Fairies Are Very Fierce

I didn't see the immortal, nor did I see the hero. Xu Buling is a knight. If he wants to expand into new areas, Zuo Lingquan must be a little more fairy. Changing the soup without changing the medicine. I feel that Zuo Lingquan's character design is almost the same as that of Xu Buling. The more he writes, the less interesting he becomes. Give up, give up.

Half of this book is a sex scene or is on the way to developing a sex scene.

How to say it. This book is definitely not as good as the previous one. It was okay in the early stage, but it feels more average the further you look at it. And I feel that the main three heroines have somewhat overlapping designs, and they are more or less tsundere and strong. And the main character is not as attractive as he might have been. It's okay to be a little nervous, but with Sister Tang by my side, it's hard to say that she's a Phoenix who levels up quickly, so the protagonist has nothing else to offer except a sword. I don't want to feel the thrill of having my protagonist's combat prowess explode as soon as he learns martial arts. Now I see some people complaining about the love between children and children, but I feel the opposite, and the writing is not good enough. There is too little communication between the male and female protagonists. The most influential thing is the time when Shangguan's grandma and the protagonist drank at night, which gave me a good feeling. I actually don't care too much about how many female protagonists there are, but I must write clearly about the sublimation of emotions. There are also a few routines that can't be escaped from online novels. I jumped right into reading the setting that the wine girl is a newborn phoenix; the boss in the upper palace kept putting pressure on the protagonist, dragging the protagonist into the palace, and coming out to help the protagonist when something goes wrong. This gave me the feeling that the attitude of the superiors towards the inferiors, or maybe I am a bit extreme, but I really don't like this kind of routine, and I even feel that it is not as good as the plot of Xiao Mouyan saving Yun Mouyun. Actually, what I would rather see is a shameless male protagonist who is proud of being a scumbag, but he is not in conflict with a gentleman who is a master of eye management. In The Prince, I think there is a very good paragraph. When the character of Dabai just collapsed, the Prince said that he was not a gentleman at all. It feels very real, not artificial. Having said so much, I still hope Guan Guan can write better and better.

It's good to watch, I just like the protagonist's recklessness. It is much better than those protagonists who are low-key, hide their clumsiness, and are timid.

Many people have said before that they write martial arts under the guise of cultivating immortals. In fact, they can only be summed up in eight words as "not enough immortality" and "too much chivalry". Many descriptions are too down-to-earth, and the world of cultivating immortals is still written as a river and lake. But it's nice to ignore some things. Although some of the episodes were a bit uncomfortable for me personally. Guan Guan is currently on an obvious rise, come on 👏👏👏

The male protagonist is too cowardly towards the female protagonist. If you want to set up a heroine who can have a strong confrontation, the property of being a strict wife is a bit unsuitable.

It can be seen that the author wants to lean into the world of fairy tales. The writing style is not bad, but the writing style is more like daily writing. There was a rhythm problem in the middle period, which made it a bit boring to watch. The character creation is okay, but when there is a large harem later on, it is a bit too much to take care of. But overall it's good. Writing a book means practicing constantly, and your rhythm control will improve. The score is about 7 points, and the score can be higher among the same type. Come on, I hope the author can write better and better.

When will the new book be released? How long has this been going on? Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this.

Finished spreading flowers ~ 🌹 Although it's a bit sad to leave, let's finish the two lines of poems before and keep them as a souvenir. Qingqing Qing Yi holds a sword and enters the capital, rests outside the phoenix bamboo and embarks on the journey to immortality. The crouching dragon and the young phoenix are accompanied by the clouds, and the peach blossoms are drunk with sword and wine. It is better to be near the water when listening to the orioles singing at night. There is a quiet path in front of the hall in the late spring. Eternal night scares the world, the clouds open and the moon sees a single person. Jiuzhou is misty, green and dark, and thousands of swords reach the sky to determine the world. Invite the beautiful woman back to your hometown with a smile, and don't bear the burden of long life.

I am currently following this book up to date and would like to give a brief review. I recently read this book intermittently for half a month. Overall, the impression is very good. The author's writing style is also very good, and he also depicts relatively plump characters. However, the second half actually disappointed me a little. I feel that the female characters are just for that. How can I put it this way, I feel a bit consumed, just like Qiu Guagua, maybe she is really unconvinced, but some of the previous descriptions can indeed show that her character has grown up. From the fact that she was given an airship at home, but she still feels that she should be more diligent and frugal, it can be seen that she has indeed grown up. But I didn't expect that the plot was arranged a bit quickly. The rescue from the snowy mountain, plus the meeting in the dream, ended in nothing. However, the plot also mentioned the reason for the pillow wind. But it may be because of the male-channeled novels that it has many female protagonists. I can understand it, but there are still some details of the world missing, just like "Dragon King". When I pointed to the map and said the place names and places I had never been to, I was actually quite happy to feel that the world was so big and there were so many things to describe. However, in the later parts, after the war was depicted, it became a ruthless pile driver. I actually also like the daily parts. I have always regarded this article as a daily reading. However, when I saw Senior Mei smiling at the protagonist, I was actually a little disappointed. It seemed that every female character would fall in love with the protagonist without thinking, which was a bit distorted. In my humble opinion, if the author wants to write a next book, he can portray more characters and reduce some characters, which may make it more delicate.

The dark plum is close to the water~ There are also Xiao Lengzhu and Xiao Zuo~ And finally Aunt Yunzhi~ Because these three do not have character sheets, they are put together~ ps: Infringement deleted

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Little Women

Guan Guan has opened a new book. History turns into a fairy tale. Come and read it●‿●

Aunt

I really like these three books written by Guan Guan. I randomly combined the protagonists of the three books and made two poems to encourage myself to be self-disciplined. I hope to live a life like Xu Buling, Zuo Lingquan and Night Jingtang 😌

Jiang Yi

Besides Ji Cha, are there any good harem stories written?

Princess

I feel that this book is a bit cruel to Jiang Yi. Combined with the urban harem novel, the emotional experience along the way is probably that the originally good daughter and heir of a small company had private contact with an employee and developed feelings. Later, it was discovered that the employee was a rare business wizard in a thousand years. Later, the aunt who was not related by blood in the family had an unusual relationship with her boyfriend. At the same time, her boyfriend also had an entanglement with a young and beautiful female colleague in the same office. For the sake of her boyfriend's future, she resigned from a small company and went to work hard in a big company with her boyfriend, aunt and her boyfriend's female colleagues. As a result, as soon as she arrived at the big company, she was attracted by the daughter of the big company, and she became a pretty girl. Later, she became involved with powerful ladies of the big company and other big companies. . . I'm being cheated on all the time. . . A pure and innocent character

The biggest problem with this kind of story that goes straight to the harem is that the plot is for welfare. There is not even a decent boss in the early stage. Especially after the plot of the ancestor of the Iron Mansion is opened, the whole plot is like a pornographic film that skips the exciting parts.

As a novice who teaches himself watercolor, I looked for line drawings on the Internet and came across this one. I got carried away and bought a picture that I couldn't draw at all. Looking at the exquisiteness of this line drawing, I feel like I wouldn't dare to start it even if I study on my own for another year 😅

The male protagonist is really weak. After finally leveling up, he is always faced with opponents who are stronger than him. Every time he is chased and beaten like a dog, or he just watches the boss fight in the background. It is so frustrating to watch.

The harem can be written well, especially Wanwan's writing is really good. Other writings such as training, fighting, and plot are really average. If it weren't for the harem, it would be really boring to watch. Especially the story of the protagonist. Since he came to the new map as an envoy, the various exploration missions of the protagonist are really boring.

It's very crotch-stretching. I mentioned earlier how hard the protagonist worked in order to enter spiritual practice, but in the end, places such as Iron Head Cave and Heaven where he can improve himself feel like he is constipated and wants to go to the toilet and just wants to leave 😰

Is anyone else watching?

This book was indeed a failure in writing. I read some of it in the past two years. Now when I come back and look at the names of the female characters, I really have no impression of any of them. They are not as impressive as the characters in The Prince. Whether it is Xiao Xiang, Xiao Qi, Ning Yu, Qingye Yufu, Cui Xiaowanzhu, Manzhijiujiu, Chuchu, Nightingale, Hongluan Xiaotaohua, and the last princess named Chen, I think she is named Chen Ning'er. I remember them all.

Let me tell you something, this plot is really awkward sometimes

There are too few plots in Yutang. I just fell asleep once and it ended without any plot.