I'm Signing in in the Wasteland

First time writing a book review. It took me a few days to read it. Overall, this book is very suitable for me. Let's talk about the advantages of this book first: •This book is logically very good, and basically there will be no inconsistencies. In this regard, it is better than most books •The protagonist is wise, rarely reckless, and can analyze the advantages and disadvantages. It's time to kill, it's time to save. Similarly, the supporting characters and opponents have high IQs, and some are even higher than the protagonists. Therefore, basically there will be no intelligence drop •The plot and characters are not static, or you can guess the ending after seeing the beginning. There are often reversals, and they are not abrupt, which is very attractive •The subject matter, the design of the world view is very attractive. Moreover, the worldview will keep changing as the protagonist explores Then there are Disadvantages: To be honest, this book does not have any big shortcomings. It is not so much a shortcoming as the reason why few people read it •It is not enjoyable enough. Note, it means not feeling happy enough, not feeling unhappy. Most of the protagonist's enemies are evenly matched, and there are very few instant kills. They basically win through the protagonist's wisdom. In addition, the logic of this book is good, so some of the no-brainer fun points will be sacrificed. But luckily I won't say I'm feeling aggrieved •The protagonist is very real. A protagonist who is wise but still has the original world view, so he still makes mistakes. That's why he pursued the heroine and was plotted by a wily man. Poisonous? Not poisonous. It's just that everyone prefers to see a perfect protagonist. (ps: I don't think it's licking when pursuing the heroine. When he knew that the heroine was engaged, the male protagonist almost gave up. This is very consistent with the situation of a single mother and a dog in the real world. By the way, I am a single mother who has been liked by more than 20 girls, so I think what I say is still convincing) •The first one is a bit slow. In the early days, he was farming, but after he came out, he was controlled by others, and he also had a sad pursuit of girls. The book only starts to feel good after the protagonist begins to rise. Most of the people were discouraged here. Butthere will be more cool moments after that, but the first cool moment was too slow Then why did I persist? Because I really can't stand short fiction, this book has good logic, and the theme and plot are very suitable for me. And I saw the heroine tag and knew there would be a good result •The title and cover of the book were inappropriate. Since this book is not a novice novel, don't give it the title of a novice novel. I never even glanced at this book in the past, but this time I was really short of books, so I randomly added a bunch of books, otherwise I wouldn't have found such a good book. The cover also feels so-so Finally, I looked at the author's previous books and found that none of them had a particularly large number of words. Let's take a look at the subscription status of this book. For such a good book, I am really afraid that the author will give up the book, so I came here to fully subscribe for the first time and post a book review for the first time To be honest, if you force a person who reads books for free into this, author, you win! 🔪🔪🔪

Not recommended. The protagonist's IQ is zero when he sees a woman. It's like he's never seen a woman before. Also, both humans and ghosts are showing off, and only the protagonist is being beaten. Anyway, it's really frustrating. The protagonist is always being plotted against. I can't stand it anymore. Bye.

Please don't drive randomly in this chapter. This book is still very serious. What if I invite the River Crab Master... I still want to make some money writing code.

If you want to cheat, you have to limit your strength, and you often encounter things in your life that are not under your control. It all depends on the other person's character and luck. How can you put it in this unreasonable way of writing? If your subject matter were not relatively new, I wouldn't be able to write it now. But this book has not even been added to my bookshelf, so I will abandon it.

If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, don't write them. What the hell are you writing? I saw that the sister made the main character depressed and made me vomit. Is the author also an old single who has never been in a relationship?

It's so frustrating. I feel like it's hard to put it bluntly. It feels like everyone is plotting against the protagonist. It feels like the protagonist is said to be favored in marriage and allowed to be plotted by others.

I've been licking the dog for a long time. The author is imaginative and the writing is good. The heroine didn't say much about her position. She only had a few lines. She's licked the gold and silver. She just saw the magic formation and came back from cultivating immortals. It's poisonous, very poisonous.

I specially subscribed to a chapter to review. The author licked a dog and a pig's trotters on his knees and licked a woman whom he had only known for a few days. It's as if you haven't seen a woman for hundreds of years. It's really disgusting. You, a time traveler, are you afraid that you won't have a woman? ? ? ? The subject matter of this book is pretty good, that is, a pig's feet kneeling down and licking a woman. So I am determined to finish it. The author is always a licking dog. Even if you delete the book review, I will still say this. (You can only comment after turning on the fan value)

No. 1Xu Qing Cultivation: Golden Core Realm. Identity: Master of Yuling Sect. Combat power: Judging from the setting, it should all depend on the three major beasts, at least the combat power of the Yuanying in the leapfrog battle. Techniques: The mythical beast Yanxiang, the mythical beast Baiying (I always feel that this name will have an affair with No. 1, So exciting (●—●)), the mythical beast Gonggong. Life: Leading the three mythical beasts to fight against the invasion of monsters. Failed to save the world. Death. Enlightenment: Do not use magic crystals to practice. No. 98254Li Yaowu Cultivation: Body Tempering Realm (one small shrimp). Identity: Master of the Sand Washing Department. Combat strength: Body Tempering Realm. Techniques: Shenwu Tulu, plant planting technology, 300 Tang Poems (it's a pity that this book didn't become popular, otherwise I would have thought that 300 Tang Poems could become a meme). Life: Literary youth, loves poetry and books, and is good at growing flowers. Nai He was born in troubled times, and he didn't know that he couldn't practice with magic crystals, so he stagnated his cultivation in order to survive. My lover Mu Xiu was seduced by the divine witch Wu Kui. Mu Xiu led the Shenwu Guards into the Shenwu clan, but was wiped out by the great witch with one move. 98254 Was angry but only managed to draw with the great witch. In the end, he surrendered to the tribe and died of frustration. Enlightenment: Strike first against the enemy. Literary youth is a disease that needs to be cured. No. 98281Zheng Laozu The real name is unknown, a time traveler who developed after Li Yaowu. Cultivation: None Identity: Founder of Zheng's Blacksmith Shop (Professor of Physics). Combat power: 13 tons equivalent of TNT Skills: All courses in physics, smelting, magic crystal energy analysis, magic crystal bomb. Life: Research scholar, knowing clearly that Li Yaowu, a Blue Star man, was plotted to death by the Great God Witch, still stayed in Shenwu Town. On the surface, he established the Zheng family's blacksmith shop to build armor for the Shenwu family. Secretly, he used the environment of Shenwu Town to build a physics laboratory to analyze magic crystals. Digitalize the magic crystal energy to create magic crystal bombs, magic crystal lighting, magic crystal motors, etc. Enlightenment: Don't click on the wrong skill tree. (To be continued...)

The emotional scenes in this book feel very toxic. When I first read a few chapters, I thought it was pretty good. But since the appearance of a woman, I feel that the protagonist's feelings for girls are a bit too different. You can also see some chapters in the book. Except for the emotional scenes, this book is really good. To be honest, the introduction accounts for a large part of the motivation to keep reading, as well as the development of the plot. If I really can't write it at the end, I will write the outline (I feel that the results are not very good)

Salt Cave Tribe Strength: ☆☆ Specialty: Salt Mine. Armed: Hunters, about 20-30 in number. Hidden weapons: two adult two-horned devil lizards, one young two-horned devil lizard (lost), and one egg. Population: around 900. Residential characteristics: In cave dwellings. Tribal settlement: hilly areas. Introduction: Where the protagonist is. Lishu tribe Strength: ☆☆☆ Specialties: cassava and muli tree. Hidden specialties: herbs, flowers (doubtful), and three hundred Tang poems. Armed: Hunters, number about 200-300. Hidden weapon: Shenwuwei (doubtful). Population: According to the force value, it is about 3,000. Residence Features: Tree House. Tribe station: In the Muli forest, the spider web suspension bridge. Introduction: Host No. 98254, Li Yaowu, was once a powerful sand-washing tribe with hundreds of divine warriors. After being defeated by the Shenwu clan, it became a subordinate. The leader Mu Xiu knew that revenge was impossible, so he designed the protagonist to agree to take revenge on his behalf. Small colorful flags are fluttering. Rock Elephant Tribe Strength: ☆ Specialty: Elephant Rock. Armed: Hunters, about 20 in number. Population: 1000-2000. Residential features: Mines and caves. Tribal settlement: the place where the mythical beast Rock Elephant fell, the Chaos Mine. Introduction: Descendants of the mythical beast Rock Elephant. After the extinction of the rock elephant, the tribe was raised in a whale-falling manner for thousands of years. His strength is low and he makes a living by digging elephant rocks. (I don't know if there are hidden attributes such as bloodline. To be updated.) The red flag is flying. Forged Steel Tribe Strength: ☆☆☆☆ Specialties: Weapons, pottery. Armed: Flying Spear Hunters, about 200 in number. Population: 2000-3000. Residence Features: Sloping Rift Valley. Tribe Station: Underground, above the lava layer. Introduction: A gathering place for big iron players. Black people are even darker. Flying spear hunting is unparalleled. But it's not extraordinary. Steal women and territory with the protagonist. The consequences can be imagined. Hematite Tribe Strength: ☆☆ Specialty: Iron Ore. Armed: Hunter, number about 20. Population: 1,000. Residential features: Mine. Tribal location: Iron Mine Introduction: Due to the relationship between supply and demand, it has become a subsidiary force of the Forging Steel Department. The Divine Witch Clan Strength: ★ (To be continued...)

It started well and attracted me right away. After the 15th chapter, it felt like a romance novel.

You can imagine the conversation: Q: What the hell do you use to make paper in a world full of acid rain? Answer: I can just make paper! Question: How can you make paper in a world full of dust? Answer: I just make paper!

The author writes very well, just write according to your own ideas. As for those who talk about licking, they are probably persecutory delusions.

The second-hand system has experienced more than 90,000 hosts. It seems that the author slapped himself in the face with second hand.

First of all, let me explain that I didn't know there was such a book until I pushed the book. Today I come here to encourage the author. No matter which industry you are in, circles and connections are a powerful medicine. Managing them well will bring you closer to success. Don't blindly code words, and the wine will be fragrant and the alley will be dark. Come on

I reached Chapter 151 of my free prostitution, and when I saw the author's remarks, I came here to talk about it. First of all, it is definitely a work on a high level. If it were not for the lack of fan base, the results would definitely be better. But there are also some problems. (Personal opinion) The first is the sense of rhythm, I mean the mobilization of the reader's attention. It gets better after chapter seventy. There was a problem before Chapter 70, a big problem. When reading these words, it is easy to lose my attention on the content you describe, which is very strange. The second is the setting. The characters and the plot are not stupid, but they are not likable. As for the Goldfinger part, I quite like it, but the world view is in conflict. The third one is no sense of expectation, although this is not necessary. Finally, I hope you will get better and better as you write, come on!

The writing is okay, barely enough for food 😁

It was free of charge before, but as long as you keep writing, I will order them all The author needs some help

It seems like it's not the right time If the author resumes updating, just kick me and I won't read anymore.

It's September. If the author is planning to do it, please send me the outline.

Hey... Why are there no more updates? I originally planned to keep it for a while, but maybe it's dead ()

It's obviously not in the update but it appears in my guide

I feel okay but my results are not ideal. I can understand even if I have had the surgery.