Fallout: The Secret of Marisabou

Coming from the Fallout 4 community, Fallout fan fiction is rare and deserves encouragement 👍. After reading it, I always felt that the writing was a bit rushed. The author was eager to show the plot to the readers and took his time. In this way, the plot did not leave a deep and full impression on people.

The writing is good, the descriptions are smooth and comfortable, and the plot generally goes well, but the transitions in the plot may be a bit stiff. No offense intended, just a little guess. Is the author a college student or not yet in the workforce?

Bullshit, as long as the Fallout fanfic is finished, I have to give it a shout-out

How to put it this way, I prefer to savor the wasteland in detail, tell more stories about the small characters in the wasteland, and describe it in more details. The pace is too fast and it is not suitable for the wasteland. After the completion of several stage chapters in the main line, I insert branch lines, and then continue to return to the main line, and big battles, etc. (Just like a river and lake). I prefer to taste the wasteland like tea.

Most of them are the plot of Fallout 76, ah,

🌿🌿🌿🌿I have wanted to read the radiation novel for a long time. Come on, author.

Come on, author, have you ever thought about improving the plots of Fallout 3 and New Vegas? After all, the plot updates in 76 are too slow.

It has been added to the collection. It has great ideas and the author's writing is very good. This book title makes people want to click on it. I visited with my work "The Witcher Begins in America". Thank you!

What is this book about? Why can't I understand the title?

Is the life of President Enclave Thomas made up or true? Haoshengcao