From Programmer to Formation Master

Write a long book review so new readers can read it and decide whether to pursue the book or not. I have been following this book since I started it. From this book, I can see that the author is really a newcomer, not just a high-profile person. Let's talk about the subject matter first. This book has no system and can be regarded as a very traditional online text. The golden finger is the author's transformation of procedural thinking into formation thinking in the world of cultivation. If you like old Internet novels such as Coiling Dragon and Po Yi Nian, you can try Poison. The setting is really awesome, not that it's novel, but the author's formation setting. The strength of the formation depends on the strength of the real energy of the person setting it up, not the realm of cultivation, so that the strength displayed by the protagonist through the formation is almost as good as that of a senior sister who is two realms higher, but it doesn't seem abrupt, and there is no trace of forced pretense. . . As for the plot, the introduction says that it is the story of the senior brother looking for his master, which seems to be the main plot at the moment. But at the beginning, the plot was relatively scattered, and it was basically only after Chapter 30 that the plot started to become rounded. The personalities of various characters have also been established, and if you read from the beginning, it is not difficult to see that the author is really growing and improving along the way. This is why I am sure the author is a newcomer. As for the copies, they are all original, and except for the first one which is a bit immature, the following ones are pretty good. The various restrictions that exist in the plant world, Fire Forest Cave, and the water world, the secret realm of Qilin Lake, are all used very well. For example, the movement skills of others in the water are limited, the protagonist's movement skills obtained from Qinglong are just blessed, and restrictions such as the inconvenience of talking and connecting among casual cultivators are all used very well. And the protagonist's abilities don't feel out of the ordinary. Formation is really a panacea. There are also various large-scale cracks. I really admire the author's imagination. Even seemingly impossible problems can be solved in the end. They are logically self-consistent and are not forced to add drama. Also, after falling into death, the protagonist tried all kinds of life-and-death escapes, but he did not outwit the villain, but just used conspiracy to find a way out. For example, the plot after Huolin Dongtian came out, and the plot with Yinhunjian as the helm. The cleverness is really good. Finally, daily life and feelings, and the daily life of the fourth primary school are still online, which is quite interesting. The arrogant Da Ya, the showman Da Tou, the sensible Er Ya, the prophecy Emperor Xiao Wu, the cold and mature Senior Sister Zhuang, and the sister-next-door heroine, all the supporting roles are also distinguished by their personalities and intelligence. Of course there are many shortcomings. For example, the author likes to mess up things. Lin Niang in the front and Hua Jingshu in the back seem to be difficult to arrange. And if it's not the heroine, why did you write the female supporting character so well? I thought I was going to start a harem. Overall, the more I write, the better I get. The big map will be opened soon, author, come on. Both numbers have been booked, let's enjoy it.

This is the first time I have seen the status of the formation master being so low in the world of cultivating immortals... In the usual novels about cultivating immortals, which formation master is not worshiped by the sect as an ancestor...

Well, I looked at it a little bit. The hero saves the beauty, but he is weak and has no backer for the time being. He actually goes out to take risks.

Supporting role "Sword Comes" A sword fell from the sky? ? 😅😅🤭🤭 Protagonist: Hehehehe... The keyboard created by my formation can finally be illuminated? "Keys coming" Suddenly countless formation patterns appeared... And quickly formed into the buttons of the keyboard... The buttons automatically queued up to form the buttons of a standard keyboard while jumping... The light of the formation lines instantly extended from the buttons... Finally, it turned into a virtual keyboard that looked like it was built with countless lights... Is it an formation keyboard? ? ? Supporting character "This is your sword... Hehehe... It's not a formation... Look at the sword" Protagonist: Oh... Wait... Turn on my BGM first and say...? ? ? ...... If heaven had not given birth to me as a keyboard fairy, my keyboard would be as long as the night. ... I have a key to subdue demons, and I have a key to eliminate demons. …Fighting alone for three thousand years, he conquered the Nine Heavens with one click. ... All living beings in the world who practice Taoism must become my servants when they meet me. ... The top of the immortals, proud of the world, with my keyboard there is heaven! ... The key to the great road comes from the sky, and one key controls the world! ... When the chaos is shattered, use my immortal key to transform the heavens! Supporting character "This... You are equipped with B... But you still have to lose... Look at the sword...?" Protagonist: Hahaha... Look at my key skills... One click [F1] information... I know your personal data (Tianji Calculation Formation Group [Array Brain])? The second key [F2] is being cracked... Do you have the same momentum as me? ? ? Three keysF3 Four keysF4

Chapter 85 is a blast, and the plot is also very compact. There is no trace of deliberate digging and filling in holes. I even saw some holes that I forgot about and the author filled them in carefully. As a long-time reader, I really think it's okay. . It's just that the book warms up too slowly. . . Come on!

It's on the shelves today. As an external columnist, I feel free to write a book review. The plot is okay and the setting is okay, but I always feel that the description is a bit lacking. Maybe there are too few funny jokes and dramatic situations, and it is not interesting enough? It lacks a sense of communication and intimacy with the readers. After not reading the book for four or five days, I can't remember the appearance of this world of immortality and the image of the protagonist. Specifically, it can be regarded as a pre-reading tip for new readers: On the surface, this article should be a pan-technical article, but its core is still the traditional upgrade flow to cultivate immortality. Readers attracted by the title may prefer to see more hard-core explanations of procedures, creating the thrill of advanced versus primitive technology. But other plots, such as experiences, manifestations, etc., Are a bit mediocre - referring to the fact that compared with other works of the same period, there are many similar writings. In addition, so far, the technological advancement of the protagonist has been limited to the existing system of cultivating immortals, which is only the advancement of algorithms, but has not invented more weird and even surprising things that transcend the world view (such as trying to use formations to study chat groups?). Such a simple crushing will gradually lose interest in the eyes of book friends who do not understand algorithms and programmers. A geek like me may prefer technical details, but unless you write a super hard-core technical article like "Doctor Dawn" or "The Great Doctor Ling Ran", and write about technology with a sense of beauty, or even map it with responsibility and virtue, otherwise what can really attract readers and make readers feel pleasure is to embody the advancement of algorithms into something more specific such as "super-fast formation speed" - or something like a chat group that is absolutely beyond the existing worldview of cultivating immortals. This is "fun", it is the dramatic crushing pleasure that breaks the rules, rather than just making readers think that your story is no different from other time-travelers with a genius-starting style. What do you want to mainly describe, is the plot conflict? Or setting? Or everyday? Or is it a united story? In the end, what do you want to shape through these, is the world? Or the protagonist personally? Or something higher level? Which one is the key point? Which one do you use to attract people? Does this strategy have any advantages over other works? When your abilities are insufficient, should you focus on maintaining your own strengths, developing new strengths, or trying to cover everything? The author can think about these questions for himself, and I believe you have your own answers. But I still like it very much. I have long had the idea of ​​treating the black and white Tai Chi yin and yang as a binary arrangement. As the author, you were the first to write it, and you still did it in a hard-core way. Like. There are less people watching, so I can support you. I don't vote for the books I write anymore. I will give you the monthly vote and reward the first order by the way. Look, if you don't add some refinement to this, I'd like to think about it. Isn't it too interesting?

I feel that the author has written well. Although the writing is not strong enough, it is also an independent world of its own. It is not comparable to those novels that copy popular novels and have similar plots. Don't care about other people's malice or unintentional harm. Keep writing and make progress each book. Many famous authors started their careers by writing pornographic novels. You have already embarked on your own path. Whether you can reach the end depends on God's fate. People with great perseverance have to work hard on their own. In the past, some authors spent many times to get on the list, and then they formed a virtuous circle and got on the right track. Some authors relied on other small means. If you don't have enough strength, you have to resort to means. It is best to rely on strength to speak for itself and means to add to the cake. Take your time, some works are interactive with readers, and readers suggest getting on the right track. Come on, author!

First of all, thank you all for reading. This issue will be explained once in Chapter 60. The specific plot involved will be something to eat after the master is found. Secondly, this setting is a setting for the Immortal Sect, not the entire world. Bow and thank you again.

The author's book is a standard niche article. You will only like it if you are familiar with the brain waves.

The formation mage, the talisman mage, and the weapon refiner. These are high-level talents who are in short supply.

As a reader who has been following it from the beginning (I forgot whether I got it from Zhihu or where), I would like to sum up my feelings with a few neutral words: Tradition - refers to the plot mode Bland - refers to the plot interpretation Dislocation - refers to the plot elements In one of my very early book reviews (which can now be found in the book review area), I repeatedly talked about one of your settings as the author: programmers. Why did I talk about this then? Because I thought that this pan-tech setting was the core of this book. But I looked at it and found that it was not:The core of your book is to upgrade adventure and fight monsters. The setting of "programmer" is just a stepping stone for you to pave the way. I thought this was my mistake at first. I might have had expectations for reading farming articles, so I was misplaced. But then I took a closer look and found something wrong: even if the eight-bit algorithm binary programmer setting is just a stepping stone, it shouldn't be just a stepping stone. There is a difference between a stepping stone and a stepping stone. It should be different when the protagonist gets the system as a cheat and when he gets the Supreme Bone Heavenly Body as a cheat. But to be honest, if I take away Lin An's identity as a programmer and make him a mathematician, and then change the entire formation to talismans, and change the solution of Tianwen to solving the Mathematical Olympiad, then it will be exactly the same route of defeating monsters and upgrading... Then why should I look at you? Except for killing monsters and slapping faces, these two very traditional places, I can hardly find any highlights. Except for the dual-core part, which is indeed a feature, but you hardly emphasized this content later, causing this plot point to become a dispensable "stepping stone". Tradition itself is not a problem, not even vulgarity. Now that Kunlun Nine Heavens is online, how traditional are new media articles? You can still make money, there is no need to shy away from it. But the scary thing is Neither up nor down: I want to write something new, but I am stuck in the old framework; I write old stories, but I can't sink to the bottom. The author seems to be aware of it, just talk about rhythm. Unfortunately, this is not a matter of pace: if you fail to grasp the key points of the presentation at the beginning, even if you lay out the outline directly, it will still be a waste of food and a pity. What exactly is rhythm? Rhythm is the regular ups and downs of Internet articles that are refreshing. Then what is cool? The cool thing is that you highlight the things that readers expect. I believe you understand the above two sentences, but the author has missed the point. (Comment area continues below, text that is too long will be blocked)

After reading Chapter 22, I suddenly felt that the rhythm of the plot was a bit strange, but I couldn't put it into words. . .

It's already on the shelves, and I want to read a few more chapters until next month. . . Come on, give me a reward.

I want to know how the first batch of practitioners did it since Dao Fire is required to enter the Qi training stage.

This book can be used as food and fodder, please read more

Writing arrays for the sake of arrays is too extreme.

Very good, good-looking, monthly tickets are available

The emotional writing is really awkward~~ I like the subject matter, but the plot is a bit immature and not sophisticated enough~

The setting is good, but the reconstruction in the introduction is really disappointing. It feels like the author's poor control is a big mistake.

Author, I'm back again. I thought about it for a while. What kind of hero is asking questions? Solving problems is the skill. Written as I said before, the protagonist returns to the clan after pretending to be a b. Then you directly set the golden elixir named as the early mini-boss, and when you return to the sect, you start digging holes for the protagonist. You can probably write thirty chapters. Interspersed with some daily life in between, there are forty chapters. Then add a little plot about going down the mountain to complete the mission, Chapter 50 is no problem! Your writing style is not bad. If you use it a little bit, it won't bore Leeks (readers). If you write well, you might get rewards and monthly tickets. You can also compress the plot from fifty chapters to thirty. This is simply a rare conscientious author. Why don't you cry with gratitude? (Funny)? Even if some smart leek guesses your intention of lowering the number of words, you can use foreshadowing, digging holes and other reasons to excuse it, and even sigh at the author's talent! If there are still people who want to get to the bottom of the story and are still chasing after you, you will have no choice but to say that this plot is for the sect competition. If you don't write it like this, the follow-up cannot be developed. Then talk about the outline, the smoothness of the plot, and the character of the villain. Leek has a problem and doesn't know where to start, so I can only let you go. If the author sees it, please like it, thank you.

The writing is quite good, but it seems like a eunuch.

I really can't stand it any longer. It was pretty good at first, but now. . . . . I really can't stand it anymore. No one likes to watch pure upgrades and monsters, but you are going a bit too far! ! ! ! How many chapters have it been since this happened? I'm still practicing Qi. My friends are all golden elixirs, right? Your opponent must at least be a Nascent Soul Transformation God now. Do you want to keep writing like this and then ascend directly in the daytime? ? ? If I hadn't ordered it all before, I wouldn't have seen it here at all. I thought it would be better in the future, but it's still Qi training. It's hard to accept. In fact, the strength gap between each level is still very big in cultivating immortals. Others write that they are at the peak of Qi training and barely fighting for foundation building. When it comes to yours, your strength will explode. You, a person who has practiced Qi for decades, can beat a golden elixir that took hundreds of years to come out? ? ? I didn't think it was so powerful when I was watching it, but when I saw it after I came out, I'm not a zz. Is the formation so powerful? As long as the algorithm is used, there is no need for self-cultivation? Don't need soul power? What you wrote is not clear at all, hey. I especially like novels about cultivating immortals. As long as they have some characteristics and are not very poorly written, I will support them. I really can't support this book anymore. I feel like the author has failed in writing. You should start a new book. I read this book and there are no comments at the end. It should be a failure. You should write more books to practice. This book is really difficult to describe. It has hundreds of chapters and I haven't even touched on foundation building. The combat power is completely broken.

Um, the introduction says that the protagonist will be forced to practice training again, is it true?

Haha (ಡωಡ)hiahiahia didn't expect that the comment was posted just because he wanted to. Looking at the title of the book, I paid special attention to programmers. It is such a bald profession that I am scared to think about it. Before I read it, I was thinking about applying my programming knowledge to the post-travel world, but I didn't expect it to be really useful. It's amazing. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง