Zhe Jinchun

First of all, the writing style is very good. The author seems to be very good at describing the psychological demeanor and atmosphere of the characters, and brings the intangible things to life! It's just that sometimes this type of text is interspersed too much. For example, a meeting and conversation between the male and female protagonists can last for several chapters, and there is no real content, which makes it a bit depressing! Coupled with the textual expressions that are close to the ancient styles of the Wei and Jin Dynasties, it increases the difficulty of reading this book! Fortunately, the plot (plot) is very exciting and interlocking, which makes up for the inconvenience caused by "ancient sayings" to a certain extent! Even though there are a lot of flaws, just to follow the plot is enough to make people tolerate it! Therefore, as far as the Machiavellian plot is concerned, it is really a very good article, and there are very few mistakes in the details and logic! It can be seen that Yao Da writes very carefully! Secondly, the characterizations are very distinctive. In addition to the smart and versatile reborn heroine (character) and the male protagonist (tool man) who fulfills all the fantasies of women, well, the ones that win my heart the most are Xue Da, known as the "Iron Rooster" and "Iron Man", and Xue Er, who loves money and is stingy but is the only remaining "scholar". Especially the two brothers' joyful and warm way of getting along with each other! I praise it well, but I can't help but complain about the dissatisfaction: 1. In order to fully demonstrate the heroine's intelligence and talents in saving the Qin family, the author arranged a one-man show for the heroine - she worked hard throughout the whole process and battled wits and courage with the forces behind the scenes, so that everyone in the Qin family knew nothing and enjoyed the success! Even when he had no time to take care of himself, he still had to wipe the butts of brothers and tribesmen who had no sense of crisis again and again! Such a way of doing things is not in line with the heroine's intelligent, decisive and self-proclaimed cold character, nor does she look like a truly smart superior! A qualified leader should think about how to draw on others' strengths and how to manage others. If he does everything himself, he will inevitably achieve twice the result with half the effort! Take the Qin family as an example. Realistically speaking, what could be faster and easier than committing suicide? Take Qin Erlang, for example, who obeyed filial piety and violated the rules, kept secret albums, slept in the same room with female spies, etc. Because he had no sense of crisis, he made stupid mistakes again and again and was easily killed! If there were more of these brothers and clansmen, would the heroine be able to be saved? Even if we need to save ourselves, what is more direct and effective than self-rescue? Therefore, I personally think that it is necessary to give the Qin family a hard wake-up call at the right time to make them aware of internal and external troubles and that they must either unite to save themselves or they should be exterminated! If it doesn't work, at least let the people in power be vigilant and take care of the house. Even if it means cleaning up the house, it's better than the heroine having to bear everything on her own! It is not advisable to be a lone hero! Of course, it was only at the end that I realized that the Qin family was already riddled with holes! It is not difficult to understand the reason why the author made such an arrangement, but from the perspective of the heroine, she obviously did not realize how deep the water behind the Qin family was for the time being. The story should follow the thinking of a normal superior (a generation of demon concubine)! Instead of relying on the author's mother's perspective of God to avoid pitfalls! As for alerting the snake, I believe that with the heroine's ability (aura) as a "demon concubine", the author can definitely avoid it as long as she doesn't want to! 2. The first point above was originally thought to be an unreasonable plot arrangement. However, when the heroine faced a similar situation again - the Li concubine incident, but continued to be a "hero", it was really a bit incompetent! Knowing that Li's concubine has been targeted, her identity was almost revealed or used to set up Xue's family over and over again. The heroine was obviously tired of dealing with it, but she still kindly concealed Xue's secret! Is it necessary? In other words, would it be better for Mr. Xue Dalang to know privately? Although he was embarrassed for a moment, he obviously wouldn't take it too seriously due to his temperament. On the one hand, he could cope with it better and avoid being plotted; on the other hand, it concerns the Xue Jiang clan. As long as they are not forced to quarrel, maybe some things can be resolved privately through interest exchange! In this way, is it no better than the heroine, an outsider, who obviously does not have the ability to completely solve the problem, but prefers to take over everything? ! If Concubine Li hadn't ended up dead, similar schemes would have been endless, and one day they wouldn't be able to hide it, right? If she hadn't happened to meet Huan Da and Li concubine had set up a trap by killing her, the heroine would have fallen into it herself! Although I can understand her good intentions, I really can't accept the heroine's "one person carries everything" way of doing things! 3. The handling of the emotional line is not inferior to the plot line! First of all, the male protagonist is emotionally gentle and has no personality, which is quite boring, and the relationship comes too quickly and easily, which makes him seem cheap and unappealing! He is obviously a male god, but it is not difficult to conquer him! For the female protagonist, the male protagonist is simply a "golden finger" that comes to her door - he knows a lot but is not threatening, and he doesn't even know what he can get, so he comes to her door and declares that "helping you is helping myself"! This is no different from getting what you want! Secondly, it is not very solemn to write about the relationship between the male and female protagonists who have not known each other for a long time (a bit too feminine) - the male is flirtatious when he takes the initiative, and the female protagonist pokes her breasts and touches her waist from time to time! You must know that the background of the story is in the ancient times when the romance of the Wei and Jin Dynasties was respected, the gentry class and the etiquette between men and women were very strict. The behavior of the heroine repeatedly poking the hero's chest and back is really too frivolous! Even in modern times, facing a male client who has only been working with her for a few months, which woman would dare to poke a male's chest so boldly? ! Not to mention ancient times! Of course there are exceptions, that is - both men and women are ambiguous and tacitly aware of it! Well, the novel does not have to be too serious. This interpretation is not blasphemy, it is purely a complaint~ In general, this book is still worth reading among Machiavellian works!

Finally finished reading. I'm afraid the author's original intention was more complicated than what was designed in the book, right? Judging from how complicated the plot is in the beginning and how deep the pit is, the ending is indeed a bit weird 😁. Reading Yao Da's book, I admire Yao Da's literary talent. Reading the article is like reading poetry, and the description of the scenery is meticulous and beautiful. I copied a lot 🤭 without permission. Thank you! 🙏🙏🙏

The writing is indeed good, but I wonder if the writing is so good that I can't help but show off my skills. There are large paragraphs of descriptions of the appearance, aura, and emotions of all the beauties in the main and supporting roles. One or two sentences are key, one or two paragraphs are bloated, and one or two chapters are just pretentious text. The biggest difference between accomplished writers lies in their self-control. One more sentence will make them confused, while one less sentence will make them divine.

I have read no less than 50 works at Qidian. There are only two authors whose books are worth reading a second time, and this book is the third one worth reading twice, even though I haven't finished the first time yet. Telling the same story, using the same cliche plot, but the author will find a different angle to cut it in, and the writing style is also very attractive. The words used are common and easy to understand, but when put together they feel gorgeous. Give the author a like and I will continue to follow your works. Come on! Happy New Year! 🌹

I've read more than 800 chapters! The author wanted to set up a suspenseful and brain-burning plot, but the clues were scattered here and there! The book always uses vague language such as that person, that thing, a name, etc. To express it, and also likes to leave the tail behind without explaining it clearly at once. It makes people confused and confused! It's better to make it clear directly!

After seeing 12%, I still like the heroine very much... I like the writing style of the author Wei Jin, the writing is smooth, the plot is also very compact, and it is neither superficial nor a novice... I read it quickly and did not see any obvious flaws...

The writing is excellent, but after being fed piles and piles of dog food, I really wanted to give up. In fact, I don't mind eating some dog food, but I really can't stand the wise and powerful heroine who can't control how much mentally retarded dog food she can remember when she sees the male protagonist... I can't eat this dog food, I can't eat it 😭 I am still suitable to watch movies without male protagonists 🙂

There are too many adjectives used, and for a long time I couldn't see the actual things. They were all overly flowery words. It was tiring to read. The story was good but too tiring.

It's very good-looking. Although the progress in the middle is a little slow and the ending is a little fast... It's still a good book...

I really like this book. I read reviews before and said it has too much nonsense, the plot is too slow, the male protagonist is too useless, and the ending is too hasty. Anyway, there are a lot of negatives. After reading it, I think it's pretty good. The author's writing style is very good, and it's very romantic in the Wei and Jin Dynasties. It's quite interesting. The structure of the story is a bit big, so it feels like the ending is rushed. I think it's mainly because it's not. There is a side story, so there is always a feeling of unfinished business. The male protagonist is very strong and does not interact much with the female protagonist, but he is really a strong support for the female protagonist. In the beginning of the house fight, there is actually no way. The starting point of the heroine is too low, and there is too little for her to borrow. It is not easy to survive in the house fight. Later, the heroine takes the opportunity to get involved with the Xue family, and there are After finding the male protagonist, he tore the cover of the Qin family and directly planned the identity of the princess. When he had the identity of the princess, with the male protagonist's manpower, the help of the Xue family, and the foreshadowing laid in the early stage, he slowly began to search for the truth of the past life and solve the dilemma. The appearance of the Huan family's eldest son, that is, he defeated ten guilds with one force and directly crushed him with his strength. In fact, the author It has also been explained in the article that the predicament the heroine faces at the beginning is very difficult. As a woman, it is too difficult to act. Look at Huan Dalang, who is also reborn. How can he think about using tricks or making small moves? He uses big moves as soon as he makes a move. He wants money and people. If the villain makes trouble, he will be killed directly. He wants to control the country, and the emperor must listen to him. I think this ending is very good. The heroine is smart because she didn't want to be the empress. She is also a little funny. Otherwise, she is just a puppet. She likes Xue Er very much. The heroine borrowed power from Xue Er at the beginning and dealt with Xue Er a lot. In fact, Xue Er underestimated the heroine. He always thought that the woman was behind him. If he had the respect of Li Jiu for the heroine , or attach importance to it, thinking that they are in love, thinking of marrying instead of accepting, I think maybe the male protagonist should be changed in this book, but Xue Er's performance is also very reasonable. The second son of a big family, talented and handsome, accepting you, a daughter of a small family, is already very face-saving. This is the clan education he received, and he also likes Du Si. He is indeed a ruthless person.

The first part was good, but the second part became a bit unbearable when I became a princess. The male protagonist only appeared once in Chapter 650. If you want to watch the male and female protagonists play opposite each other, you should take a detour. The male protagonist in this book has no sense of presence.

I know the author struggled to write and needed to find a lot of relevant knowledge. So it's really good. Overall, the pace of this book is well controlled. A few words can make people feel immersed in it, and their emotions can't help but follow the emotional lines in the book. In my opinion, this book can already be regarded as a god. The author has a profound literary background. Unfortunately, many readers prefer mindless writing. The quality of this book is high and cannot be measured by the standards of online writing. 😏😏

To be honest, the author's writing is good and the plot is good. This rebirth novel is a classic (the first half). It's a pity that the author himself said later that he was anxious. Want to end it quickly. So anticlimactic. I guess I originally wanted to write about the collision between two rebirths, but it failed. It is recommended to buy half a book. Once you see the heroine become a princess, you can stop. If the quality declines too quickly later, it will affect the impression of the work.

I'm tired of reading it. It's over a hundred chapters and I'm still writing ink in the house. The supporting characters take up too much space. It's understandable that I want to write a big picture, and it's understandable that I want to show my writing skills. But understanding does not mean agreement. Abandoned

After seeing 364, I really wanted to see the author write a plot with great care, but I still couldn't stand it. The female protagonist is a bit too weak, naive and takes things for granted, and the male protagonist's feelings come out of nowhere, and the inexplicable feeding of sugar is just crazy. I keep hypnotizing myself that this is a female video and this is a romance, but I still feel that this relationship is too embarrassing. The admiration of the little person comes out of nowhere, and there are too many side effects that are too cumbersome. The original intention is very good. Let's wait and see again.

Ah, I'm so confused, can I do so many things just for a posthumous edict? A posthumous edict is only useful for one or two months or even one or two years after taking the throne. After five or ten years, when the emperor is firmly in power, what threat does this thing have? Zhu Di blatantly conspired to rebel, but he hadn't caught Emperor Jianwen yet. How many years had it passed before he was still in a stable position? Would it be useful if someone suddenly appeared and claimed to be a descendant of Emperor Jianwen? Who in the world knows whether you are real or fake? In ancient times, DNA could not be tested! It's impossible for anyone to support it? What threat is there to a prince and grandson who did not grow up in the palace and under the eyes of everyone? Prince Jing has to report to the emperor even when he leaves the house, so why don't you just rush into the house and kill them? Wasn't Li Shimin the one who killed his brother and forced his father during the Xuanwu Sect incident? Not a virtuous king praised throughout the ages? Why couldn't the late emperor even handle Prince Jing? You've been the emperor for decades, you're so incompetent!

The interaction between the male and female protagonists is so greasy, so greasy. I really like the female protagonist. Can I change the male protagonist? 😭

This is a novel that should be published on the main website. It has a large layout, a broad vision, and is mainly complex and strategic. Romance novels are really buried here.

I finished reading it a week ago. I really like this kind of brain-burning intellectual battle. I feel like the situation has become more cheerful after becoming a princess in the fourth volume, and the heroine is not so aggrieved hahh. I really look forward to the physical book! Looking forward to the extra episode (⁎⁍̴̛ᴗ⁍̴̛⁎)

It seems that Susu no longer needs Zhuge Kongming, 🤭🤭

It is tasteless to eat and a pity to throw away.

It's a bit boring. Each chapter is about what happened in the previous life and how it will be solved in this life. It's so long-winded that I can't stand it anymore.

Very artificial writing style, especially when describing appearance

My two favorite books in the Women's Brain Burning Series are currently "Zhe Jinchun" by Dada and "Mo Sang" by Xian Ting Luo Hua Dada. They are full of connotations. Only these two books are still on the bookshelf, the others have gone back to their respective homes.

Most of the other novels have the heroine's most liked one, but this novel's heroine is not even in the top three... The more I read about it, the more I understand that this character is sometimes liked and sometimes hated, and I personally don't want to like it 😅

There are very few articles in Qidian that I have listened to and reread over and over again, and this book "Zhe Jinchun" by Yao Da is one that I have listened to and reread again. Don't say much, support with action, come on Yao Da!

There are a lot of foreshadowings and hidden clues, but they all come together in the end. The author writes it very well! Recommend! Brain-burning article, very good, very good!

I just like reading novels that inadvertently lay down clues that will be used later! It's reasonable and self-justifying.

The author's writing is good, like the advancement of a TV series; the chapter comments are more exciting, explaining, detailing, agreeing, and refuting, each has been read

I've read 40% of it... I think it's very interesting, but the progress is a bit slow... But I really like the stories with lots of conspiracies and no-nonsense... But I'm always a little confused when I read it... The writing style is that of the Wei and Jin Dynasties, and there is always a background of multinational hegemony, and the articles always mention the great gentry, so there will be a feeling that the gentry is powerful and the imperial power is declining... But in fact, through the text As for the description in the chapter, the imperial power is superior to the nobles and can decide the power of life and death... Generally, when the imperial power is superior to the nobles, it is a situation of great unification, not a situation of multinational hegemony... Although this article is fictitious, when I read it, I felt that the background was not particularly harmonious, especially since there is also the Li family of the Tang Dynasty in the article. Although it is fictitious, it also has a sense of substitution...