Cultivation: Raising Demons for Ten Years from the Start

The pace is too fast; it feels like a mere diary entry. You could slow it down and write in more detail. Your euphemistic writing style glosses over everything.

Good book, but there aren't many chapters, and the plot drags a bit.

To be honest, the first three chapters were excellent, but the later plot moved too fast. The content of the third and fourth chapters was forcibly condensed into one chapter, which made the character descriptions less than perfect. How to describe it? It's like you nurtured him, he came back in the second chapter, and then became your disciple. Suddenly, they were inseparable, which felt a bit strange.

The three golden chapters are very strong. But it just didn't taste the same later on. Everyone laughs at Tiancan Tudou's simplistic and amateurish writing. But how many authors can write simple, easy-to-read stories that are "easy to read aloud"?

The first three chapters were good, I have to admit that! To be honest, I only got to chapter six. From chapter four onwards, what kind of rubbish was that? Were the first three chapters bought? Definitely bought.

Recently, a large number of novels like "Underworld: The Beginning," "Cultivation: The Beginning," and "Investiture of the Gods: The Beginning" have appeared. They seem to be either written by studios specializing in similar genres or by AI.

This is so awkward to write. 😅

A divine beginning. A disastrous ending. What a pity. What a real pity.

It was fine at first! But then he started showing off and acting all high and mighty after we went out! It was low-IQ showing off!

I just don't understand why the Nascent Soul stage is divided into upper, middle, and lower levels. I'm completely confused. This is the first time I've encountered such a chaotic realm. Normally, the upper, middle, and lower levels are nine different things, but in your case, they're all just Nascent Souls.