wanted to become stronger. The emotional treatment is even more off-putting than the emotions in Invincible. Others are merciful, but at least there is an explanation for every beauty. I can't stand it for more than 20 chapters, no matter whether you can open a harem later or not. Authors who cannot write emotional dramas will ruin their works. What are the recommended things for daily detoxification?

Well written, keep it up brother. 🤭

Removing the restriction on abolishing tasks is a real failure. When I read the second chapter of this book, my eyes really lit up. It was the first time I saw a system in which tasks can be abolished. Later, I suddenly discovered that the task could not be cancelled. Later I saw that cheating a girl would cost ≈4 skill points. I've seen too many scumbag male protagonists, and I don't particularly care, but the protagonist has completely become a slave to the system. He has to chase whoever the system wants him to chase. It's disgusting.

Reminds me of what Teacher Luo Xiang said: "I married 8 women at the same time and held the wedding on the same day, which makes you singles so angry. But I didn't get the certificate, is it enough to be charged with bigamy? It doesn't constitute it. So how important is it to get the certificate."

There are two problems 1. The mission can be abolished before, but not after Chapter 28. The plot is completely driven by the mission 2. The female characters are all tools, and the true feelings of the male protagonist cannot be seen at all To be honest, I am a bit poisoned

It was really close. . . There is a problem with the system itself: you use women's favor to gain points, and then you encounter a male protagonist who doesn't even have a clear goal and treats each mission goal as a tool. So far, I haven't seen the male protagonist really get emotional for any of the characters, including the female ghost, the slit girl, the teacher, the classmate, and even the younger sister. The progress of the relationship with them is also completely driven by tasks, which means that the male protagonist is also a tool man himself. . . This wave, this wave is a tool for everyone

After suddenly being unable to give up the mission, Pig's Knuckle was so smart that I didn't want to interact with him before. However, when the mission started, he didn't even do basic intelligence collection. Even though he was forced by the system, he didn't even ask about the situation of the person he was confessing to. He just went on like this. The separation from the previous persona was so serious.

It was starting to make me sick just to keep reading. The subject matter is obviously good, and several settings are interesting. With a good deck of cards, why are the plot arrangement and writing so so ()? At the level of the twelve chapters I've read so far, the author is not a student, right? You should work harder, I can't stand it anymore.

I'll keep it for now, and I'll wait and see when it's put on the shelves~

Books about Japan are a lot easier to read out of ten, the author just needs to get used to it.

I've opened a new book, wish it a great success 🙂

Kawaii

After reading Chapter 30, tell me your thoughts. The plot of the novel has a good concept, using various characters from Neon City Ghost Story to describe it. However, the writing style is worrying, the characters are not distinct, and the content is exaggerated or even empty. Let's just leave it at that.

Make up the color red by yourself

It's not good that Yui Kuriyama died. It felt a bit bad to kill this character by force. He obviously liked the protagonist. Although he wanted to kill the protagonist's sister, it was a bit unusual to be killed directly by the protagonist like this, and he didn't resist when he was killed by the protagonist.

The third time I read it from the daily guide. From the first time to now, I have read a total of eighty chapters. The previous part was written fairly normally, but this is really going too far. The whole thing is full of systems, and everything belongs to the system. . .

U1s1 is worthy of being a daily guide. The setting is obviously quite good, but the plot and writing are hard to describe in one sentence.

I suggest the author change the name to Self-cultivation of a Scumbag

At first glance, it looks like a love Peking opera with the wrong script 😂😂

Don't read it, just read 30 chapters. The plot is good, but the author's writing skills need to be improved. It's too awkward to read. I hope the author can read it and read it for himself. There are many places that are half-explained or used without mentioning them. They are inconsistent and contradictory, so he won't feel uncomfortable with himself... The author's thinking is really good. Please improve his writing skills.

I have always been afraid that the protagonist will be discovered and then be beaten to death

Please collect and comment on the new book, thank you all "The Resurrection of Uchiha Class at the Beginning"

I can't read books written by scumbag men. If you like books with multiple female protagonists, you can read them.

Emmm~ How do you say it? Is this a daily life-saving episode? ? 🤔

Congratulations on the completion, flowers and flowers~tears in my eyes

Does the author have any misunderstanding about the word comedy?

This book is not recommended for people with obsessive-compulsive disorder, because the protagonist always gives up on tasks and then deducts skill points.

I can tolerate the protagonist being a scumbag, but I can't stand the protagonist being a scumbag