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I originally thought it was a joke, but I didn't expect the author to really
I hate talking. So I ran away
I was surprised when I saw Chapter 11. Let me explain first, I don't play League of Legends, nor have I played Teamfight Tactics. Where do I read game articles? The main reason is that when S8 won the championship, I was influenced by a friend to watch the finals. I thought it was pretty good. Then my friend recommended the Demon King system. After reading it, I thought it was quite interesting. Then I finished reading it without knowing it. Then I looked for 7788 alliance articles to read, but in my heart, there are still few who can compare with the Demon King system (note that it is an alliance article). Having said that, let's get back to the point. There are a lot of problems in this book. First of all, it chooses a character with questionable character as the protagonist (I read one of the books even though I didn't read it 50-50, and it was written well by others.). This is understandable. If it's popular, why not follow it? People will read it only if it's popular, right? The second one is Teamfight Tactics. I really don't understand it. You said it is for people who have never played it, but everyone who reads League articles must at least have a little understanding of League! Right? It's impossible that I don't know anything. I'm going to read your book, right? And it's impossible for anyone who hasn't read the Alliance article to be recommended to read it! (In the era of big data, if you haven't read the system, you will think you are not interested and will not recommend it to you.) Therefore, this is a complete failure. In addition to making readers (players and people who understand the league) feel very baffled, they will feel that you are cheating on the word count. Thirdly, I really can't figure out why there is a gay character in Chapter 11? And the heroine's character is quite bitchy. To be honest, I really feel that urban novels and game novels are the opposite. Every eldest lady in urban novels is stupid and sweet. I just want to know how your family educates you. How can such a person who others may not want to marry in the future be in urban novels. Then, your game article has a bitchy and sinister young lady. Do you think the games in the game article are not enough for the protagonists to seduce each other, or do you think everyone likes this type? Please, the general direction of the game article is the competition (championship) - the protagonist's ability - and then the daily plot. Please think more about how to write the game. Don't always worry about your daily routine. Isn't the league article just about watching the game to win the championship? Look more at other people's popular alliance articles. Don't think that you are alone. To be popular, you don't have to cater to the general trend. Working alone can only be said to be a dead end. It's almost done here. I suggest you change the heroine to someone else or change her personality. When writing a game article, write about your game. It's better for the heroine to be stupid and sweet than to scheming outside in addition to the game. For example, after working all day, you are so tired that you have to go home and quarrel with an old woman. Would you like it instead? On the contrary, what would you do if you came home and there was a woman who handed you water and rubbed your shoulders? Therefore, don't engage in these useless things outside the arena, and cherish them. After all, there are plenty of places for you to scheming in the arena. Finally, I would like to say that the interaction between water friends in the live broadcast is well written. This is an advantage. Then, let's talk about the most important point. No matter how important a game is, don't write more than five chapters. I've only read a fairy tale before and wrote more than ten chapters for one game. Are you going to write out every detail? You countered his wild monster, and he backhandedly stole the river crab? If you pay attention, the score of this book should not be low.
People who pay salaries to the club, I really didn't expect that there would be people who would support Le Ye.
If you don't want to watch it, go away. Please watch it? What's wrong with the protagonist being Le Yan? Is it bothering you? Okay, I'll get out of here first.
Don't be embarrassed in the comment area Our Jialebao is the hope for the future of lpl, and will become the top card of Ipl sooner or later. We are only 18 years old now🤗. It is understandable that we are not playing well. Our Jialebao just has a low emotional intelligence. What kind of stinky fish and shrimp is Baozi? A popular little anchor Forget it, how can it be compared with our Jialebao? It's just that I am young now and my strength has not been fully utilized. Why use bugs to increase points? It's just a child's curiosity😇. After all, he is only 18 years old. Can't you forgive this newly grown child? I advise you not to be ignorant😅
There are actually lol novels that don't have original protagonists? I'm surprised. Will readers feel immersed in it? Is the author a fan of Leyan? If you generate electricity for love... Well... That's understandable...
Uh-huh, I don't like Leyan. . 😅😅
If you don't want to watch it, why don't you go away? I'll go out first out of respect.
And you wrote lye as the protagonist and gave up on yourself
What's wrong with Mr. Xile? If FW doesn't look at it, get out! I'll roll one first.
I can't afford to eat now. Can the author order a takeaway for me?
Is this a book written by humans?
Why are everyone blaming Mr. Le in the comment area? Didn't Mr. Le forgive him for lpl? Why are you still refusing to let him go? You have to force him to forgive Qidian. Com, right?
Can the author order me a takeaway?
No matter how strong a person is, I will not like him as long as he has bad character!
Author, can you order me a takeaway? Can I go to your house to celebrate the New Year?
Can you order me a takeaway Author
Future Warrior Leyan, if he doesn't have a C in the playoffs, he's committing a crime
Although I haven't played the League or watched the game, I have read League novels. I don't know who the Le Ye you are talking about is, but after reading the comments, I found out that the author wrote about this real-life character. TM is disgusting. I don't know if Le Yan in the book is his real name in reality. If so, the disgusting word I mentioned earlier has been realized. Also, it would be even more disgusting if the names of people around Le Ye in reality appeared one after another, and they also insinuated some real people. If I had not had Le Ye as the protagonist and had not come into contact with real people, I would have liked this book. I barely read more than a dozen chapters, but I still couldn't escape the knot in my heart, so I decided to withdraw.
It's not that it's not good to write about Le Yan. Apart from the protagonist, there are 5 other women, one is Zhao Xiyan and the other is Wu Qianyu. I think there will be more system owners to seize the destiny of the author. If you write lol, just write well lol. Doing this kind of thing all day long. I'm speechless, why not get some superpowers and just turn into urban superpowers and be done with it.
I have read a lot of LOL fanfics. Because I don't know much about LOL (Thousands of Humans and Computers), I like to watch the daily life during the game. I was surprised to see this book, and I was a little happy. I hope the author can work hard!
Damn it! Wash Leyan's book
I haven't read the book yet. Is the author Le Yan herself? Otherwise, if you choose this person as the protagonist, you may get a lot of criticism.
Lord!
This book's current evaluation is half-good.
There are still quite a lot of laughs, but perhaps because there is too little writing, the details and scenes are a bit dry. These are problems that require hundreds of thousands of words to be solved. I still have the confidence to write it as a Liangcao+ work. (Ambrosia, grain, hay, and poisonous weeds are generally used to classify online works.)
It feels like you and Saving Xiaohu are the same author😰
Author, have you finished the college entrance examination, or have you failed to find a job in a factory?
This novel depends on the audience's word count
Feeling ill
I have been playing games since I was twelve or thirteen, including League of Legends and Honor of Kings. After playing the game, I read novels. Two of my biggest hobbies. It hurts my cervical vertebrae and eyes, and I usually feel uncomfortable for a week or two. But writing novels caused long-term hidden problems in my cervical spine and eyes to explode. I am also helpless. But your body is important, please take care of yourself first. I don't want to say much else. If I say too much, it's just like explaining. So be it. I write very little every day. If you remember to take a look after a few days, forget it if you don't remember.