Cultivation: Raising Demons for Ten Years from the Start

The pace is too fast and it feels like a running account. You can slow down a little and write more carefully. With your Spring and Autumn style of writing, everything is passed in one stroke.

It's a good book, but it's a bit lacking and the plot is a bit slow.

Someone said that your first to third chapters are excellent, but the subsequent plot is really too fast. The content of the original three or four chapters was forcibly shortened into one chapter, making the character description not very perfect. How to describe it, you trained him, came back in the second chapter, and then became your teacher. It feels a bit strange that he is inseparable from life to death all of a sudden.

Golden Chapter Three is very strong. But it doesn't really taste that way at the back. Everyone laughs at Tiancan Tudou's little white text. But how many authors can make their writing "catchy"?

The first three chapters at the beginning are good, I have to admit this! To be honest, I only read Chapter 6 and the beginning of Chapter 4. What the hell is that? Did you buy the first three chapters again? Definitely buy it

Recently there have been a large number of books like Underworld: The Beginning, Cultivation: The Beginning, Fengshen: The Beginning, etc. It feels like they are either written by the same type of books by studios or by AI.

It's so embarrassing to write 😅

A divine beginning. The same follow-up as Xiang. Pity. What a pity

It started fine! Later, when I went out, I pretended to be cool and pretended to be B in every way! Low IQ pretense!

I just can't understand why Yuanying is divided into upper, middle, third and lower three. I was so confused when I saw it. This is the first time I encountered such a chaotic state. The nine top, middle and bottom are nine different ones, but when it comes to you, they are all Nascent Souls.