Blue Clouds and Rising Sun and Pines

Finished, scatter flowers! The most satisfying Zhu Xian fanfic I have ever read so far. The plot arrangement is reasonable and the text description is excellent. Especially the opening part about the scenery of Qingyun seems to make you immersed in the scene. There is no poisonous point in the whole book that ruins the original characters. The only drawback is that there is too little sugar in the plot. Not sweet enough, not sweet enough!

I have been following the author's books for a long time, and the book is considered to be the best among Zhu Xian's many fans. In this book, the protagonist and Baguio have experienced many things that Xiaofan and Baguio have experienced or not experienced in the original work, and have established a sincere relationship. Without the influence of Baguio, Xiaofan and Xueqi fell in love earlier. It can be said that the relationship is much more complete than the original work. The various actions of the protagonist also reflect the responsibility of righteousness, making all living beings in the book more real in the eyes of readers, and highlighting the word "xia" of Xianxia. With this kind of chivalry that the people of the world care about, the protagonist is not a lofty immortal cultivator, but a great chivalrous person who can benefit the people. Zhu Xian is a traditional fairy tale novel. I think its most important points are two points. One is the touching story of children in the world who dare to love and hate, and the long-term love between children. The other is the chivalry that is not afraid of sacrifice for the sake of the common people. This is also the reason why I like this book. As for the shortcomings, because of fan works, both the author and the reader hope to make up for the shortcomings of the original work, so the process and ending of the story are inevitably somewhat satisfactory. But chivalrous deeds always seem to require sacrifice. Thinking back to some outstanding works from the past, Jin Yong's Qiao Feng and Guo Jing, Xue Zhi and Yang Ning in Swordsman Three, Gu Lei in Purple River, Dunn in Lord of Mysteries, etc. Group, the sacrifices of these characters are particularly touching. Of course, I am not advising the author to take action. As a fan reader, I will never want to see my favorite characters encounter various misfortunes, and I believe other readers will not be willing to do so either. When I say this, I probably just think that this is an inevitable flaw in the fan work itself. However, it is not necessary to sacrifice touching things, but there are also excellent works with relatively happy processes and endings. I hope the author can make appropriate reference to make this book more moving. Finally, don't go under the knife after reading my book review! Don't cut the knife! Don't cut the knife! I don't want to be a sinner in the book club. 🤭

"Qing Yun Zhi Yang Tao" Type: Xianxia This book is a fan of "Zhu Xian", but my understanding of the book "Zhu Xian" is not thorough, I only know a rough idea. So this book is a new story for me. The male protagonist Feng Yi originally thought that he was a person from another world and could live freely and freely in this world, but he did not expect that the reality was so cruel. In this world, human life is like a piece of grass, and it is already very difficult to stay alive. Fortunately, Feng Yi met his master, a member of the Qingyun Sect. After following his master to Chaoyang Peak of Qingyun Gate, Feng Yi started his path of cultivation. The first few chapters are mainly foreshadowing, listing the main characters one by one, so that readers can distinguish the primary and secondary relationships between the characters. The words and sentences in this article are very meaningful, and the slightly slow tone of the sentences makes people calm down, as if they have forgotten all their worries and slowly integrated into the book. The table of contents in the book also reflects the author's rigorous use of words. The table of contents of each chapter is very neat. Opening this book and reading page by page gives you the feeling of reading a physical book. Each sentence makes people savor it carefully and read it slowly. Moreover, the scenes of spiritual practice and Taoism in it were very interesting to me, as if a scene from the book had emerged, and you were watching carefully and listening to their teachings. Although the slow pace and concrete text can make people feel like they don't know when and where they are, the slower pace also brings some minor flaws to the plot. However, it doesn't matter. Readers who can read it will naturally follow it, while those who don't like this style may not be able to read the first chapter. The charm of words is endless. Everyone's understanding is different, so there will naturally be disputes. But sometimes, you may not have to cater to the public, because you are the one who understands the story you write best. On the road to immortality, you can only walk it yourself, no one else can help you. In this world, discussing Taoism, cultivating immortality, and feeling the great road, why not be happy!

The book is overall very good, I haven't seen such an original fanfic in a long time. However, the protagonist feels a bit unmodern to me. For example, regarding "good and evil", his perspective is limited to the style of ancient knights. What are the productive forces and production relations, the economic base and superstructure. Not at all. Of course... This does not mean that the author should write this. But I still hope that the protagonist in the author's works has a higher vision and is worthy of his "discernibility"

😁😁😁Author, your protagonist's character is not good enough. It doesn't feel distinct enough. Look at Xiao Ding's Xiao Fan, who is forbearing and honest, and Su Wenrou, who is impatient and impatient. They are all very vivid.

It's a very good Zhu Xian article. The author adds his own understanding on the basis of Zhu Xian. It can be said that it is Zhu Xian in the author's own heart. My feeling when reading this book is completely different from Zhu Xian's. Come on!

The writing style is quite close to that of Zhu Xian, and the description of the scenery is also relatively good. It reads more smoothly than the previous books and is not too brain-burning. Sometimes the fighting part is a bit lengthy, Shutu can appropriately streamline the non-important fighting descriptions; in the fighting, you can also appropriately refer to the formation runes in the previous book, etc. Perhaps Chaoyang swordsmanship is outstanding. A martial arts writer on this site named "Sou Jian Dao Ji" fights The craftsmanship is quite excellent, and I look forward to learning from it when Shu Tu is updated steadily~ The plot setting is understandable, and I hope that if possible, there will be some descriptions of cultivation, questioning, and even supernatural classics and folklore in addition to the main plot. Due to the previous book, this book chooses Baguio as the single heroine. The structure is grand and it also gives a glimpse of the brighter future for Baguio, Xiaofan and Xueqi. I hope Shutu can calm down and develop your settings and plot. Don't be afraid of slow updates or few updates. I hope Shu Tu will finish Chaoyang's story well. Finally, it is difficult to reconcile the opinions of all, and it is better to have no books than to believe in books. The first signed book may not satisfy everyone, but you must keep writing it and craft it carefully, so that at least you will have no regrets~٩(๑•ㅂ•)۶

The author's writing level is very high, and it has the charm of the original work. In particular, the details are described very well, and the protagonist will not be given endless cheats just for the sake of fun. Especially the setting of identifying obstacles in the opening chapter is very innovative. The only fly in the ointment is that it's not enough to read. I personally feel that this fanfic is better than The Demonic Immortal Asks the Heart. I'm really looking forward to the author's update.

This is the best fan work I've seen so far

Comment - Qingyun Zhichaoyang Songtao Tell me some opinions about this book~If there is anything wrong, please feel free to comment~ This is a fanfic of Zhu Xian. It is my first time to come into contact with this genre, so I don't know much about it. The author has made a lot of foreshadowing, which is also more interesting, and the priorities are clear. For example, the process of Shang Zhengliang accepting him as his disciple is not written in detail, but it is mentioned in the article what needs to be written and what does not. This is a point that I personally think is very good. At the same time, the atmosphere rendering in the text is also very good. There is another point that I personally like: the title corresponds to the content of the chapter. It can be said that the title summarizes the theme of the chapter Simple, clear and clear at a glance. The book as a whole is a slow novel. The protagonist Feng Yi practices and grows step by step. In the process, he gets to know the heroine Baguio. The emotional line is also described in more detail Let us see the cruelty of the world, but at the same time we also see Feng Yi's ambition. In the process of continuous growth, he gains love. It explains that what is the right way and what is evil is a question that has existed since ancient times, and it will also allow us to get a new answer through Feng Yi's story. The description is remarkable and I personally think it is worth reading. If we want to talk about the shortcomings, it feels like some battles and some parts have too many plots. Maybe it's because I personally don't like to watch too many of them. I prefer details, emotional lines, and plots.

Feng Yi's soul awakened in another world. He originally thought that when he came to the ancient times, he would be a fast horse with light fur, or in front of flowers and under the moon, love and hate, but when he came, he discovered that human life is like grass, and the fate of the world is the most difficult to understand. Fortunately, he got the favor of a higher person, and began to live a legendary life, and his story happened But Feng Yi finally let go, both for the past life and for this life. The place where he feels at ease is his hometown - Qingyun Mountain. Here, he will realize the ups and downs of the world What is good and what is evil, Feng will give himself an answer. He will understand even more what he is pursuing and wanting. What is Tao? The Tao pursued by cultivators, the Tao of self-cultivation, must be high and low, and the failure and frustration caused by the latter But cultivating immortals is to go against heaven, so people also have a destiny, but they can control their destiny in their own hands.

The protagonist's understanding of the world of Zhu Xian is still too one-sided. If you want to achieve universal harmony, you have to see whether the so-called righteousness and the holy religion have the capital to manage the world. The two paths of good and evil are two religions. But even in the European Middle Ages where religious authority was supreme, the real practice of gj rule was the secular kingship. In addition, there is a government in the world of Zhu Xian. According to the official view, the good and the evil are all illegal armed forces that refuse to accept enlightenment.

——Ming Yue Jian's thoughts Feng also came to Qingyun Peak, and here, he told the master that although he couldn't understand why he fell into the master's eyes, but since he had received the master's kindness, he would definitely move forward with all his strength and fulfill your long-cherished wish to revitalize Chaoyang, Mingyue can learn from it! While Feng Yi was practicing, he was still unable to enter samadhi because he was a soul from another world and had many distracting thoughts every time he entered samadhi. Feng Yi doubted whether he could practice, and others also questioned whether the master had made a mistake. Fortunately, it turns out that Feng also has a barrier of consciousness, and his state of mind does not match his qualifications Then he must improve his qualifications Practice in the world must improve his state of mind. Regardless of Taoism, Buddhism, or demons, although they each have their own path, but when they practice to the deepest level, they are generally similar. As for the "state of mind" requirements, these three companies cannot avoid it no matter what. It's just that demonic teachings come from the heart, and most of them follow the heart and nature, and are completely understood by the practitioners themselves. Unlike Taoism and Buddhism, which have a long history, each has its own magic method for improving the state of mind. When encountering "obstacles of consciousness" during practice, although the noun has "obstacle", it means "obstacle". But no matter who encounters it, they will happily think it is a chance, because most of the time "obstacles in consciousness" arise from a lifetime of accumulation or a moment of enlightenment. Feng Yi encountered "obstacles of knowledge" when he first started practicing Buddhism, which was really unusual. At the same time, it also explains why Shang Zhengliang accepted him as his disciple. Feng Yi was precociously intelligent and had a strong mind. Although he is young and weak in strength, he is so strong and mature even as a beggar that it is unbelievable to believe that he still has such a good spiritual foundation! There was no chance that fell from the sky. Shang Zhengliang accepted Feng Yi as his disciple. It was Feng Yi's own qualifications and character, and he was also lucky. He happened to meet Shang Zhengliang and was accepted as his disciple And Shang Zhengliang met Feng Yi. It was not a blessing. Feng Yi would realize his long-cherished wish to revitalize Chaoyang in the future.

It's a Zhuxian fanfic that's more about food and grass. It's very comfortable. Small flaws don't affect it. It's not the original work. No matter how you write it, some people say it's wrong. Come on, author (ง •̀_•́)ง.

Great book 📖, it's been a long time since I read a book in one go to catch up with newer ones. I really like the character of the protagonist.

It's best if you don't have a golden finger. Many people say how you can win over others without a golden finger. Isn't there a saying that knowledge changes destiny? I hope the protagonist becomes stronger through practice and knowledge! I really like watching the plot of practicing and thinking about the future!

The heroine Baguio is also very good. Zhang Xiaofan and Lu Xueqi are also very good without so many difficulties. I also like the author's interaction between them. I posted this post because there are always people who point out the plot. I think if the plot is written out and the logic breaks down, you can complain. The author buried the thread and didn't write it out yet. There are so many people who want this and that. Is it interesting? Readers trying to dictate what the author should write is a disease that needs to be cured as soon as possible. Sometimes the author has an outline and ideas, and you criticize the author and change the next ten chapters. By chapter 20, you don't know how to write it. Your ideas are different from those at the beginning and you don't want to write it anymore. Are you responsible for continuing to write it? If you have more ideas, it's better to write them yourself. Don't always boss the author around.

Let's play Idiom Solitaire I first: The sun is rising

It's a pity that I am a Xueqi fan and don't watch Baguio's.

What I don't like the most is authors whose chapter names always have seven characters. They think they rhyme, and I think they are pretentious.

Society I am rolling

The protagonist doesn't look like the same person before and after going down the mountain. After being wise and reading the Bible for five years, he solved the obstacles of discernment. However, when he goes down the mountain, his performance is completely stunned.

This book started to fall apart from the experience of going down the mountain after the competition. It feels like you have cultivated your mind to the point of losing your mind.

Overall, the book is quite good! But there are a few things that make me feel more and more frustrated. The protagonist knows the plot and lets it develop, especially the major events that are detrimental to Qingyun. Although there are some factors that are understated, it still feels too far-fetched. In addition, the plot too follows Zhu Xian and does not have its own characteristics.        ，，， The cultivation concepts, techniques and ways of life of the decent and demonic sects are incompatible with each other, and many of them have a deep hatred. If the two of them are together, it's okay if the protagonist is just two people enjoying themselves. But the protagonist wants to be the leader, lead the righteous sect, and create a new order. Together with Baguio, not to mention the demon sect, even the leader of Qingyun is not reasonable!

The protagonist obviously wants Qingyun to go all the way. It is impossible for Baguio to be the first lady. So, choose Lu Xueqi😃

I read the beginning and the end, and it was written about the Baguio heroine... What a pity. The writing is good, but I really don't like the heroine Baguio, a disciple of the Qingyun Sect, so I can only wait for the author's next book.

There was a lot of party fighting back then, but the key to Zhu Xian's popularity was that the two popular heroines both liked Zhang Xiaofan. You, my colleague, are actually retreating before you advance? If you only take one scoop, what will happen to the fans of the other scoop? Isn't the author chasing people away? Having a single female host is really a bad move.

I just read about twenty chapters, and the more I read, the weirder the protagonist becomes. Then I realized that this fucking aboriginal is not a time traveler at all. How can I say that the more I read, the weirder it gets.

I feel that the emotional description of the relationship between Baguio and Baguio in this book is really a bit negative, which affects the perception. There could be a female protagonist, but the emotional description is really a bit embarrassing 😅

The division of realms in Tai Chi, Xuan Qing Dao