On Actors' Self-Improvement

The author's writing is very good! And there are no pitfalls! Yao Da's books are all excellent! Add bookshelf and other updates

There are very few genuine texts on female channels about cultivating immortality. Those that are so well written and have an air of immortality are rare.

Yes, the writing style is quite good. The switching between reality and ideas, as well as the description of some scenes are very good and wonderful. Let's not mention the story for the moment. There is no problem in terms of writing style and logic. It is rare.

Finally waiting for the author to release a new book! If you don't post it, I plan to watch Zhe Jinchun again 😜

At first glance, it becomes an actor's self-cultivation

I really like your persistence, so I'll say a few more words. First, your writing is the best I have ever read, and it is very immersive. Second, because of this, the scene-like chapters written are particularly attractive and make people unable to help but keep reading, but the transition chapters are relatively less tense. There is no way around this, hahahaha. Third, in terms of content, the detective and fighting scenes and content you wrote, as well as the description of the atmosphere are all amazing and shocking. However, the house fights and political conspiracies are completely embarrassing and collectively demoralizing. So currently my favorite is Zhe Jinchun. It is strongly recommended that you try modern fiction, various contents, and even infinite horror streams. After all, such good writing is really rare. You always have to try it to know which one is more suitable, hahahaha. Of course, please work harder on the emotional scenes. The old aunt will always support you! Finally, you can check out these three authors: Paradise Exile, Domu Mudo, and The Marshmallow Rabbit. Their grasp of all kinds of content is really worth reading. Please don't argue, what you said is correct.

I'm getting more and more confused now. This book suddenly switches back and forth between ancient times and modern times. The story lines are all different, and there is no connection between ancient times and modern times. The only connection seems to be to fight in modern times and travel through ancient times? And it has not yet been explained why the heroine's Qin appears? What exactly is it? The growth of the heroine is not her own growth. It is the things around her and the chords in her mind that drive her growth. The portrayal of the heroine also makes me feel vague. From the psychological description of her in the article, she is idle at one moment and noble at the other. The rhythm also makes me feel divided. The rhythm was so good in ancient times, but in modern times I find it strange. In modern times, there is always not much information in a chapter. I don't know if I'm the only one who thinks so. I know that the author is usually used to crafting his work carefully and slowly laying down the clues. But readers who keep up with updates will be very tired. If two chapters a day still have enough information, then one chapter... It's better to gain weight before coming back.

I like this book because it has a real heroine (ahem, what the hell is real in the fairy tale)? Su Yin is not the heroine of Shuangwen, she is the kind of good and lovable girl we may encounter in our lives. She is beautiful and eye-catching, but not all men love her (the male characters in the book follow or try to follow her, but they actually value her ability and it is beneficial to their goals). He loves his job (likes acting) and is serious (otherwise how could he become a master of the Displacement Sect), but has shortcomings in talent (his acting skills are not good, and even after cultivating an immortal, he is not extremely smart or has a strong memory). She is a bit lazy (that is, she has no plans to be a top-notch person or win a few statuettes, nor does she plan to be a leader in the world of immortality). She points to others to help when trouble comes. She is kind-hearted and afraid of death, but she is also brave enough to take on responsibilities that only she can bear. She loves money but is not ambiguous when it comes to spending money to save people. She loves gossip but is measured... In short, I prefer this one to the heroine who dominates the world.

I saw what the author said about subscribing in the latest chapter, and I wanted to share my thoughts. I personally think that this book is not written poorly by the author, but because the author is willful. After all, looking at the copy, it is a cool article to upgrade the monster-killing style. However, the two time and space jumps, and the heroine Xiaobai passively cultivates immortality. I am I insisted on reading the last Zhenwu Temple to get some ideas, but this kind of nonsensical cultivation of immortality will really lose readers. It is said to be nonsensical because the author probably wants to break through the current Jindan Nascent Soul upgrade routine. There is a new attempt in this book, but the readers do not understand what kind of system this is. In other words, this clue as a growth line is just like a string appearing out of thin air in the heroine. As for the dungeon stuck point, the heroine is a vase, has no acting skills, and has an underdeveloped character, which is really not pleasing to the eye. Finally, I would like to say that as a long-time reader, the first eighty chapters of this book can be sustained because of the author's fluent expressions, no rough and childish chapters, and rich vocabulary. (However, if you write about the gorgeous changes in the sea of ​​knowledge many times, it may be that marijuana and absinthe are not good, and it will become boring after repeated many times.) I hope the author can persist. Sometimes, it may be more beneficial to finish the routine early than to get stuck in one's own ideas.

I am over 40 years old when I read this book. There are too many meaningless descriptions of sorrow in order to write new words. I am too tired to read it. I feel that some wordy words can be streamlined in each chapter.

The early spring in the south of the Yangtze River is still a bit cold, and the wind can bring a chill, making people wrap up their clothes tightly. There are many rivers in the south of the Yangtze River, the most famous of which is the Luosha River. When spring has just arrived, a crew is filming by the river. At five o'clock in the morning, there were not many shops open along the Rakshasa River. Su Yin squatted beside a small pavilion by the river, facing the Rakshasa River that surged from the upstream and flowed all the way downstream. There were some old people doing morning exercises around him doing Tai Chi. Another spring breeze from the south of the Yangtze River blew by. Su Yin gathered up her lifted coat and hugged herself tighter. She squatted on the ground like a potato - the kind that had not yet sprouted. In this hot and cold society, even the cotton coat on my body can no longer bring me any warmth. Su Yin originally thought that the 108 NGs he performed in Suzhou were already his limit. NG's "Liangshan Heroes" has become the highest record for fine theaters. However, what I never expected was that 108 was just the beginning. Potato... When Su Yin thought of the countless "stuck" events yesterday, she opened her mouth and spit out her soul. One hundred and fifty? Two hundred? Or three hundred? Now Su Yin only feels that her mind is full of NG, and no matter how much crayfish she eats, she can't compensate for her psychological shadow. Will I get a 999 Cold Spirit if I keep going like this?       ""       ，，， This is my first time writing about actors and actresses, please don't hit me if I don't write well. In addition, I'm sorry, Empress Su, but when I think of fandom, my first reaction is your NG (థ౪థ) one hundred and eight times.

(/ω＼) Taking the decision without authorization increases the role of a cat. What bad intentions can a kitten have? [The following is the text] ＞539 February 17th, light rain. A black cat was lying on the wall, its tail wagging lazily. The rain soaked its hair, but it showed no unpleasant expression as usual. A cat's paw was raised casually to chase the butterfly that was flying lower and lower, and just fell behind the butterfly, neither close nor far. "Xianweng——" As the last sound of the piano gradually faded, a pair of slender hands slowly pressed on the strings, and the girl sitting in the courtyard calmly adjusted her clothes and put away the piano. The black cat stood up and jumped down lightly. Today is coming to an end again. Let's go to Mr. Li Dashan's place to ask for some dried fish to eat. ＞1 February 17th, cloudy. The thin black cat ran out of an unknown alley in embarrassment, still holding its own trophies in its mouth, a chicken leg that had eaten less than half of it. "Meow!!" The sharp cry of the same kind came from behind. It ran wildly without caring about the situation, turning back to check the enemy's situation while running. On the not-so-spacious streets of Xiaofang County, a carriage came galloping in the distance, with horse hooves trampling and wheels rolling. Two sleek, jujube horses snorted and headed forward. "Bang - bang!" The carriage did not stop, but left in a hurry, raising smoke and dust. The gray chicken leg rolled twice and fell into the claws of the latecomer. The little black cat struggled reluctantly twice and finally stopped here. ＞129 The black cat bit the chicken leg tightly and rushed out of the alley. There were only a few pedestrians on the street, and the sound of horse hooves could be heard approaching. What's going on... I have a very bad premonition... "Meow!" >278 The little black cat walked cautiously to a puddle, and a blurry reflection appeared on the water. The continuous rain wet its hair into strands. It trembled and stretched out its claws to disturb the water. Finally, survived. ＞540 We ate some minced meat at Aunt Wang's place and drank some goat milk at Uncle Liu's place. The satisfied little black cat jumped up on the wall gracefully. The girl in the yard who had been watching it for more than two hundred days took out her piano again. Ever since he heard the ethereal sound of the piano while passing by the yard one day, he was attracted and would come to listen to it every day. Maybe it's because, on the same February 17th, she is the only one who is different. "Meow~" Hello, human girl. After saying hello, the little black cat walked around twice, waiting for the butterfly to fly. The raindrops are falling, the music of the piano is gradually fading, and the apricot blossoms are falling leisurely with the wind. The girl curled her mouth, reached out her hand casually, and caught a petal. The little black cat yawned boredly, and with one paw, he held down the flying butterfly. ＞541 "Meow?" February 18th, the rain stopped.

The writing is delicate. With imaginative ideas about time and space, reality and reality, shadow and existence, this book is more like a science fiction film conceived by a liberal arts student with a romantic fairy tale.

Who is not a little squirrel? When did you become known as a greasy middle-aged squirrel? By the way, it's the one named Su Yin, a very fierce woman. I think back then, who was not a little squirrel with eyes as big as black gemstones? So angry, really angry! I think back to that time, when I was still a young squirrel with light brown and almost yellow color. Anyone who looked at it would exhaust their vocabulary of praise and exclaim: "Damn, you are so evil!" That was the year I met her in the forest, an equally cute little purple squirrel. She had beautiful fur, big bright eyes, fluffy fur, and a big soft tail that I really wanted to touch. Then I touched it, and she told me fiercely that male squirrels should be responsible. If you are responsible, you will be responsible, I said yes. That year, we got married, and from then on I took on the pressure of life. I had to pick double portions of pine nuts. Although I was tired, I was happy, and thirty days later, I was finished. She told me that I was going to be a father, and the number of family members had increased. There were five children in total, red, blue, red, green, and purple. The children were eager to be fed. The sudden encounter shocked me, a young squirrel, and I had to shoulder the burden of life. I am as tired as a dog. Every day I open and close my eyes and I am busy looking for pine nuts in the forest. Later, humans came and said that this area needed to be developed into a Central Park. We were shocked. The bulldozers rumbled and their city management teams forcibly demolished our land. What would happen to our food?          ，， More importantly, our food supply is becoming more and more difficult due to the absence of forests.                    ，， With this, I transformed into a person who sells my appearance to survive. I hang out in various places in the park every day to be cute. Under people's caress, my head, which was already bare of grass, became even bald. Later, something happened in the park, and an evil thing like a spider spirit, which was gathered by evil thoughts, appeared. I found that woman. That woman who calls me a middle-aged rat whenever we meet. Are you polite? To remind you, a human being, I repaid evil with kindness, and she actually called me a middle-aged rat. This is intolerable! Later, in order to save you, although it was useless for me to sacrifice my life, I was saved anyway.                                                  Although you saved me in the end, but even though you are a little expert in raising pets, I have to defeat you!

Everyone feels so far away 🙂

"Zheng——" The sound of distant strings sounded leisurely, and the little squirrel holding the pine cone on the tree suddenly paused for a moment, and then its clever little ears twitched twice quickly, as if to capture this unknown and pleasant sound. It seemed that it had not caught the sound, and its dark little eyes showed some human doubts. Just when the squirrel was about to ignore this strange sound, the empty string sound came again. This time the squirrel was sure that he did not hear the sound with his ears. It seemed that he heard it directly in his mind. The squirrel hesitated for a moment, then decisively put down the pine cone and jumped in the direction of the sound. Its vigorous figure quickly disappeared among the tree crowns. …… "Action!" The sound of playing the board rang out, and the whole place was quiet. The girl in white skirt and green clothes under the peach blossom tree looks like the bright moon, her spirit is like the autumn water, and her clothes are fluttering in the wind. Slender fingers brushed the strings, and there seemed to be a faint sound. Suddenly, her movements stagnated, as if she had been interrupted. After a moment of silence, she sighed softly again. He lowered his eyebrows and straightened his sleeves, stood up, and looked up at the peach blossoms on the tree. After a long time, he finally turned around and looked at the visitor. His faint phoenix eyes were like a cage of smoke, and all emotions were covered up. She brushed her sleeves and said slowly: "It's passed, let it pass." The quiet voice was like the cold moon shining on the top of the mountain. ...... At this time, under the peach tree and above the tiles, a squirrel hurriedly ran up. It had already put its tail under its buttocks, sat like a human, and watched the show for a while. It has been determined that the sound of the piano comes from this human being. The squirrel meditates. Why can't the ears hear the sound, but the head "hears" it? Don't understand, don't understand. The squirrel came to his senses. Suddenly he found that a group of humans on the ground were looking at him, including the one who played the piano before, and they were also looking at him. The squirrel was stunned. [Ahhhh! Found! What should I do, what should I do, I was discovered by humans! Should I run away quickly? ! ] Thoughts are flying in my mind. The straight tail reveals the squirrel's nervous heart. Before he could react, the human playing the piano had quietly walked under the eaves, only a palm away from the tip of the squirrel's tail. She slowly stood up on her tiptoes. The ethereal string sounds sounded in his mind again, and Squirrel suddenly felt that this human being was actually not bad, well, it was just this human being. It likes it very much. It likes the strange sounds she makes. It makes the mouse feel comfortable and wants to get closer. Hmm~ I like it so much... ➖➖➖➖➖➖➖➖➖➖➖➖➖➖➖ [The shells are round, the shells are pointed, and the shells are five-colored. I will give them to you, and I will change them to your servant] [Yi Hu, Xun Hu, your destiny is whatever your servant asks for, whether it is ups and downs or ups and downs]

The plot is very attractive, but can the description of each scene be 1,000 words long? Madam is too wordy. A thousand words for the sea scene, a thousand words for the scene when you wake up, and a thousand words for the character's appearance...

Flowers bloom on the other side, but the bridge is closed. The originally gloomy Yama Hall was lit up with thousands of night pearls. The usually fierce and evil ghosts, big and small, are lined up neatly, and under the leadership of Yama of the Tenth Palace, they are ready to welcome the legendary good man from the tenth life. Grandma Gu walked through the sea of ​​flowers on the other side under Bai Wuchang's guidance in a daze, and saw the grand scene in front of her. The Tenth Palace Chakravartin King held the Qingshen soup in both hands and sprinkled it on Granny Gu's head. Instantly, Granny Gu had nine different memories in her mind. There is a breath in the dantian that changes from weak to strong, until the breath solidifies into a pill and then turns into a baby. The baby flew out of her sea of ​​consciousness and circled around the hall for a week, then returned to her sea of ​​consciousness and became quiet. Although Grandma Gu's appearance has not changed at this time, her aura is completely different. The Ten Palaces of Hell and the big and small ghosts quickly bowed down and worshiped, and they all thought to themselves that they were really good people who were rare to meet in ten lifetimes. They had just recovered the memories of ten lifetimes and were already in the realm of earthly immortals. If they had to practice for another ten thousand years, Da Luo Jinxian would definitely have a place. Thinking of this, the bodies of these admirers seemed to sink lower. At this time, Granny Gu was faced with the biggest choice in her life. The memories of her ten lives were clearly visible, some were refreshing, some were gentle, some were helping others, some were sacrificing for others... Each period of life was like a road with no end in sight before her. She realized that if she wanted to take a step closer in cultivation, she would have to find out which period of life was most suitable for her, or in other words, she would have to understand what kind of person she wanted to be. So Grandma Gu bowed her head to the person who paid homage to her and left across time and space.

The writing level is very good! It's just so tiring to watch! No way to attract me! I've read Chapter 14 and I'm still not interested!

I received a call from Officer Han from Liao County, telling me that the suspect who abducted my father might be found. When I first heard the news, my eyes couldn't help but turn red. For nearly twenty years, there has been no trace of my father. I never believed that he would leave home without reason. Although after the flash flood accident, his intelligence dropped to that of a three-year-old child, his love for his family never changed. I firmly believe that something must have happened to cause him to be abducted by evil people. During the time when my father disappeared, I convinced Officer Han to let me be an undercover agent investigating the human trafficking group, hoping to find some clues about my father's disappearance. When I was seriously injured in an operation and was about to die, I dreamed about my father. He told me, "Ah Chen, stop looking for me and live your life well!" After recovering from my injury, I said goodbye to Officer Han and asked him to inform me if there is any progress in the case in the future. I have returned to the entertainment industry. This time I am not a singer under the lights on the stage, but a manager who works behind the artists and takes care of everything for them. I have my own life, but I still don't have a home...

The battle for the body has finally begun, looking forward to it☺️

It's getting more and more interesting. The ending needs to be written well, it's a test of your skills! Come on, author💪!

Su Yin in the main world is a weakling, while Su Yin in the shadow world is similar to a god. This setting is a bit inconsistent.

Refreshing! This is my review of this book as an old bookworm. The writing is beautiful, and the sceneries are particularly excellent. I was in awe. The author's magnificent imagination is breathtaking. When writing about ancient times, the writing is elegant and concise, the thoughts are deep, and the story is highly interesting. Satisfy. Great article!

It was so tiring to watch. There were too many psychological descriptions and too many descriptions. It made my head hurt and I couldn't figure out the plot logic.

"I finally completed this difficult task. I hope the reward is worthy of my hard work." "I don't know what kind of reward I will be rewarded with? The nine-turn elixir of human flesh and bones? Or a long-cherished medical skill?" This is a ball of light appearing in front of Su Yin. This type of reward is very rare. Su Yin put his hand into the light ball with expectation. When he clenched his hand, he felt that it should be a pill. After getting it in my hands, I carefully studied the efficacy of the pills and was speechless. It turns out that this is an elixir of extremely high quality. This elixir is called "Yin Yang Reversal of Nine Nine Pills". The name sounds like it is an elixir that can save people's lives. In fact, it is an elixir that allows people to change gender 99 times according to their own thoughts. Su Yin fell into deep thought. This elixir looks very powerful, but it feels like it is of no use! I wonder what I can do with such an inexplicable elixir? Do you want me to become a man and treat some male patients? But I don't know how to treat diseases that involve unspeakable diseases, and I don't want to cure them! 😡 Or do you want me to become a male to increase the reliability of my medical skills? Hmph! With my superb medical skills, it's not their turn to be picky. I don't want to treat people who don't trust me! To this kind of person, I just want to send a set of Bian Que's three consecutive words, "It's hopeless! Wait for death! Farewell!" If the blind villain wants to offend me, let them try to shake Shoushou's thigh! 🥱 Forget it, it's going to be exhausting to complete the task, go catch up on some sleep first, and think about this strange elixir later! The elixir should have no shelf life! Probably... To be continued....

Jade Xu who has lost contact   The mountain is not high, but there are immortals and spirits. There is a person in the Jiuxiao Sect who is the number one prodigy in Tianfeng Continent. He became famous at a young age and became the Golden Elixir Perfection at the age of thirty-five. Three years later, he was promoted to Nascent Soul. As usual, Yuxu said to the leader, "I'm going to buy two oranges" and left Jiuxiao Sect. Everyone knows that Yuxu likes to have fun and loves beautiful people. Tianfeng Continent, Fengye. That year, Master Yuxu came to the southern tip of the mainland, a famous massage city. Just after getting off the plane, we lost contact with him. This is a true portrayal of the hearts of the people of Jiuxiao Sect. In that year, Yuxu, who had lost contact, met a charming girl in an alley. She was like a blooming lily. In an unfamiliar area, it is raining lightly in the sky and the wind is biting. The lights at night illuminate the lily in a very lovely way. It is a peerless and holy beauty, holding a handful of flowers, with a graceful figure, a slender and tall figure, showing her beautiful figure against the backdrop of a white dress, like a fairy in the dust. Yu Xu felt extremely distressed when she saw it. In the southern night, it was misty and rainy. The fairy stood there with her bare smooth and white calves, trembling slightly in the cold wind, as if she was waiting for someone. At this moment, the fairy looked this way, her eyes faced each other, the corners of her mouth under the flower umbrella opened slightly, and then she smiled sweetly. Both parties are sure that the other person is the person they are looking for (waiting for). (Click to view the remaining content)

After reading the free chapters, there are only a few chapters about the entertainment industry. The ones on Xiuzhen are messy and not very attractive. It may not be suitable for those who want to read entertainment industry articles.

Happy National Day! It's the last quarter. Will you publish new books this year? 😁

It feels like 800,000 words out of over a million words describe psychological activities and the environment. I don't know if I should buy it.