The General's Sickly Beauty Is Ruined Again

The overall length of the novel is too long, and there is no main line. The story that could have been written in one or two hundred chapters was ended up in more than 900 chapters, and the writing style is relatively simple. It started to go downhill from more than 200 chapters, and the story setting has begun to deviate. This is just an ancient saying that wears the setting of the book. As a modern person, although many things are not known, the way of thinking and logical relationships are always different from those of ancient people. Moreover, I learned the etiquette of the ancients as soon as I passed through the book and had no memory. No matter how much I think about it, I really don't think that the setting of the passing through the book is not too necessary. You can just write an ancient poem like this. The setting of the passing through the book here will make the writing style very white.

The writing is not good. I couldn't stand it after reading dozens of chapters. It's a bit watery.

To be honest, the writing style is a bit bad, so I dismissed it in a second 😭

I came from Douyin, and it took me more than 500 minutes to read this book. The whole book has a slow and steady rhythm, and the article is also very warm. The love between the male and female protagonists also made me admire them very much. In short, this article is really good. The author's writing style is very good. Sisters, you can calm down and read it carefully. It's really good.

Three seconds ago, I was on TikTok. Two seconds ago, I was in the app store. A second ago, I was in the search box. In this second, I am here. Hahaha, I'm going to start watching 😁😁😁

The tweet on Douyin... I'm speechless 😊. It's not as good-looking as I imagined. Like most articles, it has no highlights. It's better than a running account... Abandoned the article.

There is a saying that there are more than 1,900 chapters, which I didn't expect. It's too many.

Recommended from Douyin, to be honest it's really good! ! ! !

I feel like the book here is really well written and very warm. Why is no one reading it? 😥 I feel like the author is a bit miserable.

In fact, we don't necessarily have to look at appearance. Looking at the plot and character design, we can directly slander Mary Sue who is skinny and skinny, but this is really not the case. How can a general have thin skin and tender flesh, so he goes up to die in such a polite way? Even if there is, it's just an individual case. The male protagonist is just a bandit from the beginning.

If this novel is made into a TV series, I will automatically replace the heroine's appearance as Wang Churan, and Luo Yunchuan will be replaced by Bai Lu. . . . Mmmmm perfect! Hahaha

I have finished reading it. The novel is very long, and more of it is about life after marriage and having children. Some people may not like to read it. It's not a vigorous love story, but a story of a long-term friendship that lasts until old age. It's also not a heroine. After getting married, she focuses on her children. When she goes shopping, she buys things for her family. She obviously has the brains but is willing to stay behind the scenes. These are some obscure points. Sweet pet novel, nothing surprising to me. Overall, the plot is a bit slow, the logic is weak, and the focus is not highlighted. It can be seen that it wants to express a lot of things, maybe it is the feelings of family and country? But I feel that it is not sublimated and the writing is too bland. And the appearance of many people seems to have no meaning at all and has no impact on the development of the plot. For example, Miss Xie in the back only appeared in a few chapters and had no results. Enter with caution

I got it from Douyin. After reading it, I think it's pretty good. Each has his or her own opinion. It's not abusive at all. It's my favorite type. It's not like popular romance novels. The heroine and the original heroine have become good friends. Overall, it's OK. It's not like mindless romance novels. If you are short of books, you can read it. The family and friendship in it are an enviable kind. I like it.

I can be ugly, but the male protagonist of the novel I am reading must not be ugly I can not have seen the world, but the male protagonist of the novel I am reading must not have seen the world I can be incompetent, but the male protagonist of the novel I am reading must be powerful, so I gave up.

I came from Douyin, but I didn't like the ugly male lead, so I quit 5555

The writing is terrible. Douyin bullies me

From Douyin, the female protagonist and the male protagonist are like brainless, just for the sake of sweetness, abandoned by industrial saccharine 😒😒

Sister's writing is so good~~ Highly recommended~~! !

It looks great, but no one is watching it

So why is it that there are only six days left of the seven-day free period, but you can't watch it as soon as you wake up? Are you trying to download it? 🙂

I heard that a person's name can also affect a person's fortune. My nickname is Jiao, so I often get sick. My younger brother's nickname is Zhuang. He has been healthy and never got sick since he was a child. My daughter, whose nickname is Ranran, is also very healthy and rarely gets sick all year round.

It can only be said that the early stage and the introduction are very attractive, but in the middle stage it becomes very dull and boring. At more than 700 chapters, the heroine's best friend even appears and wants to seduce the hero. I don't understand and I am really speechless.

In ancient times, it wasn't said that men and women should be on guard against each other. If you can't stand it, just hug it.

Sure enough, the most beautiful things are all in Douyin's copywriting,

How to say it? The descriptions in the first dozen chapters made me want to give up. Could the ancient defense system between men and women not allow a heroine to beg for a hug from a hero whom she had just met a few times in public, and the original hero was so vicious and scumbag that he actually ascended to the throne? ? ! His son later married the heroine's daughter and unified the world! Moreover, the later heroine felt a little bit bully. She thought her former maid had betrayed the hero's brother and cuckolded him when he went to fight, so she took the maid to live in the general's mansion. Later, when the hero's brother came back, she bluntly said that he would not touch her maid in the slightest. Hmm... It is understandable to protect oneself, but not to protect the law. Think about it if the brother was replaced by her good sister, wouldn't she be in trouble? ? ? ! And the middle-aged heroine in the back also made me feel a little uncomfortable. I can't explain why. It seems that the son should be filial and close, but he only sees more than respect. Instead, he is very doting on her daughter. Her daughter should not grow up to be a brother who comes home from the war but first cares about whether he has brought gifts for himself.

The writing style is too immature, not suitable for old readers, but suitable for new readers.

It's the kind of text that's easy to read, but the more than 900 chapters were too challenging for me. 😁 When I saw the general take the beauty, my aunt laughed throughout the whole process. I completed my mission.

I like this couple very much. Pure love without many twists and turns. This is the best novel I have read this year. I like it very much. I also hope that I can meet my "general" who treats each other sincerely. I have collected it.

TikTok came over 😌😌😌

There are thousands of novels in the world, but only the introduction is the best I came back from Douyin. I read these newspapers. The first part is okay. The more I read, the more speechless I am. The male protagonist can't help but fall in love with the female protagonist at one glance.