Fallout: the Secret of Marisabo

Coming from the Fallout 4 community, Fallout fan fiction is rare and deserves encouragement 👍. After reading it, I always felt that the writing was a bit rushed. The author was eager to show the plot to the readers and took his time. In this way, the plot did not leave a deep and full impression on people.

Bullshit, as long as the Fallout fanfic is finished, I have to give it a shout-out

How to put it this way, I prefer to savor the wasteland in detail, tell more stories about the small characters in the wasteland, and describe it in more details. The pace is too fast and it is not suitable for the wasteland. After the completion of several stage chapters in the main line, I insert branch lines, and then continue to return to the main line, and big battles, etc. (Just like a river and lake). I prefer to taste the wasteland like tea.

The writing is good, the descriptions are smooth and comfortable, and the plot generally goes well, but the transitions in the plot may be a bit stiff. No offense intended, just a little guess. Is the author a college student or not yet in the workforce?

Come on, author, have you ever thought about improving the plots of Fallout 3 and New Vegas? After all, the plot updates in 76 are too slow.

🌿🌿🌿🌿I have wanted to read the radiation novel for a long time. Come on, author.

Most of them are the plot of Fallout 76, ah,

It has been added to the collection. It has great ideas and the author's writing is very good. This book title makes people want to click on it. I visited with my work "The Witcher Begins in America". Thank you!

Is the life of President Enclave Thomas made up or true? Haoshengcao

What is this book about? Why can't I understand the title?

Let's write about radiation in the next one! The following are my suggestions Let's do something different, the whole multi-world fusion or infinite flow, I don't care, I just want a relatively lone wolf protagonist (come on a Chinese with a correct outlook on life! Soul travel is also possible!), There is no large army, not too many subordinates, just some best friends who are close to each other in life and death Also! Power Armor Power Armor Power Armor! You can't live without radiation power armor! Ninety-eight percent of the time I play Fallout it's for the power armor!

Oh, by the way, although I said that the pace can be slower, the story cannot be boring. There should be more shock and conflict. After all, this is a wasteland. Could use more original content. There is no need to follow the rules and follow the original routine.

When will the new book come out? . . I feel like my life has hit a trough. It's okay, I'm young and have plenty of time, just tell me when.

When will my new book be released? I have read all your old books😭😭

Initial establishment and establishment of the craftsman class Under the flexible political skills of the elder of the Florida Brotherhood, Hyles Eason, and persuasion by peace or the force of the "Florida Knights", the Florida Brotherhood restored order in the settlements they could reach within two years, and purged those remnants of the Federation that were unwilling to adapt. Later, Ethan established a local council of elders composed of local councillors, union leaders, military officers, influential people in the survivor community, and scientists, and he proclaimed himself the local elder of Florida. After initially restoring order and establishing rule in Tallahassee and surrounding areas, Ethan also began to perform the Brotherhood's duties, which is to collect technology and defend humans from mutants. But everything was difficult at the beginning. Initially limited by technical reasons and manpower and material resources, all they could do was to send a searcher team composed of scavengers and Brotherhood Knights to carry out scavenging operations at the edge of the industrial area after the nuclear explosion. Collect technological data and pre-war scraps and technological products. But with the help of the survivors of the Florida Steel Plant and students from the University of Florida, and with the addition of more and more survivors, the Brotherhood had sufficient manpower and technical support. After a warehouse reserve with a large number of chemical protective suits and T51 was discovered, the Florida Brotherhood had enough materials to deeply explore the Tallahassee industrial area after being bombed by nuclear war. After that, the recovery work began to become easier. The monsters in the industrial area were quickly eliminated under the fierce firepower of the Brotherhood soldiers wearing power armor and chemical protective suits. After that, college students and workers used cutters, electric saws and other tools to recover and relocate. In the process, there were frequent conflicts between workers and college students, which gave Ethan a headache. After Maxson issued the order to establish, protect and respect technical personnel, there was a riot. After that, Elder Ethan founded the Military Forger to recover technical data and develop new technologies. A department dedicated to material production and maintenance improvement. After that, the Florida Brotherhood officially got on track.