More Curses

If you were attracted by the name, you won't read much, probably about a dozen chapters. Of course, I haven't read much, but I still have something to say about this book. First of all, let's talk about the setting of this story and other issues. The novel tells the story of the male protagonist who triggered the curse system due to a curse from the other party and embarked on a different path in life. The story is not set in a so-called alien world, but in a semi-empty modern city. This way of writing is actually very flattering. Once it's written, you can include some personal stuff to show your arrogance as a literary person. If it's not written well... Then the plot will completely collapse. So when I saw the semi-empty background, I became interested. But then, this book did not bring me much surprise. Of course, maybe it's because I've been exposed to this genre a lot, so there's not much freshness to it. So, the question is, what type is this type? In fact, this is a variant system genre that has been popular for several years, and is now considered a major genre. However, this kind of restriction is so great that many books in the later period are unfinished, but in the early stage they are very good, and as long as they are successful, they will be high-quality products and thousands of orders will be ordered. As I just said, the upper limit of this kind of book is very obvious. For example, in the early stage, it is very enjoyable to write around the mission and the protagonist, but in the later stage, when there are suddenly more emotional lines and other things other than the mission, the effect will be backlashed. So I say that the author is very clever. He avoids the systematic things in the market. Instead, he uses a light and ordinary way to introduce the system curse mission through sudden changes in daily life, and allows the protagonist to succeed through very unorthodox methods. So, if we talk about the setting alone, I can say that the little unexpected arrangement of this book will make readers continue reading. But if you want to achieve results, these alone are not enough. Everything mentioned above is just a condiment, nothing more. So for the plot part, after I thought it started to be interesting, I carefully read the part I read. In my evaluation of this, innovation must retain its core content, otherwise it is not a revolution, but a borrowed egg. Why did I say that? It is because the author stated in the introduction that this is a more everyday writing style. But once people are curious, they will wonder, delve deeper, and even exaggerate their expectations. This book gave me the feeling that it was too everyday, as if I was not reading a book about urban supernatural beings, but instead felt like I was reading a light novel about a different world love story. But this way of writing does make both the author and the reader comfortable. But once you take condiments as a staple food, they will make you feel bored, so when I read more than a dozen chapters, I thought that if the author just wants to practice writing, he can write whatever he wants, but if he wants to achieve results, he must make changes. We must break out of today's strange cycle of accidents in stories, accidents becoming problems, and the hero unexpectedly solving the problems. My suggestion is to borrow some writing methods and settings from the original routine, and then combine them to take another path. Of course, regarding this illusion, I checked the author page and found that I had opened two pirate fanfics before, so everything can be understood. The writing method of light novels is to focus on daily life and supplement with tasks. The main tasks are used to promote the refinement of the plot and characters. But you only wrote tens of thousands of words in your second book. I don't know why you stopped writing. But I know very well that if a routine is no longer taken seriously, it means that the market no longer recognizes this routine. As an author, you need to carefully understand what the market needs and what you want. So, I like the current plot of this book, but as a reader, what I hope is not a talented person who slowly becomes decadent because he wants to stay in his comfort zone. So, again, reading more, thinking more and writing more is the best way to go. As for the characters in this book, I can only say one thing. The male protagonist and the system are very CP. Should the author give it another thought? And the other characters may be the reason why I didn't see anything and remember the character names. Finally, let me tell you how this book made me feel. You can read novels, but you can also see where the upper limit is. So if the author reads this, you might as well try to make some changes according to your own rhythm and progress. Maybe you can rely on this book to make a turnaround. Of course, you can continue to write at your own pace, but you have to remember that people who stay in their comfort zone will only become lazier and lazier. Finally, if the author likes and is comfortable with today's daily writing, why not try romance writing, which may open new doors for you. Okay, I haven't read too many novels, so I don't dare to comment too much. I'll just briefly write about what I saw. Finally, I wish the author a great success in this book! Let the author become a god in one book.

(It's not a pure negative review, it's just a little bit of your inner thoughts. If you're wrong, you can tell me) Looking at the beginning, I feel very sloppy and a little sloppy, but I can't tell how to write it better. It's probably not because I'm in a sloppy mood. Then let's continue this sloppy talk. Because I was about to leave my job, I vomited all over others and was poisoned by a woman's curse. It looked very sloppy no matter how I looked at it. And then it felt very outrageous that the protagonist chose Lin Qin to apologize. Although the other two choices were also outrageous, Lin Qin was so optimistic about the unlucky one that she even had to apologize after being spit on. Then there is the psychological description behind the protagonist. You cannot let others feed you water, otherwise you will feel embarrassed? You've already done this whole thing of pretending to be dead and you're still afraid of being embarrassed? If it really doesn't work, you can find a caregiver. In this life-or-death situation, the first thing you think about is not how to survive but how to survive without being embarrassed? If something like this really happened, who could care about anything other than life? Although it can be known from the description that this is also a system about curses, although there is not much description, it still feels very sloppy. This is specifically reflected in the fact that the protagonist has no resistance or understanding of this curse system. I have not seen any explanation of the background, not even a sentence (probably, if there is, I missed it) and then it seems too bland. Originally, it was quite good to add the relatively novel setting and content of curse, but you are not very sure about the specific content, which made me feel a little uncomfortable. Maybe it's because there are too few words so there's not enough description, then you have to learn to add and subtract appropriately. Then what follows is a bit verbose, with a feeling of writing content for the sake of content (I feel this way, if I feel wrong, you can tell me your thoughts, I really want to know), but the protagonist's heart is indeed what a normal person thinks, worried and happy, and good and bad are interdependent. And then the protagonist didn't care at all when passers-by thought he was crazy. Anyway, when life and death were at stake before, he was very concerned about losing face? I really don't understand this. Many places where you can experience the changes of the protagonist do not need to be described only mentally. Some actual things can happen, and then use psychological description as a contrast to make it more attractive. Otherwise, if you are just talking about it, I can only watch you fantasize, which is not as accurate as reality. The previous description is enough to show that this is a normal time. Is it really okay to expose one's ability so easily? I feel this is also unreasonable. I hope I can pay attention to it when I write in the future. In comparison, this performance is really beyond ordinary people. I don't know if it has something to do with the type of book the author writes or what. In short, although there are some shortcomings, the writing is still great compared to ordinary books. At least you made me click in and try to write out what was on my mind. I will just delete the ones I don't like directly. Then I hope the author will write better and better! Come on! I'm optimistic about you! I wish you can write down your results as soon as possible!

I accidentally found it when I was bored in the middle of the night. I was attracted by the curse in the name at first sight, because I like to read horror or supernatural novels late at night, but I really have no books to read recently. I just clicked in to see if I can find this fairy grass. After reading one chapter, I realized that this is actually a daily novel. The so-called curse is actually more like a golden finger. Of course, the blame here is that I didn't read the introduction. It was actually mentioned in the introduction. So here, I have to say that the author is still very smart. In recent years, the supernatural novel section has not been so outstanding. There are basically no particularly outstanding novels. Naming it with supernatural content is very likely to attract some readers. If these readers also like daily novels, most of them will have the patience to read them. After talking about the topic, let's talk about the settings briefly. The setting of the curse system is introduced by being scolded: being scolded will turn into a curse, and solving the curse will gain abilities! At the same time, it is set in a modern city, which is basically the template for Shuangwen. Therefore, a major factor that determines the performance of a novel is whether it is enjoyable and whether it is enjoyable enough! But on the other hand, because urban cool articles have been basically "badly written" in the Internet literary world in the past ten years or so, most readers are also tired of the traditional pretentious and slap-in-the-face cool articles.            ，！ In this aspect, I think the author is basically qualified! Instead of completely using the traditional pretense-and-slap-in-the-face plot, it instead adopts a method of finding a way to solve the curse on its own - letting the protagonist battle wits and courage with the curse to gain abilities, and then pretending to be a slap-in-the-face approach, which makes readers feel a different kind of coolness! In addition, the author adopts a relaxed and daily writing style in terms of writing style, highlighting the comedy elements, making readers feel happy and more of the joy in daily life. This can also effectively avoid the problem of not being cool enough or being cliche. After talking about the advantages, let's briefly talk about the shortcomings that I feel are slightly lacking. First of all, the author's writing skills are not very good. As far as I read it, I felt it was too white! The writing has no sense of elegance. Although online writing pursues a fast pace, and most of it is written by beginners, appropriate literary talent can still add a lot of color to the work! I believe that as the author creates, his writing skills will gradually deepen! Secondly, the author's focus is not prominent enough. Although the article is daily writing, daily writing should also focus on it. The feeling that "Curse" gives me is that most of the text is used to describe daily life. On the contrary, the curse in the title rarely appears. Even if it does appear, the curse can be lifted within one or two pages and the ability can be obtained. This is actually a bit too light on the "curse" element. The author can consider using the curse as a starting point to expand the story of the curse outwards, and then add daily life. After all, life is not only dull, but also thrilling, right? After reading the novel, I have a lot of feelings. This is what I can roughly summarize. Or are readers' opinions just opinions? The author can refer to them, but there is no need to give up his own ideas for the sake of readers! Finally, I wish this book will become popular and the author Jun Yue will write better and become a god soon!

The solution is so simple, why does the protagonist have to complicate it? ? ? ? The first one just went there and confessed his love. He had to pretend to have cancer. The second one was not willing to give up even two thousand yuan...

The chapters about the fight in the night market and the lesson about the naughty kid in the park made me sick.

I'm thinking, what would happen if I started by touching the sea water at the beach?

I feel like this book is full of chapters, so please think about whether you want to waste your time reading it.

It's a pretty standard cool article, basically not poisonous. It's just that when you take revenge on the family named Wu, you always feel that it's not handled properly.

If the protagonist of this book has a normal IQ, he will be omniscient and omnipotent in the first chapter. Otherwise, he has a problem with his IQ. This kind of subject is useless.

If you think it's ok, please invest a little bit.

In fact, I feel that some curses do not need to be eliminated immediately, such as evil people. I think it is quite fun, such as scaring that Wu or something, or scaring the snake and dog, and becoming a python/dog training master🐶. To be honest, I really want it.

I quickly flipped through the last ten chapters and couldn't calm down to read them carefully. I felt that every time the protagonist was cursed, it would take effect. It was a bit miserable and I couldn't stand it anymore. Isn't it possible to save a single person's curse if it is lower than the main character's physical fitness limit? Only when multiple people are gathered together at the same time will the curse be effective (like being enemies/you do it) Get the skill of underwater breathing. In addition to catching fish, you can do many things underwater. Isn't it asking you to do archeology? There are a lot of coins in the city's rivers. What about the lost jewelry, stones, minerals, and precious metals? Can't you do it? There is also the skill of All Things Language, which can be used to do a lot, such as Animal Friends Trainer and so on. Good books are hard to find, and the subject matter is okay.

Ada

It's been two days. I haven't seen anyone for two days.

Curse the Assembly Building! You can leave any curses you have and various solutions.